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By : mehmeh
  • From ANON - kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in) on February 18, 2005
    i think naru-chan is playing a nice-ass mind game. am i right? i do the same on certain people^_^V
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  • From ANON - Suicidal Skies on February 18, 2005
    It's the never ending Tia! Wheee!

    You're improving and it's showing. Naruto is starting to embrace is seductiveness and the "evilness" You're strumming this along nicely.

    And no need to thank meh, and hehe, you earned it O.O It's beautiful. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Jadetiger on February 18, 2005
    When waiting got a good fic to update, it can never be soon enough! Another exelent chapter. and i love how naruto's personality is changing! this is really starting to get suspeniceful(is that a word?). lol poor confused kakashi!

    YA HO!! VOODIO!!

    and on a side note, if you download naruot you'll have noticed that its been licensed... you have any idea where i can countinue downloading it??
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on February 18, 2005
    omg! thank you so much for updating! this chapter was fscking amazing! that was so hot at the end with kakashi and naruto! gah! this fic is beyond the coolest! i love you soooo much for updating! please update the next chapter fast!!!
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  • From ANON - rainbird on February 18, 2005
    I like how this story actually has a plot....it makes the story better. ^_^
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  • From ANON - gothic_marshmallow on February 18, 2005

    gah my last review was crapped up (parts got cut out and stuff! hmph). so you get another one! :D

    *grabs sakura voodoo doll and needles* *runs off* BWAHAHAH *stabbing sounds are heard*

    *runs back*

    omg the narukaka... craziness!!! ommmmggg *nosebleeds* and i dont even care for that pairing! you are a MASSSTAAAH!! XD

    i was surprised kakashi was able to resist naruto's advances! jeez, with his nose stuck in a pervy book all the time, i'd think he'd welcome the blowjob. o_o XD;; but i guess that proves he's a good teacher! he doesn't screw his students... wow that's a low standard. XD;

    OMG SASUNARU HOT AND SMEXY SCENE NEXT CHAPTER... please? :D its my DRUG... *eyes spin*

    everyones gotta love the kyuubi. i dunno what those lil kids are thinking. that kyuubi's a supah sexxxay manipulative beast!! >:DD

    now for some subliminal messages: 123SASUNARU456SEX789SCENE101112YAY!!!

    *hands blahblah candy and roses* i love you for the new chapter! :D KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!! *run!tackle!glomp!* :D

    (turns out the review thing picks up html stuff! o_o so my last review was missing the stuff i put in! sorry gahhh)


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  • From ANON - gothic_marshmallow on February 18, 2005

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  • From ANON - Gitona on February 18, 2005
    Oh my God......O_O...must have more!I am so enjoying this with my sadistic sick mind.Oh huu huu that was good.Mmm..I bet Naruto looks hot saying all that shit to Kakashi. X3 Damn I must say Sasuke is a bitch in here man.Usually I can predict if the ending to a story is goin to end up sad or happy etc but hmm..on this one im slightly lost and to that I must tip my hat!*tips hat devishly* Heh.Please update soon.I must read moe of this.I wish you would email me when you do update but you dont have to.....*puppy dog eyes*...I mean..im just a perverted rabid-fan girl after alll....*mischeviouos grin*..Heh.
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  • From ANON - michirukoshi on February 17, 2005
    Ahh..Another chapter..
    Another wonderful way to retain a nosebleed. *lol*
    Your writing is wonderful..simplistic, yet indepth. I love how you
    personified the fox, and his negotiations with naruto! ^.^
    I cannot wait for the next chapters! Keep up the fantastic work,ne? :D
    Loove!
    ~michi~
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  • From YaoiloverS on February 17, 2005
    Oh my god! This story is soooooogood! I love the smutness and how Naruto acts! Sasuke should call him cum slut! lol I can't wait until next chapter! ^o^v
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  • From ANON - MultifacetedTune on February 17, 2005
    O.O ...Duuuuude, that was awesome!!! Narute is soooooo kewl when he's pissed!!! Heh...poor Kakashi...or maybe he's lucky........ ^___~ I'm glad that you have chosen to portray Naru-kun this way...sick and tired of the unfair treatment and finally deciding to do something about it, I mean. Makes him appear very realistic.....and with Kyuubi thrown into the mix, deep as well! ^___^ I can't wait to find out what happens!!! Here: *gives you a pen, paper, and chocolates* ...the chocolates are to thank you for updating and to help inspire your creativity.........Ahh, the power of chocolate!!! (And yes, that was corney as hell....sorry.....chocolate depraved....) ^___~ Keep up the good work, and update ASAP!!! Oh, and I'm glad you like my screen-name......there's a story behind it, if you're interested..... *shrugs* Ja ne!!!
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  • From ANON - Kirsch on February 17, 2005
    Mufufufufu... that last part... "I promise I'll swallow..." I was just getting these great mental images of KakaNaru smut ^^ Mmmm, Naruto-chan's mouth is so cute *^ ^* This chapter was like the set up for smut to come in the next chapter, I hope. Uwaa~ what about some 3-way action with Kakashi and his 2 students now that Sakura is out of commission... *stuffs tissues up nose* Excuse me, I'm getting carried away. Can't wait to see how this turns out, thank you for making my boring day of packing bags a little more interesting ^^
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  • From ANON - Ezj on February 17, 2005
    ^_^... Since I don't have anything inteigent to say more
    than... cool story... thats all I say. -_-;;
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  • From ANON - Puchu on February 17, 2005
    mooooorrre~! *dies*

    great fic. and Naruto is PMSy~! j/k.

    anyways, I love this fic~! please keep up the good work! and I beg of you: do it soon, nee?

    gawd, don't you hate those impatient, annoying fangirls? XD ^^;
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  • From ANON - TenshiKaitou on February 17, 2005
    WOOT! That NaruKaka part was sure one nice bonus! Can ya add in that pairing too? ne ne? Onegai? (sparkly puppy eyes)
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