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By : mehmeh
  • From ANON - gothic_marshmallow on February 06, 2005
    ommmmmggg that was hot! kyuubi on naru action, yay!!! can't wait to see what naru's gonna do sasuke now >:D take kyuubi's sex advice, naruto!! he's a sex god! X3

    you rock keep the story up!!! YAAAAAY I IMPATIENTLY WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!! :D
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  • From ANON - random ghost on February 06, 2005
    *drool* Kyubi's so naughty! ^_^ very nice chapter! i wonder what kyubi did to sakura....please update again soon!
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  • From ANON - Scottishfae on February 06, 2005
    I love all the twists you put in your story. It's like you think you know whats going on and then you add omsething else in there that just completely grabs you! I'm like, going to jump through the monitor and hug you, I swear. Greatnss. I'm a bit hysterical right now, I have a paper due tmr and I just lost half of it due to a computer malfunction and so to calm myself down some I read your story, and I'm so happy and I loved it but now I'm bad to hysterics. But for the time I was reading your work, I was happy and that is all that matters! So, the Sakura doll? Voodoo? I tried to do Voodoo (or is Vodoo? oh well, I can't spell) once, i failed miserably, oh well, probably better that I failed. Well, a wonderful chapter! I can't wait for the next one...!

    Until Next Time...

    Scottishfae
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  • From ANON - Bella8618 on February 02, 2005
    Brilliant plot. Its rare to see a SasuNaru story with so much angst.. but to tell u the truth.. I LOVE it..lol. I admit, u have got me hooked.. when i should be finishing up work.. * throws kyuubi plushies ..so next chapter will come out soon* =^_^=
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  • From ANON - Youmahime on February 01, 2005
    Awww... I'm such a perv... It's no small wonder I always get Jiraiya in character tests...:sigh: I really hope that you update this soon. It's really good.
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  • From TenshiKaitou on January 30, 2005
    omg, omg, i think i'm going to hyperventilate now...argh, agony, i can't breathe! the blood is rushing to my head. a major nosebleed alert! ack, goodness. this is is fabulously hot or what! i love your fic to bits. REALLY! I even have your story added to my Recommended Section. And be very honoured, you are one of the two writers whose story i acknowledged for! well done. before i go, may i ask for a request? that is to update soon!!! XD
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  • From ANON - gothic_marshmallow on January 28, 2005
    omg... so hot...!! *nosebleeds* kekeke, just what i needed! go naruto, go, get that sasuke! make him beg for you!! omg i hope the story gets to that point XD an uke sasuke is a good sasuke!

    and on the whole pairing thing, i think it would be a sasunarusasu... since they're both dominating. :D yay! keep going, you rock! XD
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  • From ANON - Ryuukotsusei on January 28, 2005
    This chapter was soooooo hot and... YUMMY! O_o Yeah, I know, weird choice of words! For someone who hasn't written in 2 years (I read some of the other responses to other reviewers) you are doing VERY WELL! And I know just what you mean about looking back on past fics and telling yourself "God, what was I thinking?" HA!

    Anyway, you seem to be good with sex scenes ao I can't wait to see what you can REALLY do! Such skill An I also can't wait to see Naruto "bowing to Sasuke" and Kakashi's reaction when he fins out - if he finds out! Out of a 10 I give you a 12!

    You go girl!
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  • From ANON - Yami-hikari on January 27, 2005
    Eeep! More, please more! I'm really loving this fic! I really like the Kyuubi/Naruto bits, I've never read any before, but it really seems to work... plus jealous Sasuke is a wonderful thing to behold.
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  • From ANON - dragonkitty on January 26, 2005
    Well I must say that was some chapter. I love how you did the sneaky Naruto, but you didn't hint at it to the readers.
    For a while I thought that Naruto forgot to seduce Sasuke. And speaking of Sasuke o.o....
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  • From ANON - Lady on January 26, 2005
    Shit that was hot. Probably shouldn't be reading this at work, heh heh*crosses legs* I'm definitely looking forward to more! Please oh please tell me Sassy will give Naruto a spanking in the future and dress him up in something slutty*big, pleading eyes*
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  • From ANON - Rainbird on January 26, 2005
    Wow...I like how that turned out. Naruto did well ^___^ Keep writing!
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  • From ANON - just me on January 25, 2005
    wow...its so so cool please update soon...i wanna know what happens with Naruto and Sasuke
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on January 25, 2005
    yessah! w00t! this chapter was awesome! thank you for updating so fast! and dont worry about slow updating. the way you've been updating, i doubt it will really be that slow! omg! sasuke is totally falling into naruto's trap! *squeals* god i love you fic! see ya next chapter!
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  • From ANON - silverlook on January 25, 2005
    I love the way this story is going-the sasu master deel. let Naruto play dominance with Sasuke for more 2-3 chapters (SasuNaru !! ^^ !! )
    You use the perffect amont of angest (or is it wirdnes?? ) just dont make it too angsty plz!
    All in all, I love this story (make a good end?...plz?...o.o )
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