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Reviews for Poker Face

By : aiimeru
  • From EnchantedFaery on September 10, 2007
    So I've read up to chapter 3, the story is pretty good...but here's some constructive crticism...though this story is good and so far is keeping me interested, there are certain parts that are structured awkwardly, so it's doesn't really flow, so it kinda takes away from the story. Grammar's not bad put it isn't excellent either...not that I'm miss grammar queen, but so far I haven't noticed any obvious spelling errors, so that's a plus. Looking forward to reading the rest of your fic.

    EF
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  • From ANON - Laura-chan on January 14, 2007
    Noooooooo, you can't leave me like this! I love it, this story is original, weird and funny in a strange way... not to mention I love those hot scenes between Sakura and Sasuke.
    :) Update please
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on September 15, 2006
    Are you abandoning this? Please say you're not... *makes teary puppy eyes* Oh, and BTW, why is this categorized as NC-17?? Seems that you skip most of the actual lemon scenes--this should be an 'R' at most. Of course, I'd rather you'll get round to writing (and posting) most of the lemon scenes implied so far. XD
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  • From ANON - Jess on September 10, 2006
    PLEASE, PLEASE finish this! I need to know who he is!
    Great story, really good writing.
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  • From ANON - Blisblop on January 09, 2006
    Are you going to finis this?
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  • From ANON - Jadehaku on November 22, 2005
    I luv your story, please update . I have not read a story like this with a monster and sasuke{ very original} I think there should be more F/M fanfics on this site.
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  • From ANON - abby on October 29, 2005
    GAH!!! more, more, MORE!!! hahaha hmm.. yea, you should update now, thanks! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Cassie on October 13, 2005
    Wow that was amazingggggg i love how you made Sakura so strong and powerful and not all girly whenever she is around Sasuke anymore that was so coooooooooooleeeeeeeeee I can not wait until the next chapter oh and I also love how you now have Sasuke chasing after Sakura I have been dying to read a fanfic like that for ages. Arigatoo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on August 29, 2005
    Just a short review: The first chapter was frickin' HOT, and SUCH a tease. I WANT MORE!!! And no more teasing!
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  • From ANON - Dark Phoenix on August 29, 2005
    Can't remember if I reviewed before, but I like the sexual tension in this. Bah humbug to all those rabid yaoi fans who just want SasuNaru, SasuNaru, and more SasuNaru. There's like 500 tonnes of them out there, so they should stop bothering you and just read those. In other words, don't take their mindless flames to heart. I love SasuSaku, but ItaSaku is yummy too! Keep up the sexual tension!
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  • From on August 28, 2005
    O_0 Nice.....
    I love the whole Sasuke loves Sakura but won't admit it thing going on here.
    Sakura please kick Itachi's ass....like good.
    I hate that bastard.
    Well I guess you got the point.
    Please update ^^
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  • From ANON - xjustxdifferentx on August 23, 2005
    OMG I BEEN WAITING FOR LIKE FRIGGIN MONTHS!! PLEASE UPDATE!! THIS IS LIKE MY FAVORITE STORY!!
    PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! OMGGGGG I'VE BEEN WAITING FOREVER
    YOUR A FRIGGIN GOOD WRITER!! PLEASEEE HURRY!!
    your so awesome! x]
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  • From ANON - blisblop on August 03, 2005
    This just keeps getting better...hopr you update soooooon.
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  • From ANON - neojoy02 on August 03, 2005
    I like your depiction of Sasuke here in your fanfic which reminds me of how did I like him before because ya’ know, I am a proud SasuSaku pairing loyalist. But after I read a fanfic that features KakaSaku pairings, I back off and incline to being the latter’s pairing aficionado. Right now, I’m faltering to become a SasuSaku pairing devotee again. Continue this work of yours…this is very great! I’ll rate this as S-Class! I’m sure what it meant if the rating is of an S-Class.

    P.S. Make an update quickly because I’m itching to read the next chapter and hey, make this fanfic long… and hi hi hi! Make a whole, not a choppy (you know, you’re cutting the scenes when it is becoming interesting), lemon SCENES (hey, note the –s there! I hope you get what I’m trying to imply there). And if you do that, there’s no doubt on my part that I WILL RETURN FROM BEING A SASUSAKU PAIRING DEVOTEE.

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  • From allyluv on July 23, 2005
    O_o

    very nice update!!! i love how you have the stoic sasuke slowly opening up and getting jealous. muwahahahahahah~~~~

    excellent indeed!!! please continue and give us more soon :D

    and i was getting annoyed for you at the people who didn't like the pairing... the story is very well written and to shoot it down because of the pairing is silly. anyways. you rock.
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