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By : Ghostninja85
  • From nekochannya on February 20, 2007
    nyah... cool... sounds like the kid's sasuke and his lover's... That the bastard brother killed the girl and kept the child... before abandoning him as soon as his brother left the snake... ne? that would make lots of sense given your story... In that case... I wonder what Sasuke, Naruto and Itachi will say when they get to know where the kid is... nyan! cool!!!
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  • From on February 19, 2007
    GAh! It's been a long time since I've been desperate to see a fic updated by chapter 1!! Usually I wait a few chapters, but this...this! This is very intriguing and I really want to know what is going to happen next. It's really good. I love likkle chibi children getting mixed up into everything. And so long as Sasuke isn't dead, I think I'm really, really, really going to like this fic.

    Personal homage to Kenshin!!! *bows* LoVE it! This kid doesn't quite strike me as a Yahiko, but then again, that's okay, because it's a new Narutoverse kid (one I happen to be very fascinated with). The homage is appreciated by this one, that it is.

    I hope that you update soon, though I think I'll be keeping my eye on this one regardless.
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  • From nekochannya on February 19, 2007
    Intense... great start... I almost cant wait to see what's next... It really kept me on my toes, the tension, the fear, the distrust... it was all a rush... so please continue!
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  • From Allys on February 19, 2007
    Hey, I'm new here, so far I like it. I get the impression from your summary and the amount of reviews that there's a whole lot more of this that's already written, so YAY, does that mean really fast updates? If not is there anywhere I can still read the story in it's entirety? Cause I kinda wanna read the rest NOW :D!!
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  • From ANON - skippy dragon on January 06, 2007
    hhhm where to start
    I hate cliff hangers but what’s life with out a little suspense *grins*
    But I will also give a crack at giving constructive criticism (since you asked )
    Some spots move to slow that you almost lose the reader umm in the beginning of the story when Sasuke is meeting his son or looking at a photo it’s a little confusing because you got into hair color and sound like Yahiko had blond hair the rest of the time its black …..
    *blushes* hope that’s not to mean …. I don’t do mean
    But so far I like the story and wish to read it to the end
    Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - mishka on November 28, 2006
    HEY I LOVE YOUR STORY and I believe I would love to be added to your mailing list... Thank you for writing and posting such talent should not go to waste!
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  • From ANON - bob on November 28, 2006
    srry i forgot to include my email the4thzoro22@netscape.net
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  • From ANON - bob on November 28, 2006
    wow i really love this story! please send me stuff ^^
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  • From ANON - fox my friend on October 30, 2006
    You wrote "The human nose is highly sensitive to the smell of come, and Naruto was exception to this little fact."
    I think you meant "...' and Naruto was NO exception to this little fact."
    Other than that this is very well written. I really like it.
    I hope you are planning on continuing it. If you are continuing it I would like to be added to your mailing list.
    My e-mail is solaris_night@sailormoon.com
    thankyou
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  • From ANON - sam on October 25, 2006
    Ack where is the rest! MUST KNOW WHAT HAPPENS!!! Please email me when you continue with the story!!!
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  • From ANON - The Void on May 28, 2006
    Fantastic story. It is well written and the plot moves at a wonderfully enticing pace, not too fast and not too slow. The two children are brilliant, and I seem to hate Itachi more than usual now. A very interesting twist, having them with Gaara. I for one, hope that Sasuke and Naruto confront and destroy Itachi sometime in this story, with maybe a little help from that good old Scary Panda. ;)

    The NaruSasu is moving at what seems to be the perfect place, as you do not rush it and thereby make it unbelieveable, but develop the entire thing and raise it to a higher pedestal in this manner.

    I would be honoured if you would add me to the mailing list that you mentioned in the bottom of the last chapter.

    With that said, goodbye for now.
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  • From ANON - Ishtar on December 25, 2005
    Very intriguing story! I like the flow and the buildup of suspense and complications. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2005
    Update soon! I really like this fic! You plan to continue writing it, right? Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more in the future.
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  • From Sutashii on December 14, 2005
    oh I am soooo loving this and I would love to be on your mailing list!!! Great job so far Cant wait for more!! I love the boys!! and poor Gaara ... baby sit!!! haha that should be interesting!
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  • From ANON - Dawnfire on November 06, 2005
    Ok, that is so cruel to make Yahiko leave his family. So not cool. *mutters darkly about Itachi's demise* ahem, anyway, i really enjoyed reading this, i stayed up all night reading it, all 12 chapters, just because it was that good. i would very much appreciate it if you would add me to you mailing list. Anyways, take it easy, ja ne.
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