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Reviews for You Can Never Go Home Again

By : CrystalChild
  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2005
    I like the new format; I think it works well.

    Aaaand about the story: SQUEE.
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  • From AkumaKawa on January 02, 2005
    Interesting very interesting. I am hooked. Great job. The story is too young to give it a great story or anything. But if you keep this work up it will be an excellent stoy. Coolsa.
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  • From ANON - shouta on January 01, 2005
    moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - @_@ on December 31, 2004
    Me likey!!! please continue
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  • From ANON - Yum on December 31, 2004
    I see you update it in ff.net too? But I will just review here because I'm a lazy ass!!^^
    It's AWESOME and very Original!!!! I'm very curious about what will happen next!!!
    If I've understand it all, Naruto had return from a mission with his team, Did he return with the 5 five of them?
    Update soon please...
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  • From ANON - phoenixdown7 on December 31, 2004
    I love this...the writing just flows and Naruto is soo...cool. Like he's suddenly turned into James Bond or something. Smooth all around. I also am interested in the flashbacks. Good use of tense and events in time. I would love to read more! ^^
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  • From ANON - caro8 on December 31, 2004
    I liked it. It liked how you jumped back and forth although at times I must admit it took me a while to realize I was reading a flashback. I'm curious now as to why it took him a year and not a week and how his team did. Oh and Sasuke's and everyone else's reaction.

    Keep up the good work and update soon!!! :D
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on December 31, 2004
    Well, I couldn't review on ff.net so I decided to do it here.

    This is once again a very interesting story. I am looking forward to seeing where this goes.

    Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - ureihitomi on December 30, 2004
    hi, i thought the 1st chapter was pretty interesting. looking forward to the next update. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2004
    I'm really interested in the story! The plot is interesting and I'm dying to know what happened to make the mission last so long.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2004
    eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee !!!
    this was a good first chap
    i really like it so far
    hope you update soon

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  • From ANON - ^^ on December 30, 2004
    i could pretty much understand that you intend to have the scenes change from the past to the present, the least you could do for the readers convenience is to indicate it.

    put some "flashback", "end of flashback" or "a year ago", "present" or something so your readers won't be confused of the timeline.

    as for the story, it's too early to comment on it, but you did a good start.

    Ganbatte!
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  • From ANON - Yami Jay on December 30, 2004
    It's confusing... But I like it ^_^
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  • From ANON - blueberry on December 30, 2004
    *sniff* that's is so sweet and yet a bit sad for some reason...Wait...it's not a tragic romance right? Anyway I really like the chapter and hope to see more of the story =)
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  • From TenshiKaitou on December 30, 2004
    i purposely logged in to review your story, so that means it is fabulous. please update soon. don't keep us (readers) waiting too long ne...
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