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Reviews for The Little Things

By : starapple

From ANON - cocopower1 on June 15, 2008
Why doesn't Naruto ask Sasuke to contact the fox through his sharingan? ~Love the story!
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From serenagold on May 30, 2008
oh my god. O_O Unexpected!!

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I've only just discovered this story for the first time yesterday and managed to marathon about thirteen chapters in a single night, only just finishing it tonight after I came home from work. (Ok, so I might be slightly sleep deprived right now. Sue me.)
I just wanted you to know that this story was fantastic. I really enjoyed it. Although I am a little confused as to what happened to Gaara. :/ Perhaps I'll have to go back and re-read it cause I must have missed something. The story also seemed to come to an abrupt end, which is fine, but I still didn't feel the closure with Naruto and Gaara's relationship (as evident in the fact that I don't know what happened. Did Naruto have to kill Gaara?)

In any event.. this story is awesome. Very well done. Expertly written. A fantastic handle of the characters. Over all, five star material. Just so you know, I'm adding this to my recommened reading list. Keep up the excellent work. I'll be reading. ^^
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From CrimsonEmbrace on March 11, 2008
Huh? I'm afraid I can't understand this story at all... it's like I'm missing the entire first half of the story, it doesn't make any sense.
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From Dragon7 on August 22, 2007
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can�t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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From Raiha on April 11, 2007
Although this story was obviously published quite a few years ago, I felt that it was only fair to review a story that I had read with rapt attention the past few days. It is regrettable that you don't have more reviews, since you do deserve them. You crafted the story brilliantly and used words in such a poetic sense that although the story seemed fleeting, the emotions ran deep under the current the entirety of the story. You should be very proud of such a work. The work, in short, was beautifully haunting. Thank you for completing it, in addition to the epilogue as well.
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From ANON - MultifacetedTune on July 18, 2005
And now that it's over, I can't find the words to thank you enough for writing this masterpiece. *hugs you and gives you chocolates* I can't tell you how wonderful it is to find an excellently written fic that remains that way until the end. From your plot line to your amazing characterization and details to the consistancy with which you wrote this, all simply breathes of emotion and talent. It's always nice to find a fic where the "sex" actually means something; where the characters are alive and different, yet still true to thier "real selves". You had an amazing idea, and you pulled it off with grace -- congratulations, your fic has officially won a spot a spot in my heart as one of the few that truely moved me. I will never forget it.

And yes, that was hopelessly sappy, but can you blame me after an ending like that? ^___~

Thanks again for a wonderful experience, and please continue to write so that others can enjoy your talented work as much as I have. Keep up the good work!!!

~An Admiring Fan ^^
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From ANON - sorviball on July 18, 2005
i'm really...sad. i feel so bad for gaara!!! i really liked this last chapter. i think it led very well up to naruto and sasuke being together. i think there was a sense of inevitability throughout the whole chapter that you conveyed really well. still, i feel so unfulfilled because of gaara. maybe i have a soft spot for him, but i just feel like he was completely ditched. especially since you made it so painfully obvious that he loves naruto. poor gaara...what is he gonna do now that he has no one to share his demony-ness with? sorry, i really do like you story a lot. it was really moving, and i feel that not many fics have that effect. you actually stirred emotions in me, which is always a good sign. i guess im just more of a naruto and gaara fan? great job. please let me know if you write something else.
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From ANON - lje on July 16, 2005
This story was wonderful! Thanks so much for sharing it!!
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From ANON - Leasan on July 16, 2005
No, thank YOU for writing it!
And sorry for not reviewing earlier. But better late than never, right? :)
I love the plot, its twists and wisdom in your fic.
Thanks again, reading it has given me great pleasure.
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From ANON - ochiba on July 16, 2005
simply beautiful. thank you for sharing this story.
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From ANON - Mint on July 02, 2005
I don't give well rounded reviews. I just simply beg for an update, toddle off, and wait not-so-patiently.
It's good... really good, and the pretty angst factor [or at least in my opinion] rocks. Love the whole Naruto-demon and Gaara-demon thing going one, bleh, I'm not very good at reviewing, as I might have warned.

Poor Sasuke, I feel bad for that darling. Then again, I'm a proud biased lover of him -- oh well.
I have no idea if you're still alive or not. Alive meaning that you still update, circulate, and exist.

One day, please and thank you.
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From ANON - chem chick on June 02, 2005
Wow, this is an amazing story! I just sat down and read through chapter 12, and I am floored. I cannot wait to see what will happen next! Such an original story, and your writing is absolutely amazing! Can't wait for more!
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From ANON - vashta on May 30, 2005
I really do look forward to your updates, but I though this was sasunaru? When will it happen? I like nargaa, but I like sasunar more, plus I thought that nargaa was just like a comfort thing! Oh, well, how much longer will this be? Good story.
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From Jiro on April 24, 2005
This is a really, REALLY good story. I love the diction, flow, narrative voice, etc. The only thing you need to watch for is the tense changes. You switch from past tense to present tense a bit and it�s a little distracting (specifically during the �sex scenes� and when they�re talking about the demon children� but describing it in the present tense *does* give it certain amount of intensity that might be lacking otherwise so I guess it�s not a *bad* thing, per se� it�s just slightly *distracting*) . I wish the sex �scenes� were a little more *graphic* (hey, this is AFF after all) but I�m a pervert and sadly not everyone is as depraved as I am (it�s a real shame too). But your kissing/foreplay scenes are so intense and well written that it TOTALLY makes up for it. My God, they�re fantastic. Who knew a kiss could be so HOT?! LoL.

Naruto is such a stud.

Anyway, I also wanted to compliment you on the plot. It�s totally original and, as someone who has no life and has therefore read an ungodly amount of Naruto fan fiction, I�m incredibly impressed. The whole Demon children/evacuation thing was GENUIS. And I love how you�ve portrayed Naruto�s relationship with Gaara and Sasuke and I also love how you�ve illustrated the tension between them all too. Plus the way Kohona�s reacting to all of them is pretty realistic. I�m glad you brought the probability that the town might try to impression Naruto to the forefront. A lot of writers either just ignore the political/practical implications of the Kyuubi or they simply don�t think of it. Maybe it takes a certain amount of maturity or something? I dunno�

Oh, and I love the title. I didn�t get it at all until they started talking about how it�s only the little things that don�t change. It sorta made me think about how sometimes the little things are the most important. They add up and you never see it coming. So that made me love this story even MORE.

All in all this is FANTASTIC. Honestly I should�ve been in bed like 3 hours ago but when I started reading this fic I kept on thinking �I�ll go to bed after this chapter�. I�m such a liar. Geeze. Anyway sorry this review�s so damn long. I figured I�d just leave a GINRORMOUS review instead of 12 measly little ones. I didn�t think I�d have this much to say though. Sorry *blushes*. It�s just � your story�s so damn GOOD. Anyway, please update soon. I promise not to leave such long, rambling reviews again, okay? Deal.

Thanks for posting!!!!

~Jiro (aka: Nudd)
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From ANON - TenshiKaitou on April 23, 2005
Nothing best but to read two chappies at one go! Such a satisfying night this is! Well-written as always, so do continue updating! I don't have to say more, do I? Heh.
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