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Reviews for Control

By : mehmeh
  • From ANON - kayoko on February 17, 2005
    I read it over again and i liked the changes you made, only a few, but I think they were good changes.

    It seems like everyone likes the kakashi scene as much as I do. *grins* i've read this chapter 3 times and I still can't stop grinning when I read the part where Naru-chan corners Kakashi and offers a bj. *sighs happily*

    ah..hm...nothing else to say. ^_^

    thank you!
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on February 17, 2005
    Man...Naruto getting the hang of being a 'sinful demon'. I love the idea of using voodoo dolls. Maybe he should make an Orochimaru version...it would save everyone a lot of trouble. UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - just me on February 17, 2005
    up date soon...more i need more
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  • From ANON - Ayako on February 17, 2005
    The more I read of this fic, the more I realize how much I like Naruto as a slutty!uke. XD It's intriguing...And I do like seeing him question Kakashi that way (well, I didn't think about the blowjob thing XD) because yeah, I've always wanted to know what kind of response Kakashi would give. Because honestly, Naruto's right. Kakashi knows a lot of techniques. He should be able to teach his students something regardless of whether or not they have the Sharingan.

    What a lovely, albeit disturbing fic. *_*
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on February 17, 2005
    wow. you're planning to have me review every chapter for this fic, aren't you? *looks around suspiciously* well, it's working and let me tell you. after reading this, there is no way in hell that i am gonna get any sleep now. a naruto acting slutty and hitting on a unsuspecting kakashi will do that to ya. i am a big sucker for kakanaru..... get it..... SUCKER *waggles her eyebrows* oh yeah, you get it ^__^ *rereads the chapter* HAH!! the kyuubi broke sakura's leg. that sexy beast. i cant wait to see what else he's got planned. thanks for the kiss, btw. *gives you some pain meds for your lips* dont worry, you'll have that kyuubi eating right out of your palm in no time. meanwhile, make sure you sneak in some kyuubiXnaru scenes in the next chapter. so until then, ja ne!

    “I promise I’ll swallow.” ROTFL!!!!



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  • From ANON - akuma_river on February 17, 2005
    coolsa.
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  • From ANON - jamie on February 17, 2005
    maybe i'm weird... but i rather liked the naruto/kakasi scene... in that--- really, naruto deserves to complain now and then... great story!
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  • From ANON - ayonoi on February 17, 2005
    You are so good to me. I was thinking today how much I would like to read a new chapter of Control and lo and behold, here it is.

    Awesomeness, I liked the tenseness of Kakashi and Naruto's meeting. Naruto is not taking shit from anyone, about time XD. And goth, that backing Kakashi against the wall was hot, Kakashi might have been pissed off but he was a little affected. I don't feel bad for what Naruto said plus he is right, he should ask Sasuke what is going on between him and Naruto. How easy to go to Naruto, he will say everything. It sadly knows he is missing a little of what Naruto is.

    Thanks for your previous comments. I can't wait to see what happens between Sasuke and Naruto because both of them are dying to know XD.

    Keep it up, can't wait to see the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - celticfx on February 17, 2005
    Since you took the time to write out an individual response to my comments last chapter *gushes* i'll take the time to review again! I'm so glad you've updated and loved the chapter even without more SasuNaru. I really like how you've characterized Naruto. It's nice to see him act with firmer resolution toward what HE wants. He's been stepped on for too long and I love seeing him get even. It was also interesting to see Sasuke overhear Tsunade's conversation about Naruto. It'll be fun to see how that plays out in later chapters. Also, OOC Naruto was a nice touch at the end of the chapter and I'm dying to hear why he was acting like that! (I'm guessing it has to do with Kyuubi...) Either way I'm starting to rant, so, please update soon! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Juli on February 17, 2005
    Wow! First Dattebayo releases episode 122, and then I come here to see this updated! What a great night this is turning out to be~! Wonderful chapter, as per usual. That scene with Kakashi... phew. So hot. ;3
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  • From ANON - harukakatana on February 17, 2005
    zomg. That was incredibly hot. ^^;;;;; Especially the whole Narutoseuctionofkakashi thing. ^_~ Rawr
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  • From ANON - Yami-hikari on February 16, 2005
    I did enjoy it VERY much. I love your Kyuubi/Naruto bits :)
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  • From ANON - Kirsch on February 12, 2005
    *thinks* It's so difficult for me to think about what to write, so I'll just say some random stuff that pops to mind -
    sadistic-bastard-Sasuke is very sexy...!! Yeah, forget the sappy lovelove 'i love you sasuke, take me now' shite... sadistic is good... ehe~ is it cruel to want the characters I like to be hurt and humiliated...? But someone mentioned KakaNaru? There's never enough KakaNaru, and you would write it so well I think. And was the mention of Shikamaru a hint to anything? Never enough of that pairing either... *sudden image of Naruto orgy, kagebunshin and all* Uwa~ >
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  • From ANON - Ryuukotsusei on February 10, 2005
    Oh my! I can just imagine Naru-chan sucking Sasuke OFF! The
    mental
    image! And I am about to do a multi-chapter smut fic between Sasu+Naru too! Hmm, I wonder if Naruto will let our dear kitsune Kyuubi take over fully when he has Sasuk any time. And as for Kakashi, I think it would be fun to have him... 'teach' Naruto and Sasuke how to do those naughty things. And, unlike Kyuubi, I'm sure he'd love 'teaching' them physically! That would be so much fun! And he is a little perverted!

    How mwny yaoi fics have you done? For someone just getting into yaoi you sure are doing well! Keep it up you wonderful hentai you!
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  • From TenshiKaitou on February 10, 2005
    glad ya are happy. so write me more then? onegai?
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