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Reviews for Our Progeny

By : Ghostninja85
  • From Vague on March 01, 2008
    Hey there, I was reading your story and found that you have amazing talent as an author. This is why I am taking some time to invite you over to my website Laefe E-Publishing. I’m looking for young talented authors who have it in them to make creative original works.

    I know that you will automatically think that this might be a scam so to help ease your worries you can either check out my own profile on this site so you can see that I am the real deal, or you can add me to Windows Live Messenger that you can ask me any questions that may come to your mind.

    Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.

    All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

    Emi Baptiste
    Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.

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  • From ANON - BrAt! on August 11, 2007
    what happened to the rest of Our Progeny?? i loved that story!! are you gonna do anything else to it?
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  • From ANON - Memphis Atari on June 21, 2007
    Was there a reason for the Rain-nin attack on the foxes? i know it was a mission but it seems odd. i mean, how did anyone even know there were foxes still around if Konoha didn't think they had any (presuming that they'd still be hunting them if it were).
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  • From ANON - yaoi fix 96 on March 10, 2007
    Hey you are a very evil person for leaveing us at that me like you very tricky and an awsome writer keep going this is getting good. I hope you keep going with writing more stories I am a writer myself but nothing mostly naruot yaoi stuff of the occasional vampire fix I go either way well I hope you keep going nad write more son bye ya!
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  • From guiltyheart on March 08, 2007
    I love your story. I read the original one and was hope you would complete it. I love the plot and I'm looking for to the chapter to come. Thank you for your hard work.
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  • From ANON - Mystic_Neko on March 07, 2007
    I read this before and I like it. Now as I read how your re-writing it I find that I really like some of the changes in it. I would like it if you could let me know when it's been updated.
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  • From crazychemgeek on March 06, 2007
    I am so loving this FF. Your writing is fantastic - I can't wait for Sasuke to meet Yahiko. Keep up the great work, and please add me to your email update list.
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  • From KansouAme on March 06, 2007
    love your story! Want more please!!!
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  • From bluegenjutsu on March 06, 2007
    I can't wait till Sasuke and Naruto meet up and hopefully Sasuke will realize that his son is alive. :)
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  • From Zigana on March 02, 2007
    This is good. Really, really good.
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  • From Allys on February 27, 2007
    Oh wow that was kinda evil :), and I was kinda hoping that they would get to meet Sasuke but it was pretty nice anyway, I really hope the kid is okay, til next time, Ja ne.
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  • From nekochannya on February 27, 2007
    oh god... please... not the little fox!! nyah!!! Please!! T.T
    I want into that list please... nekochanme2@yahoo.com Thank you!
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  • From sethian on February 24, 2007
    AWESOME story !!
    I love it and I hope you update it soon!!
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  • From nekochannya on February 22, 2007
    Lovely!!! Lovely!!! I knew he was Sasuke's kid! Nyah!!! me likes!!!! nyah!!!! I hope everything comes out right!! I like this story a lot and the characters are very believable... nyah! This is rapidly becoming a favorite...
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  • From on February 20, 2007
    Yahiko may be my favorite OC ever. There are sometimes things that he does that aren't very five-year-old like, and I would've originally placed him as at least ten. However, this is the Naruto-verse, where children (the prodigies anyway) canbecome full-fledged ninja under the age of ten. There are some things that are confusing, but I'd need to look at the first chapter again before I could offer constructive criticism. One of the things I'm wondering about--Is Sasuke with Orochimaru at the present or isn't he? I'm pretty sure there's something in the first chapter about that but I can't remember what it is for the life of me.

    Yahiko is really selling this piece for me and I hope to see more awesome Naruto and Yahiko interactions--everything from training to eating to naptimes would be awesome! Looking forward to the next chapter,

    mydarkerside

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