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Reviews for "Lesson" - (First Milestone Present Lemon)

By : Tsukineko9
  • From Tiger5913 on May 06, 2007
    Oh geez, that was the best ShikaIno fic I have ever read before. Congrats on such a great story. ^_^ I didn't like the yaoi implications though, and I was hoping that you could give us readers a warning next time.
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  • From ANON - Lady_Quotes on September 03, 2006
    Wow, that was really good! I really enjoyed reading it. I'm totally going to ready anything else you've done.
    Lq
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  • From ANON - Dextral on February 13, 2006
    Um...

    This was slightly bizarre...since when do these people farm? I mean, don't get me wrong, it was written well, but, um, farming? I thought they were ninjas...

    And what's up with the deer craze? Your whole story was like, "Shikamaru learned sex from da deer!" I was like, ew. He watches the deer mate? Ok, Shikamaru apparently has weird fetishes.

    And, uh, yeah. Truly a, er, interesting story. Nice, hawt at the end (hawter if it didn't have that DEER aspect to it...), but yeah. Nice job?
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  • From Karista on October 31, 2005
    Beautiful! Long, well-written, and a great ending. You did a wonderful job of setting up a great secenario in just one long chapter...could have easily been stretched into a multi-chapter series, but was a great standalone as well. I love how well you kept Shikamaru in character, and you had some great insight on how he'd act in a relationship as well.
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  • From ANON - suki on October 23, 2005
    you must write a sequal!!! its soooooo goood!!!!
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  • From on October 10, 2005
    omg this is so cute i love it!
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  • From ANON - Inazuma on March 12, 2005
    You did a very, very, VERY good job with this fic! ShikIno lurve = good, kawaii lurve. And it all ended well, ne? Thank you for one nice sitting (of reading). ^_^
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  • From ANON - Rinpu on February 21, 2005
    This was lovely! I love the way you wrote their personalities, and the interactions between the two of them were perfect. And the little scene with Kiba was hilarious! ^^
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  • From ANON - crystal_gaze on January 02, 2005
    Wow, I like the way you make Shikamaru and Ino! This fic really portrays their character and how they could be like as a couple. Wonderful job! ^o^
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  • From ANON - jj289 on December 28, 2004
    wow that was really good :) props for a great fic.
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  • From ANON - campurr on December 27, 2004
    could be labeled required reading for vast numbers of young human beings if life was fair
    chris
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  • From ANON - NarutoLemon on December 27, 2004
    Wow, very nice! I liked it. A bit drawn out in the middle, however, I am glad that you didn't make it just a PWP. Wonderfully written!
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  • From ANON - Eight on December 26, 2004
    I liked it. ^_^

    Only mistake I saw were a few grammar mistakes.. And Shikamaru's dad's name is Shikato. ^^V
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