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Reviews for Control

By : mehmeh
  • From ANON - Gitona on March 20, 2005
    Oh oh yes!Finally..This chapt. was great..though no sex..XD...Its ok about not emailing..I check here alot anyways X3..I will always be a rabid fan girl!>^^> Update now biiatch! >D
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  • From ANON - darkangel on March 20, 2005
    DAZZ RITE SASUKE, FUCK DAT WHORE. *grabs naruto and ties him up*

    *cough* got a bit carried away. lol, hopefully some........steamy...action coming up??? *wink*
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  • From ANON - gothic_marshmallow on March 19, 2005
    wow... just wow. XD just cool craziness!! i love how naruto's becoming more and more evil. it's so sexy XDD hmmm... maybe he should punish sasuke for being a stuck-up bastard? *hands naruto whips and chains* *gringrin*

    good job ommmmg. keep going keep going D:
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  • From ANON - kai on March 19, 2005
    great update!! i love the last line!! made me laugh!! udpate soon!
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  • From ANON - Kurisupi on March 18, 2005
    I shall let THIS be know first... I generaly find fanfics so supremely iritating that i want to murder the writer in a fit if my highest unamusement. You, my dear friend, deserve no such punishment. You kept me highly entertained, and made me want to jump into Kyubi-sama's brain... kukuku... I really love your story, please write moe. (you have my permission XD ) Ah! Have you ever read the Michael Moorcock Elric series? (old fantasy tragic hero novels) Kyubi is reminding me more and more of Arioch, the Duke of Chaos. I'm in love with his personality. You're doing very well, please keep up the hard work!
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  • From ANON - kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in) on March 17, 2005
    i can't wait to see what naruto does next. i love your story and i hope you keep on writing^_^V
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on March 17, 2005
    ahhhhh. the delicious ebil-ness that is naruto. ^__^ i absolutely heart this story. it has this wonderful angsty feel about it and is so beautifully twisted. i just cant wait to read more :coughs: sasuke torture :coughs: of the story.
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  • From ANON - darkangel on March 17, 2005
    i swear, da only good thing about not getting daily updates is dat i won't die from excessive nosebleed. it's so cute..............in a very twisted, fucked-up way. and although, naruto's..............slightly........a lil out of character........but i like him dis way......in fact, it's quite weird how he can be OOC but still has that naruto canon character feel. neway, i love your story. i love your writing. i love everything about this fanfic. please update soon.........i've heard dat daily nosebleeds are good for u............somehow..........................please?
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  • From ANON - TenshiKaitou on March 17, 2005
    goodness gracious. this get more twisted everytime i read it, and i absolutely love it to bits. an evil and scheming Naruto is just so appealing, so please update soon.
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  • From ANON - maya on March 17, 2005
    Heheheheeh. That last chapter was brilliant. It seems it's Naruto now, who's gaining control!
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  • From ANON - rainbird on March 17, 2005
    Evil, evil Naruto. I love how this is turning out. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Deathwalker on March 17, 2005
    hahahahahahahaha......I should not be reading this....should be doing homework....but....alas I am not....... GOOOOOOOO Narato?

    How many guys do you think read yaoi and aren't gay? *Rolls eyes in denial*
    Update Soon!
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  • From ANON - Scottishfae on March 17, 2005
    WooHoo! Another chapter steaming with brilliance and excitingness! Where to start, where to start...hmmm...Kakashi's a bitch, ratting out Naruto like that and what a tease too. He has the most round about ways to find out things, he's such a whore...can I have him? I'm hating the council as well, stupid asses. Poor Naruto, he deserves to be everything he wants to me. I think you've really, just in this story, made me hate most of the cast of Naruto, CONGRATULATIONS! Woohoo! Party Time! Just Kidding, well, not really. I like Shika and Ino's appearance at the end, especially the foreplay comment. I was cracking up at that one now. Okay, well I'm running away now. I'll talk to you later. Sorry for such the short review, I'm behind in my readings and my professor went all apeshit on us on Tuesday for not doing the readings...oops. But yes, another act of brilliance, I don't care if there is a plot or not. I'm looking forward to the Kakashi side-story. I gotta love the boy smut. Hehe. Well talk to you later.

    Until Next Time...

    Scottishfae

    P.S....yummy, sexy, sweaty, Sasuke, Naruto & Kakashi w/o their shirts....can you say DROOL? Cause yeah. Shit, no wonder no one watches TV in Konoha, the best entertainment is to just go watch the sexy guys train, especially on hot days. Good Stuff.
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  • From ANON - jadetiger on March 16, 2005
    if i didn't feel like i was gonna hurl my supper any second now i'd be screaming for joy at the awsome update. but for now i'll read and be overjoyed at the lovely new personality twist you added naruto's character, and sasuke's short temper. they make a lovely combo for this fic.. any now i gtg to the bathroom very quickly..

    *blah*
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  • From ANON - KyuTails on March 16, 2005
    Aaahhh...this can REALLY be called Art.

    The way you can beautifully manipulate a situatuion like this is absolutley amazing. the characterization is beautifully put together. Your art is wonderful, and I suggest you write a friggin book. I sure as hell would read it.
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