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Reviews for Nine Months

By : macy
  • From loveusender on April 11, 2010
    awwwww!! this was so sweet and nice lol @ the ending. they already have four kids and he'd preggers again lmao.really should have gone family planning..*smirks* great story btw1
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  • From ANON - nonon on December 17, 2008
    Hi! Umm...you're premise is interesting and you've got great potential as a writer. My concrit would be to go through the story and decide on one point of view per chapter or for the entire story. It was a bit frustrating to get used to one POV and not even a paragraph later, have the story switch to another person's POV. I tried to get through the first chapter and couldn't make it past the 5th or 6th POV switch. It disrupted the flow of the story entirely and I couldn't get back into the story and enjoy it. Anyways, I hope you take my criticism as a suggestion and not as an insult (it's not meant to be an insult at all). Cheers.
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  • From Vague on February 25, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

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    All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

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  • From Minjin on January 02, 2008
    So so awesome!!! I loved every bit of this!!! The end was so funny lol and i like the whole jealousy chapters muahahah Jealous Sasu is just effing cute and adorable. Oh and i forgot to say hot!
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  • From kitsuko999 on December 31, 2007
    I love this story so much! It contained so much humor (and good humor to boot), plus a side of hot steamy romance between Naruto and Sasuke, and they had not just one child in the end –but 4 and now soon turning out to be 5! The ending was perfect in the epilogue! And here comes baby number 5 (Sasuke obviously not complaining much for he loves adding more Uchiha’s babies to his growing new clan)! Thank you so much for writing this story and I’ve already fallen in love with your style of writing that I’m going to check out what other stories you have as well! You’ll be hearing from me soon! ^0^
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  • From oohshiny on October 18, 2007
    WAHH NICE JOBU!!! *GOOD GUY POSE*
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  • From ANON - looli on September 30, 2007
    This is without a doubt the first Mpreg SasuNaru fic i actually read to the end in 3 years and had a blast while reading it to boot

    Amazing i loved it. it was new, fun, not angst for the firs time in all Mpreg’s history ;p and yum the jealousy i loved it XD

    i applause your writing skills kept me entertained through the whole story didn't even stop to pee ;p

    thank you so much for sharing your talent with us. Would love to see more of it and how the boys raised the kids

    love
    looli :)



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  • From crazychemgeek on July 31, 2007
    *sighs deeply with satisfaction* That story was awesome. I should have gone to bed 2 hours ago :( I now have to get up in 5 hours, but your story was worth it. A little shaky in the beginning but I really enjoyed the whole story, especially Sasuke's jealousy over the Rain lord. Good job!!
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  • From PieldeLava on May 03, 2007
    Great story. I really enjoy reading it. Look forward to reading your future works. Until next time, take care, and god bless.
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  • From PieldeLava on March 31, 2007
    Cute and sweet. Great fic. I really enjoy reading it. Look forward to reading your future works. Until then, take care, and god bless.
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  • From Gwyllion on March 11, 2007
    Dear gods......!!! After reading the Epilogue, I nearly squee-ed to death! That was ABSOLUTELY the most adorable chapter I have ever read! Please please PLEASE write a one shot or two? (Not that I'm harrassing or anything...;P) I love the babies and SasuNaru's relationship. Will be reading this lovely piece again and again. It's so SWEET! Thank you so much for sharing this with us all and please keep up the great work! :D
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  • From ANON - Mikkie on December 18, 2006
    Okay probebly like the latest review ever.. but.. I COMPLETELY AND UTERLY LOVE YOUR STORY>>> *tumbs up*
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  • From on August 13, 2006
    HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! That was great! I'm just finishing the story now at 3.30 in the morning, and I nearly woke everyone up with my laughter! Macy-san, that was a great story, and I'm looking forward to reading your others! (If you have any)

    Seisai
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  • From nocturne on December 12, 2005
    ::grin:: this fic was awesome. I just LOVE the fact that naruto, by the end, already has FOUR children, and is now in the first stages of pregnancy with a fifth. ^^ those two must be very fertile!

    this was very sweet, though, and I really liked it. ^^
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  • From ANON - krickets on December 12, 2005
    AWSOME!!
    i loved it!!
    and yess PWP's would be great!
    im so glad i got the chance to read this its really good

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