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By : Ghostninja85
  • From ANON - Arryelle on April 29, 2005
    I hope you kill Itachi and I want a lemon tear can you update sooner than last time please lol
    well great story of course

    aryy
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  • From Kusachu on April 29, 2005
    I think i found a spelling error...“I don’t know what’s wrong, but we can ask Naruto ((of)) Baa-chan about it later.” Is that supposed to be "Or"? (just confused me a little)

    anyway the addition of Naruto's new son certainly heats things up! I sense a lot of possible tension occuring...and Itachi is back in the picture! Ugh oh. I wonder what Sasuke will do when he finds out!! (KILL KILL KILL!) hahaha! I like that you didn't leave yutaro/link's name the way it was, (Every time i read it i, for some reason, kept picturing a cute little elven boy in a green dress and tights! Yum!) It must be really strange for the kid to suddenly be human...are you planning on having the boy display more 'ferral' tendancies, since he was a fox? And does the boy have 'demon' chakra as well? Is he more like a 'demon baby'? What will everyone else think of Naruto's new bouncing baby boy??? Man! you sure did leave it at a troublesome spot!!! sigh...i'll be waiting for more of course...so...be nice and keep churning it out! Hahaha! Naurto/Sasuke...i can not wait to see how they resolve thier past differences and take on their "fatherly" roles....BTW nice way to give both of them kids and not have to include a troublsome woman or a pregnant man! Squee!! Oh yeah...i hope that if you plan on having Itachi kidnap or kill one of those boys, you will also be including the part where he is tortured and beaten and kept as pet in the basement! hahaha! Don't mind me...i'm okay...really. d(^-^)b
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  • From ANON - chem chick on April 29, 2005
    Wow...wow...did I mention wow? I am really enjoying your story. The plot is great so far. I love what you did with Link/Yutaro, it will be interesting to see what happens with the new family dynamic... I will be eagerly waiting a new chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Letta on April 29, 2005
    I like how Naruto doesn't completely trust Sasuke, yet. It's more realisitic that way. I'm looking forward to their talk, since I like seeing the emotions of a character come out. Can't wait for the next installment.
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  • From ANON - kai on April 29, 2005
    oh on what's itachi going to do!?! Really interesting fic. Yay, i love sasu/naru fics!! They both have sons now, so cute!! anyways, update soon!!
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  • From ANON - archaicrose on April 28, 2005
    It's about time you updated.
    ;)
    I love this story. You're doing a great job on it.
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on April 28, 2005
    no! not itachi! *poses dramatically* great job! i'm so happy you updated! I love this story! it was so sad though, those poor boys! But thats okay! And there was so little sasunarunesss... oh well. hopefully there will be a whole lot more really soon! Keep up the great work! Your awesome! ^_~
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  • From ANON - RavenWings on April 28, 2005
    I just about died laughing when Naruto gave Link the name Yutaro. The competition between those two in RK always had me in stitches... I also loved the fact that Yahiko actually responded to Sasuke's efforts to comfort him. Yay, progress! And *yes*, Naruto and Sasuke need to talk. Seriously... And GAH! Itachi! Ohhh dear... can't help but wonder what shit you're planning to put the four through now. ^^' I eagerly await the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - twisted-sheets on April 28, 2005
    finally, an update! *giggle* I like the Kenshin reference. I looove Kenshin. XD

    Anyway, great chapter! XD
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  • From avanhorn on April 28, 2005
    Well, I only made it through 2 chapters and I have to go to work now, so I'll read the rest tomorrow. But so far, I am really interested in where this is going. Can't wait to read more. I'll review again once I've finished the rest you have posted. But it sure has a great start!
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  • From ANON - Elegwen on April 22, 2005
    I've been reading this story since it started. Though I found it at FanFiction.net, I had to come read the Lemony goodness over at AFF. I love the storyline and the way you've been going in it. Keep it up. Oh, wouldn't mind that side story either ;).
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  • From ANON - minjin00 on March 30, 2005
    lol when yahiko asked shikarmaru questions at the party. curious to find out whats going to happen next.
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  • From ANON - Arryelle on March 20, 2005
    That was awsome please update soon I LOVE THIS STORY alot and I hope theres a lemon soon lol

    loves arry
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  • From ANON - babaca on March 19, 2005
    (2) It appears that Iruka and Kurenai were on the same team with Ebisu (inferred from the cover of manga chapter 250).

    Actually you're incorrect. The cover of 250 is Iruka, Ebisu and Suzume. The Inane translation says it on the page itself. Also if you go to narutofan.com you'll see Suzume listed in character biographies. I didn't know who she was until looking there and going back into the manga. Suzume was Ino and Sakura's teacher who was teachine kinoichi how to be both feminine and yet still ninja.

    But that factoid aside... I do like your story and look forward to reading more of it. I can't say I was thrilled with Sasuke's teaching of his son. He needs to stop that Uchibas do it better crap or he really will fall under the Uchiba curse/trap of disappointing their children. Shikamaru being forced to think about the implications of Naruto and Sasuke as something more than friends or rivals was pretty amusing.
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  • From ANON - bara-aoi on March 19, 2005
    AHHHHHHHHHHH you have to update soon!!!! I wanna see 'em get together!!!! ^__^;;

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