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Reviews for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

By : Tsukineko9

From ANON - Eiram on February 05, 2006
I have followed this story for a while now and I love it.. never planned on writing a review though, because of my rather bad english, but since you are demanding some and definately deserve them I'll give it a shot. I truly love your Naruto (normally I don't really like him that much) and the situation with the Kyuubi is very interesting. I can't wait to see how it is going to turn out. is it really starting to come under Narutos control? I like the way you are switching the pov's. I thought it would be hard to follow, but you write very clearly and the difference between Naruto and Sasuke is easy to see. Though I love all the twists and turns this story is taking I really want Sasuke back. still it is nice to see a Sasuke without all his horrible memories, though it still is not truly Sasuke. I think I lost even myself there, so I'll give up now. it is a great story and I can't wait to read more.
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From ANON - kuroiryuu on February 05, 2006
Holy Crap! I got in #75 and #50 w00t!

Ok your loyal readers ran the gauntlet, I hope we have proven ourselves worthy. Please, please, in the name of all that is good fanfiction post the next chapter! I must know how they deal with the upcoming operation and Sasuke's (probable) upcoming arguments with Naruto as more bits of his memory return right before the operation. I don't want to die of suspense! I've found my other near-death experiences there quite painful and dragged out. Your grammar is great (and there I wouldn't lie, even at the fate of the chapter being held hostage, cause i'm grammatically OCD like that) which is more than i can say for most fics. The plot is amazing and your readers are hooked. Inspiration, we command thee to strike the authoresses POST HASTE!

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From ANON - Caro on February 05, 2006
*blinks* Wow. *blinks* Wow. What is this burning sensation at the corner of my eyes. *gasp!* No they are NOT tears! I refuse to tear up at ANYTHING!

Um...okay, besides that. I've actually be following this fic for quite a long time now and you really do have a knack for conjuring up teary scenes (as well as great Kyuubi/Naruto humor moments). This story is a unique work of art, all I have to say (I doubt your other viewers would disagree). Everyone seems to be pretty in character (except Sasuke but that's understandable with all that's happened to the poor blind Uchiha) and I do believe someone needs to beat the pulp out of "my lord bastard", put it back in, then beat it out again. Creating an OC that people really do feel emotions to hate is a sign of a good writer and you two have handled it marvelously.

Hmmm....what else? Oh yes, I hope things work out well for Sasuke and Naruto (poor guys. They've gone through hell and back and it's STILL not enough for them). Good luck on the next chapter! I will await with smiles (and soda).
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From ANON - ma-chan on February 05, 2006
wow teh end made meh sad....i hope for an update i ish addicdted to this story....
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From Inuzuka on February 04, 2006
This is still a heartbreaking story, and the perspectives method you use is still so effective. I'm worried right now, as in, I feel...sympathetic, I guess is the best concept to compare to it. I'm not sure I fully connect them with each other anymore, though. I don't really think of them as Kishimoto's characters now, I think of them as yours. Like they might've been those people long ago, but too much tragedy occured, driving them to who they are now.

Anyways, I'm proud of you, you're awesome, keep it up! That's the best way to describe how I feel about this fiction, seriously.
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From ANON - Lesser Evil on February 03, 2006
I absolutely love this story its SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO addictive. Its so good that I can't stop myself from reading even though I know I should me working on my own stories. Update soon please.
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From Dawnofyourheart on February 02, 2006
Wow this one is really really amazing, i hope sasuke gets his memories back adn sight, but doesnt get the cursed seal back.....i like your story u guys are amazing authors
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From ANON - burr on February 02, 2006
the story's absolutely amazing. i can't wait to read the next chapter :) i'm so curious how it'll turn out, especially since the story presents us with a lot of surprises :) awww, sasuke's such a poor thing, i really want to cuddle him right now... and to think i didn't like him at all when i first began to read the manga! now i absolutely adore narusasu :)

please, keep up the great job. and update soon, ooh! :)))
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From ANON - Billie on February 02, 2006
OMG!!!!! I'm DYING here!! :) You two are very very talented. I've been reading FanFiction for a while now... and so far you two are my favorite! I love the story line, it's so invovling! I nearly cried when they found Sasuke again. I've been avoiding reading my history homework, and I've been reading this instead (I think it's been about 4 days it took me to read this, among classes and homework and boyfriend *sigh*). This is truly a wonderful story and I really hope you update soon so I can enjoy it even more! You guys are TOO COOL!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I hope you got your 75 reviews... I have no doubt that they'd all be raving about this story!

Take care! Billie
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From ANON - Whispers in the Wind on February 01, 2006
Must review or *gasp* left with evil unsatisfactory ending. ACK! Review. Review. Review!
I'm so happy you updated this, I hadn't looked at it for a while and I was all 'Le gasp! TWO new chapters? Yosh! Must praise author!'

*In a meek voice* but isn't 75 reviews a bit much? Regardless, you have a wonderful story in the works and (hopes very strongly) that you update again soon.

*Bows* *Leaves offerings of Jolt cola and chocolate*

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From ANON - Psylocke on February 01, 2006
KYAAAHHH!!!!! ok, haven't actually READ the new chapter(s) yet, but that won't stop me from throwing myself at your feet and kiss the ground you walk on! Thank you so much for continuing with this fic, I thought for sure it was another one of my favourites to be discontinued. Will print this and read at work! :3
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From ANON - konpeitou on January 31, 2006
75 until the next update? *whines.. and then grabs a stick to make others review* Such cruelty T__T

Well, to give a more full review than that, I'd like to say that I rather like the idea and basic plot of this story, so far. Especially the way Naruto is made. Sasuke seems a tad off, but then.. I never really liked him much anyway (so it goes to show i like the story, that I read so much of one that features a character I dislike ^^;). The only thing I didn't particularly like much was how quickly Sasuke jumped into things with amnesia... it seemed really fast and easy how he gave into and got attached to Naruto. It seems more likely that someone with amnesia would be hesitant and maybe even scared of anything that felt familiar but he didn't *know*. Also, I don't think he'd have lost so much of his reflexes... when he's trained for most of his life, things become instinctual, and instincts aren't really damaged by memory loss.

*shrugg* those are the only things I thought were a bit odd, and please don't take it the wrong way. It's your story, your ideas, and it's obvious you wouldn't go back and change that much of a story you've already written. I just add my impression, but aside from that I still enjoy this story and look forward to the next chapter. ^^;
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From ANON - Maria on January 31, 2006
WOOOOWW! ::Drools:: I totally love this story. Seriously. Awesome characterization and great plot.

As a little side note, I love how you're having Naruto do the whole 'meditation' thing. I'm in a Far East History class, and we're studying Buddhism and how you "find yourself" through meditation and reach a higher level of being. This was very similar and I found that quite cool.

Please post more soon! XD
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From ANON - Argento on January 30, 2006
Yay! Update! I seriously love this fic... Sometime I get a bit confused as to who's point of view its from at times, but I still love this!

Keep up the awesomeness.

I hope Sasuke doesn't turn back into an ass when he gets his memories back. ;.; Though it would make for more fun angst.
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From ANON - Cat on January 29, 2006
See I was serious *bump* *bump* *bump* *glomp* *bump* *bump* *bump* !!!
NOW NEW!!!! XD
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