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Reviews for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

By : Tsukineko9

From ANON - LibertyCrusader on January 29, 2006
I love your fic. I found it last night and read the entire thing straight through. Do you know how many words it currently is?

I really enjoy the switching between POV, I like seeing what's going on in each character's head even though no one in the fic can do so. I thought the lack of narration would bother me, but it's actually much better having it narrated through the characters' eyes.

I love your Naruto. First, I love his reaction to Sasuke. Having been alone for so long, and finally finding Sasuke, losing him, and then having him yet again, would definitely cause him to have a horrible breakdown if anything happened to Sasuke. Naruto is also totally cuddly. Second, I thought his merging with Kyuubi was written really well. His fucked-up, desperate thinking when Kyuubi was mostly controlling his thoughts was a nice look into his psychology. Also, Naruto castrating the fox was absolutely hilarious.

I think Sasuke (prior to his fall, obviously) is a bit OOC. I guess he's just too lovey-dovey and not enough of an asshole for me. This is just my opinion, though. I think he needs more Sasuke-esque comments when they're being affectionate. Although the way their relationship starts, with the sleeping together, is insanely cute.

Congratulations, you have managed to write a character that I hate almost as much as I hated Rita Skeeter when reading the 4th book for the first time. (I love her now) Junichiro is /such/ a bastard. I hope they tie him up and let small birds peck at his skin forever. Because...you know...that was just the first thing that came to mind.

GAH, I hope Sasuke gets his memories back really soon. Although it's going to be so painful for him to not have the Sharingan, even if he regains his eyesight. How can an Uchiha (at least one who's already developed it and relies on it) live without it?

Boys making out in bathtubs. Forever hot.

Please update soon!
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From ANON - Anon on January 28, 2006
It was so wonderful I was about to cry. I hope everything works out for my favorite yaoi couple NaruSasu. I loved the long chapters and how you guys explained Naruto and Sasuke's thoughts. I couldn't bring myself to stop reading until there was no more to read. *Cries* It was so beatiful. Anyways, I loved it so much I added it to my recommendations list.

Well excellent job on your writings, hope this continues and becomes even more awesome

Enma

p.s. I'M RIGHT HERE CHEERING SASUKE AND NARUTO! *runs away crying wishing that the relationship goes well*
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From ANON - SlightlySane on January 28, 2006
Awwww... ;__; Oh, Sasuke! I'm glad he's getting better, memory-wise. That part at the end almost had ME crying, too. I just keep loving this fic more and more. I hope everyone reviews so it's updated so quickly, like last time!
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From ANON - K.C on January 27, 2006
I LOVE IT YOU HAVE TO ADD MORE SOON. It took me like 3 hours to read the whole thing and it's really adn I'm kinda mixed up on Sasuke. On one hand I want the ninja, cold, hard assed, sexy as hell, bastard that was old Sasuke but on the other I kinda of like this sweet gentle, cute Sasuke. AS LONG AS HE DOSN"T DIE!!!!!!!!! Then I'd have to kill you(and so would Noruto)

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From ANON - Wari on January 27, 2006
Great Story!!! Please update soon.
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From Ashrey on January 27, 2006
Yay! Old sasu is coming back ^^ at last! and uh... can't you kill junichiro?? i HATE him so much T_T

About sakura... luv her atidute X3 and kakasixsakura?? one vote here ^^
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From ANON - Leasan on January 27, 2006
Gods... Can you get anymore sensual and moving and absolutely fabulous?? Probably you do... ^_^
You update so rarely that I didn't notice the previous update and I missed it out
but I had two chapters to read at once now!!
And since I read the previous ones so long ago, I decided to start from the beginning ^_^
So after reading all 8 chapters once again I'm smitten! I almost forgot how absolutely wondelrful is this fic.
At some point (last chapter) Sasuke was almost too sweet and soft, the Itachi-incident being the apogee of this side of his character,
but the small parts of his old behaviour popping here and there are making it all believable and satisfying.
I love the moment when he tries to dominate the kiss in the bath -awesome :)
I hope you'll update soon, I can't wait till he gets his sight back (I hope he does!!!) and sees what a hunk he's been making out with all this time ^_^
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From ANON - Stupidity Unleashed on January 26, 2006
ILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOUILOVEYOU!! YOUR CHAPTERS ARE SO LONG!! (squeal) And because of that...I have no complaints. The length of your chappies has exceeded my wildest dreams and made me an uber happy person :D Not only that, but your writing style and plot are AWESOME!! It's a dream come true...Anyway, I can't wait to read how Sasu-chan's surgery goes. I must admit that I'm extremely nervous. I'LL NEVER BE ABLE TO PAY ATTENTION IN MATH! D: Oh well. I always DID have trouble keeping myself from doodling or drifting off into a reverie in math class. I think it's natural XD As for the people that solely wrote "Update soon" (or anything along the lines of such a sorry excuse of a review) should be ashamed of themselves! I know I'd be pissed to read a crap-load of "Update soon" reviews! (sigh) I hope mine makes up for their rude and curt reviews...Or maybe I'm just aggravating you with this hella long review and taking up your precious time! I'MSORRYI'MSORRYI'MSORRY!! I'll shut up now. :3
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From ANON - Kuroiryuu on January 26, 2006
Assuming that the very 1st review on the 21st was #1, this review brings the count to 49 reviews. Come on guys, in 4 days, _during_ the work/school week, that's one hell of a turnout. (For those who, like me, are trying to bring the total up to 75 so that our author friends will take pity on us and update, that means we only have 26 more to go....if you each review 1! more time, we'll hit 75) As an aside to Kirei and Cecilia, if you guys haven't written chapter nine, yet, and you don't have writers block or anything, I would respectfully ask that you seriously consider getting it ready NOW since it doesn't look like it'll be more than 5 days {absolute MAX} untill the review count hits 75. NOW, moving on to actual story advice, might I recommend that you guys consider how Naruto and Sasuke are gonna eventually take care of "my lord bastard" Junichiro. Not wanting to be presumptuous here, but I'm fairly certain that at LEAST a 60% majority (of readers) would like to see the little odious dingleberry killed. Personally, I took great pleasure in conjuring up a humiliation-based scene wherein the ACTUAL Fire Lord (junichiro's father) and his whole court listen to a [restored] Sasuke and Naruto explaining their actions, and Sasuke telling them all about how the little bastard tried to force sasuke to sleep with him [ref Ch3] right in front of Junichiro's fiancee` and watch the chaos erupt. Even as a quiet scandal, that'd be a pain if found out and hushhed up, but in front of ALL the nobles....but I digress, my ideas are not yours, so finish the story whichever way it guides you. I'll be here reading your work 'till the story ends (and possibly beyond)
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From ANON - Mordant on January 26, 2006
Meh, what could I possible say that hasn't been said before? It's a truly sorrowful chapter, sprinkled with those lovely cuddle moments that are too cute for words. I envision Sasuke as a closet cuddle-whore while Naruto... well, he seems naturally inclined to physical reassurance. The Itachi intrusion was extremely well-timed, though his demeanor seems to lack his natural impassiveness that's become his trademark characteristic. He was a bit too... spiteful... for my liking. I guess I just have the idea that Itachi would verbally and/or physically combat Sasuke in private, but not in front of others. Well, not verbally in front of others. It's an odd idea, I suppose.

Anyhow, kudos on the long-standing lovability of your story (especially since it's worthy of the praise) and I hope it continues... soon. Very soon. Please update very soon. XP

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From ANON - Sweet Pea on January 26, 2006
OMG!! i love it so much your whole story, especially the way you developed sasuke's open-ness instead of just changing the character, ITS SO GREAT! i cant wait to read more
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From ANON - Lantherien on January 26, 2006
I found this story yesterday and in between sleeping have read the entire thing. I have to say....this is the best Sasu/Naru story I have read. I do get fustrated at times with Sasuke not being 'himself' but I rpriase you for this...it means you have written this story so well as to make you feel what the characters are feeling. It's Naruto's fustration I was feeling myself. High marks definately....is it at all possible to ask you to email me when the new chaps are up? I would be grateful. I'm also cursious as to where Sukura and Kakashe are going. Even before you wrote the convo between Naruto and Sasuke I was wondering at the time spent together. It would be a sweet twist to the tale. And he WAS the one to suggest she have childern to drive him batty. LOL. Once again well done.
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From ANON - Crystal on January 26, 2006
I wanna give you a really indeepth review with all that good stuff, but I don't really have a lot to say other than this story is very awesome. You explained the amnesia and the dissociative disorder very well. You just took some sort of Psych class didn't you? Anyway. I like the way Sasuke's personality changes so slightly and everything. I get so excited when I see the small changes. And OMG Itachi, I was so scared! Poor Sasuke. Um, other than that I can really just say it's a really awesome story and I hope you update soon.
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From ANON - Bob the builder on January 25, 2006
Your story has gotten quite interesting so far and I know I'm just waiting for another twist (though I must admit I knew that Mitani would turn out to be Sasuke from the moment he was introduced). I can't wait to see how the next chapter will turn out.

(Thank you, by the way, for writing it.)
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From ANON - Rurouni_Kunoichi on January 25, 2006
This is an excellent story, very well written and thought out. I can tell you put a lot time into it, and can't blame you for asking for lots of reviews, because you do indeed deserve them. You have my vote to keep writing! Reflections is very compelling and I am dying to read what happens next. :)
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