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By : Ghostninja85
  • From ANON - Mija on October 13, 2005
    ooh I soooo love this fic, soo diffrent and unique, great detail and plot line..in case you are wondering I barely found this fic today as I scroll threw the fics, Im a newbie fan to Naruto and have become obsessed with them lol, and I soo like Sasu/Naru or vice versa pairs, and the brother thing is totally great, I am wondering if you will be updating this anytime soon? I got to chap 12 and wanted to cry, Ive been reading it non stop since I found it and now I feel...empty lol as wierd as that sounds, I must have more, I hope you update soon, and if you still have that mailing list thing I would really appreciate it if you would add me to it so I can know when you update this wonderful fic, till then thank you for that great read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - Woot! on September 15, 2005
    Woot!
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  • From ANON - baconsux on August 21, 2005
    hewwo. i think you've created an excellent story here. i just love the 2 new characters you have decided to add to the Naruto family. they are so adorable!! ^^ so update soon cuz i'll be expecting it ASAP! and watever an aff mailing list is, add me to it! i included my email in the email section.. heh. update soon!
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  • From ANON - Arryelle(Aka. SexGoddess) on August 18, 2005
    I love this so much But I need Itachi dead I hate that basterd detroying the famlily-ness. Grrrrrrr well is there going to be a lemon or at least a citrus yet god I'm dying lol no more solo's
    well update soon please add to list teehee

    Loves Arry
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  • From ANON - dakara on August 12, 2005
    hm your soo mean hahah poor gaa-chan hehe baby sitting hm.............wonder if he is going to die in the proses XD anyway haha sasuke you ECHII no perv thoughts now XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD anyway it would be a honor to be in your mailing list X3 and great work whit the chaps anyway try to write the next chapter know ok bye and write more ^v^
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  • From ANON - DeadUchiha on August 12, 2005
    YAY! An update! Aw, this chapter was short! I liked the speech that Kankuro gave the kids. That was a nice a nice touch! I was surprised though, that upon hearing of thier childrens' disappearance, Naruto, at least, didn't want to rush off right away to find them. It just seemed like an odd reaction for a parent to have. And Sasuke! Shame on him! Not caring if his son was missing? I understand his apathy though, it is suited to his character in this story. I, personally, would like to see things get a little more emotionally in depth with the characters. I know I KNOW, I'm one of the bastards that always gives you a hard time about getting to the sex, but without the emotional struggle of the charaters, the story would lose its weight. Anyway, this seems like a transitional chapter. I'm looking forward to seeing where you are planning to go with this down the line. NYA! and Gaara with little kids! What a great way to have some fun with his character! Those mischievious boys...and Gaara! *giggles with anticipation*
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  • From ANON - Nataku on August 12, 2005
    Gaara babysitting... *snickers* There's a first. And MEEP! *Not* liking where Itachi's thoughts are going... Bad enough that he scared the crap outta poor Yahiko... *Bounces* Can't wait until the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - DarkSeductress on August 11, 2005
    I really liked this chapter. I'm glad Sasuke decided his family was more important than his revenge. I haven't read your edits of previous chapters so forgive me if this question has been fixed/corrected in the earlier chapter: but I thought the boys couldn't communicate through thoughts anymore? Did they just think they couldn't? Or did you go back and fix it? Or do I just not know what hell I'm talking about? lol Let me know if I'm wrong. And I'd be honored if you put me on your mailing list.
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  • From ANON - chem chick on August 11, 2005
    Hey there! This was an excellent chapter! I liked Gaara's interaction with the boys. A little Naruto and Sasuke action was also really great! Nice little cliffhanger there, with Itachi...overall, great chapter, it was a really nice read, and as always, I will eagerly await your next update!
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  • From ANON - Nakuo Shiatsu on August 11, 2005
    Good, good! I see that some of the things I told you last time are taking. You explained some things in this chapter more than you did before, but it's still kinda vague. Other than that, great job. I hope you continue to write this story and continue to improve in said writing. Arigato Gozaimasu. ^_^!
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  • From ANON - clem on August 01, 2005
    Great fanfic... The plot is just really good, and the idea of the two son is very interesting. I hope you didn't stop writing, you HAVE to end it...
    Did you planned to elaborate some interaction between Sasuke and Naruto about Yahiko's mother ? Ho, and by the way, Gaara's coming is just GREAT... He kick asses^^.
    I look forward to the next chapter
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  • From ANON - dakara on July 25, 2005
    MOREEEE MOOREEEEEEEE WRITE MOREEEEEEEEEEEE
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  • From ANON - Nakuo on July 24, 2005
    I enjoyed reading your fanfic. Some parts of the story were rather vague and I believe it would be better if you explained more on some things, but this is your story-not mine. Although, I wish Sasuke and Naruto would suck it up and hot dog(or fox) sex already, I'm not going to push it. Domo Arigato for writing this story.
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  • From ANON - Nathaniel on July 23, 2005
    Humm... It's difficult to review really good stories. When there are no mistakes to point out or something like that the review often degenrate to a simple "Hooray..." statement.

    And it's the same with your story. I really like the idea of the two little sons and their interactions are well described. Your descicion to don't use Japanese terms in to an extent many other authors tend to is something I really appreciate. Your style is simple, easy to read (especially for people like me, whose native tongue is not English) - nonetheless very graphic. Mhhh... I really cannot think a thing that bothered me in this fic - sorry ;-))

    I don't know what purpose this mailing list has - but I want to try it, so would you be so kind and add me there? Thanks :-)

    So long,
    Nathaniel
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  • From ANON - hogochan on July 22, 2005
    nice update! thanks! ^_^
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