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By : Ghostninja85
  • From ANON - GS* on July 21, 2005
    hmm i wonder if Gaara would know that their Naruto's and Sasuke's sons. haha. oh yea about the lemon thingy. i was thinking about like after naruto and sasuke sent yahiko and yutaro to play. cause they were left alone. and then after that they were talking about babies with yutaro. i thought that'd b funny and that it also connects to the story. kinda like behind the scenes. lol haha XD.
    and i dont really know wut the mail list is 4. but yet i still wanna b on the list. hahaha XD
    anyway my e-mail is - Starmiexangel@aol.com
    update soon! n_______n

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  • From ANON - chem chick on July 14, 2005
    Hey, this was fantastic! Another great chapter! Yay Gaara! I really liked this, I am curious to see what's going to happen with the boys...will Sasuke and Naruto get the news soon? Will Uncle Shika find them? Can't wait for the next update! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Arryelle(Aka. SexGoddess) on July 14, 2005
    so awsome I love it but sadly that itachi basterd is still alive gaara should crush him muhahaha ok well thanks for the reminder I loved the chappie but *blushes* will there be any you know limes in the near furture for our fav couple please lol well update soon

    Arry
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  • From ANON - Zendura on July 14, 2005
    Hey man awsome chap. GAARA'S Da bomb diggity.

    P.S. PLEASE add me to the list!!!
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  • From ANON - Leasan on July 14, 2005
    Nice chapter, but a bit rushed, I mean many things happen, but almost no feelings are mentioned.
    I'm a bit disaponted... Especially because there were so many really dramatic moments for most characters!
    Especially for 'dads', when thay realized the boys' escape...
    But maybe you'll insert that in the next chapter??
    Well anyway, I liked it nontheless and put me on your mailing list, please! I love your writing!


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  • From ANON - kai on July 14, 2005
    yes, heat up the relationship!! XDD anyways, that's for the e-mail on letting me kno when it was updated!! XDD so gaara found them, what will he do? update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Cannonball on July 07, 2005
    I love this fic!
    Very cute OC's, and I love that both Naruto and Sasuke have sons now. Also! I know who the next character appearing will be! Gaara right?
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  • From ANON - mitsune on July 02, 2005
    yatta!!! XD another great one!, this fic is really good i hope you update soon, and i really wonder when would naru-chan and sasu-chan do the lemon scene together... oh well gambatte! ja! ^_^.
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  • From ANON - chem chick on June 30, 2005
    Yay! New chapter! Very good, I liked this one. Punishment is always worse when it involves some sort of chore...blah. Anyways, good chapter, I am excited to see who the new character you're going to introduce is. And the boys are written really well, they act like I would imagine two brothers would...can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 28, 2005
    Gaara!All the warnings about yoai! where ? what interaction,this is a friendship fic posing as shonnen ai.All the kids none of the fun.Ladies have there own pissing rituals,fireman can also be done by girls pinch and go,it is custom women pee sitting down not biology,it takes about two weeks for an adult women to learn to piss and aim standing up.OK?I miss the fox.Itachi will shake things up eh .Here's hoping.There is little to no chemistry between Sasuke and Naruto,I guess I feel ripped off,don't mind me ,I'll get over it.
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  • From ANON - Raven Potter-Snape on June 26, 2005
    Mmm, I like this. Please e-mail me when you update.
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  • From ANON - RavenWings on June 24, 2005
    Hopefully soon will be sooner than the last update, ne? ^^'

    *Cough* And about the "fireman" thing... yeah, I don't understand, I frankly, I don't think I *want* to understand... ^^;;;;

    And meep, Itachi! Uh ohhhh... this is *not* good... And poor Yutaro... and Yahiko. *Sigh* Idiots, both of them. Silly boys... And of *course* the boys would finish right then! Its a requirement for kids to interrupt their parents' private moments! Hell, kids have a sixth sense about that sorta thing... heh... So soon Itachi will come out from hiding again. ^^' This won't be pretty, no doubt... Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - silverfox on June 23, 2005
    that was a very good chapter i really enjoyed reading it can't wait for the next one so keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on June 23, 2005
    Well hell yeah! I hope he aint dead either! *Cries hard* Damn stupid Kishimoto san and his villanous murdering!! GAAA! someone needs to chain him up and...OH! heh sorry! well i was happy to see that you FINALLY updated! *Squee!* Itachi...grrr...what could that bastard be planning? heh, guess i'll have to wait and see. the bathroom scene...*snort* fireman...LOL... And darn it! Naruto and Sasuke were about to have moment! And those frisky little kids had to come and interupt them! GAAA! You like torture don't you?
    I can't wait to see what you have planned concerning Gaara! and also, Naughty Itachi's naughty plans!
    BE SWIFT! TYPE LIKE LIGHTNING!! RETURN SOON!
    I shall be waiting...
    d(^-^)b
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  • From ANON - Lee on April 30, 2005
    I love it, Chapter 9 and now begins the main story. Priceless. I can't wait to see what else you've got cooking.
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