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Reviews for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

By : Tsukineko9

From ANON - Anon on January 25, 2006
Hi, I just found this story and it's great. You have a wonderfully descriptive writing style. I hope you get enough reviews to continue soon. Sorry I can't give advise or critice you or anything, but I'm not much of a writer. Hope you update soon.
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From ANON - Kimmehkim on January 25, 2006
Aaaaahhh... this chapter was so good yet the ending was so sad. Though I'm sure he'll make it and regain his eyesight, it would just be too massively cruel to seperate them twice. I look forward the next chapter~
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From ANON - Ravenstar on January 24, 2006
Ano, it's me again, I went through and read your reviews, and I have to wonder, why are you so hard up on getting more? It seems to me that you have a great deal of loyal followers to your story and their reviews are amazing. Any author would be honored by the reviews they have already recieved. So, even though I still think it would be good to reward your reviewers with sneekpeek excertps for reviewing, I have to agree with one of your reviewers when they said that choosing to put your story on this sight means that you do it for yourself, and your fans, but it is ultimatly YOUR choice to make. Not every one is going to get reviews for their storries, the fact that you have had so many hits speaks for it's self, but the amazing reviews about your story should have you riding on high. If you wish to continue this story then do so, I, as well as many others, would like that very much. If you don't wish to continue the story, many of us will be sad, but we will understand. The choice is yours, and no one elses, to make. Do not rely on the reviews of others to know the worth of your witting, do it because you love to write. This is all that I have to say. *Bows* Arigatou. I look forward to seeing more of your story, and hope that you will indeed continue this wonderful work of creativity, and art. Ja ne.
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From ANON - Brii on January 24, 2006
oh wow, im so glad you guys finally updated ^^ i really adore your stories, especially this one haha you left off last time at the mother of all cliffhangers XD
but anywho id like to say that you guys are doing a wonderful job with the development of this story. these last two chapters are really great, its so good to see sasuke come back and how much he and naruto love each other *is a sucker for that kind of stuff*
*squee* im really interrested in how the surgery is going to go, ill be waiting for the next update X3 hopefully its soon *tries to get more people to review*
keep up the great work ^3^
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From ANON - Ravenstar on January 24, 2006
Hi, hi! This is my first time reading this story, and so far I like it. The only thing that I have to complain about is that it got damn sugary there at the end, which is slowing the flow of the story down. I hope that it picks up soon, because the story deffinantly has potential of being a favorite of a lot of people. As for holding the chapters ransom, perhaps you could auction the chapters of insead? Like send the new chapters to those who give you a good, and decent review, and make others wait until you deside to put it on the site. That way the ones that review will come back and review more, to get a an early sneekpeek at the up comming chapter. If a person likes this story well enough, and really wants to read the next chapter, this would be a smarter way to get more reviews. It doesn't even have to be a full chater sent to them, just an excerpt. Your chapters are long enough to give us a taste, with out giving the whole chapter away. Just a thought. Keep up the good work, I hope to see a new update soon. Ja ne!

P.S. Onegai, make Sasuke-kun back to normal again, he just feels weird all weak, and clingy! He's a really cute bishie ass, and i want him back! *Cries*
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From ANON - Shadow on January 24, 2006
OMG!!!!!!!! I am about to cry, geez I'm all teary and crap over that last chapter, crap. Just write more okay. thanks!!!
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From ANON - shun on January 24, 2006
Eh! i thought i already reviewed but i think its not sucesful, anyway...

I really love this chapt. i like naruto being so possesive and sasuke is clingy! (evil laught!)... and Um! hehe naruto is a good cook, thats suprise me to the fullest! but i think its cute.

Wait for your update! love your story really!
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From ANON - elict on January 24, 2006
O. M. G. I didn't realize when i started reading that the
story wasn't finished. if i'd known that, i wouldn't have
stressed like this... to know the ending, just to find out
it isn't there yet!

but i'm happy! i'm so, so, so happy! now i have more to
look forward to! it's wonderful, it's fantastic, it's soooo
great! i'm hoping for an update soon, i can't wait (but
i'd never, ever press you... i know how is to have people
bug you to keep writing all the time... it sucks :S)

thank you thank you for editing! you know what? i'm so
attched to your stories a begged my teacher in english to
be able to use one of them for rewiev-work we have. hehe
i think she'll get a little bit of a shock when she realizes
it's about two BOYS...! *evil laughter*

yoai powah 4ever! i love you guys! (or girls?) hugs /elict
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From ANON - yan-yan on January 24, 2006
OH... MY... GOD ... that's all I can say... I'm speechless with this fiction so much... I need time to think... I'll come back later... Maybe by then, I have something to say already.... ........ .......... ........... .............. .................. ....................... ......................... ...............................
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From ANON - sasunarulvr on January 23, 2006
OMG! i was waiting forever for this story to be updated, so i never really checked this site because it was a long time.. and then my friend told me it was updated, and i almost screamed because i was so excited!!!!
i can't believe sasuke has amnesia!!! i feel so sorry for him.. and hurray for obaa-chan and her naruto-training!!!! i can't wait until 75 reviews is reached!! i want to read the next chapter so badly!!!!!
the two POV style is really cool and innovative, i haven't really read anything like this before!!!
keep up the GREAT work!!!
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From ANON - spikemyangel on January 23, 2006
very impressive fic. I like it so much that ransoming new chapters doesn't bother me much, so if you got 75 reviews that only said "great� or �update soon!", would those all count? I like to think that you write for the love of fiction & not for meaningless praise. Eh, whatever floats your boat. I love all the time you take to develop the plot, and the angst, that�s always fun, as long as there is a happy end.
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From ANON - elict on January 23, 2006
this is the most outstanding and the absolutely best sasuke/naruto
fanfic... no wait... i'm correcting my mistace - the most outstanding
and the absolutely best FANFIC i've read what so ever!

i've read a few of your other fics, a long time ago (don't really reme-
mber which ones) and this one... even though i was preperad ad knew
that all of your works are good... this really swept me of my feets!

...my school'd kind of angry with me now. i'v been laying my home-
work aside for almost a week, just to be able to read. i can't have
enough! it's like a drug! it's SO amazing, it's completely wonderful,
it's just... UNDESCRIBABLE!

thank you! thank you sooooooo much! i'm a BIG fan now, and now
you've got me, i'll never let you go! ...well, on to the story. thank you...

hugs /elict
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From ANON - Tokitoh on January 23, 2006
*sucks it up* *chokes* *coughs*
Somehow, in this story I really don't care about sex scenes, I even ended up skipping some because I was interested in the plot development. %) The ending seemed really pink and fluffy, but I don't care. The situation is just so horrible. Seeing the person that is dear to you so weak and miserable is extremely difficult. And this whole thing is even more difficult for Sasuke. But YAY for the surgery. ^_____^ Somehow, I believe that they'll be able to make it. I mean, they suffer so much... I would've been dead long ago if I had to go through all this. Too much suffering for my poor brain. *sobs*
Please continue. I am deeply interested. ^__^v

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From ANON - ky0kichi on January 23, 2006
Wow. This has got to be one of the BEST fics I've ever read. It's absolutely wonderful, not one moment of it was boring. I was automatically lured in. Usually, I don't like first person point of views, but the way you've done this one is absolutely wonderful. I love it! Seeing from EVERY persons point of view and knowing what they're thinking at any given time. It's a very very nice style of writing, and I encourage you to continue! It rocks!!! I'm on the edge of my seat as we speak! -waits in anticipation for a new chapter- I can't wait to see how Sasuke's surgery fairs. Ohh! I hope he gets his memories back! :F

Anyway. Sorry about the long and boring review, I usually don't leave serious ones. They're usually like "OMG OMG THIS IS SO COOL I LOVE IT PLEASEW UDATE WYR@#%WFSF -glomp-" But this story is special in my book, so. WAHAHA!!! -nice guy pose-
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From SeveredWings on January 23, 2006
Beautifully done. The way you write them is amazing, and the detailed world they live in. One of the best things I can review on is how well you describ Sasuke as a blind man. It's very hard for others to see him this way, yet you have made it believable. And, the love that Naruto and Sasuke share is wonderfully done as well. BUT, my all time favourite aspects of your story is the fights between Naruto and The Kyuubi. Most of the them are amusing, and I can SO see him fighting him in his head like that. Just think what the world would be like if Kakashi had a pervert demon fox in him???? OH the horror...LOL. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see more.

SeveredWings
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