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By : mehmeh
  • From ANON - Sekra on March 30, 2005
    hdjghiufghjijg GUH excuse me while I fwibble over generous KyuuNaru smutty love..

    Okay, fwibbling not quite done but I can now form half-cohearant sentences. I love you. Seriously, marry me. At first I wasnt sure if I wanted to read this because I'm sort of completely against weepy-uke Naruto. But I couldnt resist the KyuuNaru.. I really couldnt. And I was happy to find that you actually gave him a backbone. Like guh, I love all demon-manipulative-muwaaha!Naru
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  • From ANON - ayonoi on March 30, 2005
    Damn, I like how your are writing Kyuubi, a really sharp, smart demon, looking for his best interest while stringing Naruto alone. While I really want to see the sex, the innuendo is way excellent, it has been for most of the fic. The last scene was awesome, I very much doubt Sasuke had ever seen that one coming. And the best part is that is Naruto tell him that he wants to fuck him, taking the initiative and being kinda of the alpha male. LOL. Sasuke-kins will not stand for that so I expect some sort of comeback on his part.

    Ohh I wonder what he will do with Kakashi's little doll. Hmmmm...I wonder why am I obsessed with Kakashi-sensei?

    Excellent update, I love your fic!
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  • From ANON - Inazuma on March 30, 2005
    Pure fucking GENIUS! You have some serious talent. Love it. Love it. LOVE IT! Can't wait for the next chapter! =D
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  • From ANON - Juli on March 30, 2005
    OH, KYUUBI, TAKE ME NOW! *ahem* I-I mean, um, g-great chapter. I can't even pinpoint what I loved the most, because I'd just be recapping the entire thing. Just, yeah, that Kyuubi. You're doing an amazing job with him. >:3 And that little exchange between Naruto and Sasuke at the end? I think I cackled for a good five minutes. I love it when Naruto has the upper hand. :D So, in conclusion, you're amazing and I love you forever and ever, amen.
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  • From ANON - Scottishfae on March 30, 2005
    Another superb chapter. Poor Naruto finally gave in, poor thing, he needs a cookie...cause cookies make the world go 'round. The ending was a very nice touch, a last minute addition I see! But oh so good. Now we just need to figure out if Sasuke is going to accept or not?! It would be so funny if he did, and so just, yummy. I'm interested in how you're going to wrap this fic up in the amount of chapters you would like to finish it in (did that make sense?). It seems like a lot more plot to cover in just 2-3 chapters! Not only do you have the NaruSasu crazyness to figure out, but you also have to address what's exactly going to happen to Naru and the Kyuubi in the end. I have to figure that Tsunade is keeping a watch on him and noticing his strange behaviour. Though since a majority of it happens in his dreams, then there may be nothing to observe. However, you did point out that he had carved that Voodoo thing into the floor w. his own nails, indicating that the Kyuubi has some control over Naru's physical actions outside of the dream realm, so that could be monitored. Oh, the possibilities to think and ponder about! Oh well, I'll just need to sit down when I get a chance and reread everything! I'm off for now, great chapter...as always!

    Until Next Time...

    Scottishfae
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  • From ANON - tenohikari on March 30, 2005
    This is awesome, just awesome. I love evil Kyubi and his voodoo dolls. Great job with this chapter, can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Bella8618 on March 30, 2005
    Yay!! new chappie up. Your sooo great. Which means i got my naruto fix for the day...*or at least for the next hour*..*nervous laugh*...hehe And right before english too... hmm gives me new stuff to think about while pretending to listen to the professor. ^_^.

    Now as for Kyuubi... need i say how great he is.... or should I just throw more Kyuubi plushies at u to show my love....lol

    ja mata... gtg to class
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on March 30, 2005
    Ready or not Konoha, Naruto's striking back and no one can stop him now that Kyuubi advising him what to do!! UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - Devious Lil Devil on March 30, 2005
    Oh yeah! Kyuubi and Naruto have teamed up!! shit's gonna hit the fan soon.*rubs her hands together gleefully* this chapter was sooo good and the ending was priceless. i wish i coulda seen Sasuke's face. man, that fox has got someway with words doesn't he? that damned sexy, manipulative, sexy, conviving and did i mention sexy beast. i just luv those KyuuNaru moments. i eagerly await the next chapter. i cant wait to see who the next victim is. ^__^
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  • From ANON - Ayako on March 29, 2005
    *grins* I just love seeing a smug Naruto, especially when he's being a bitch about it. He's being submissive, but in control about it. *rubs hands together* Mwahahahahaha! ...I can't do anything but grin now. XD I wonder how I missed this update. ;_; Oh well, better late than never that I found it.
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  • From ANON - ZoeyJade on March 28, 2005
    Mah I love it! This is a side of Sasuke that I haven't seen done or if it has been done hasn't been portrayed nearly this good. I love the fox of course. And Naruto is just a doll. Keep up the good work!!!!
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  • From ANON - Tachibana, Yumiko on March 21, 2005
    I really like how this story is turning out, it just keeps getting better and better. I like how you write the scheeming on Naruto's part, and the last few lines where Sasuke realizes that Naruto has planned the whole thing... priceless! I really like how you write your arguments, they're really dynamic and work very well, so I hope we'll see more of those! The arguments between Kakashi and Naru to is very interresting as well, because he sees so much. I hope we get more of those, because Naruto sounds so refreshingly insane!
    I like a lot!
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  • From ANON - gasa on March 21, 2005
    wooohooo!! this is goood i like it a lot. damn sasuke in denial is so funny. and naruto going sly and evil ish....ooo thats hot. continue soon!
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  • From ANON - Evil on March 21, 2005
    HMmm...Hmm... Naruto's a whore!?!? Nah... More like an innocent virgin?? Eh, well, I love how you portray Sasuke as a bastard... But he'll get better, right?? He won't stay that bastard way forever right?? 'Cause he's soo unhott when he's being a bastard to Naruto!! Man, Naruto of all people!! The innocent guy!! Hahahah, well, go Kyuubi!! He likes to play with Naruto ya? They're plotting together, which is a plus! A minus to the bastard Sasuke, and a plus to everything else!! Update it!! ^___^ Gotta love your fice! ^^
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  • From ANON - Demon on March 21, 2005
    Wow...that was amazing...but I do feel kinda sorry for Naruto for his bloodied face and for Sasuke because of the games Naruto is playing on him. But amazing and update soon
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