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Reviews for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

By : Tsukineko9

From ANON - Mitternatch on July 03, 2006
WOOTOTOTOOTTTOOWOOW.....urhm, eah? Anyways, this story rox. you rock....I'm from Germany and don't speak very good english but my friend translated this story for me and I louve it! Sorry I can't help much with grammar mistakes or of the spelling but I hope you get great reviews! God Speed!

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From ANON - Klax on July 03, 2006
This is an extremely original story. Upon reading so far, (and not seeing the rest -_- j/k j/k), i was compelled to see if any other espiring artists like yourselves had tried to do a "sasuke has amnesia" twist. However, I am forced to reply that I have NOT found _any_. Of course there were a lot of Naruto being taken over by Kyuubi, etc, but none with Sasuke being the so called "victum." I myself am a great fan of uke Sasuke and I take whatever I can get. (There are just so _few_!) Oh, I'm off the point: This is a very "new" story plot and it's very refreshing. I also like the way you narrate. Of course I have to admit that at times I have to back track and see whose narrating...perhaps making one in bold and the other not would alleviate that ... problem? Just a thought. Ok...let's see. The suspense is also a very good factor! I reeeally want to know (and I want to hope! ahh) that Sasuke gets his memory back. Even if I have never watched or read Naruto you're story creates such a dire _need_ for the reader to wish for some resolution. We're all (well..unless there preproposed Sasuke haters....) sit here and hope because of the power of the emotions we see from Naruto, that Sasuke can come back. Tee...also on a personal wish I reeeaaallly hope Sasuke's hair grows back quickly...i miss it! T_T Well...keep up the good work and I hope you get 75 reviews reeeallly quickly! (pulls hair out of skull with impaitence) I'm trying to hold my emotions in... *deep breath* ^_^

Thanks for writing such a great story!!

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From ANON - Tsukasaru on June 27, 2006
Gods! I just.. LOVE this story. I've been reading it now, for two days, almost in a row, and I'm just absolutely smitten with this, hooked on it. Ever since the first chapter, I've just grown more and more attached to this fanfiction. I love the whole entire plotline, and I love how unpredictable, and yet so wonderfully smooth the writing is. I adore it. I love the style and format you have chosen for it, and I love every single emotion, thought and detail put into your story. I'm so glad I found this. At one point, I began to tear up. The part where Sasuke brushes his knuckles lightly over Naruto's cheek while they're on the bed ... I don't know, it was just so intimate, surreal, and believable and beautiful all at the same time that I could almost feel how strong they felt at that very moment. It really came through to me. It was so personal, and touching, that I just couldn't hold it in. There's MANY, many parts in this story that I favor, but I have to say that that part would be my definite favorite. It really moved me. It's amazing to me, how someone can write so wonderfully like that. I have to thank-you for this wonderful piece of writing. I'm also curious to know, is this indeed the last chapter? Somehow, if it were, that wouldn't bother me horribly. It ends well, even though there are loose ends left unmended. It leaves it up to the reader, though, to decide what happens. I imagine a happy ending, anyways, definitely. But if this isn't the last chapter, then you have my undevided attention and my hopefulness and excitement waiting for the end to come. I don't know what else to say. There's absolutely nothing I can critique you on. I can't tell you in words how much I love Reflections. It's just what I needed, and again, I send you guys a thanks. This was awesome to read. It's moved me in many ways. And now I'm repeating myself. LoL ... The characters are perfect, and I just love everything about this. I pray for Naruto and Sasuke's happy future; pray Sasuke regains his memories and deals with them in a healthy way, and pray that Naruto is there to deal with it with him, by his side. That his surgery goes excellent, and he regains his pretty Sharingan. Hopefully, it all ends happy. ^-^ Hee. Wishful thoughts, yes'm. You guys rock. Seriously. You have alot to be proud of, here.
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From ANON - Joker on June 12, 2006
I loved your story and can't wait to see what happens next! I hope you get 75 reviews soon! ^_^
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From ANON - lani on June 05, 2006
you are talented fanfic writers. i love your stories and plots and i especially love this story. i hope you update soon, because i can't stand not knowing what happens next. naruto is definitely my favorite anime/manga, and your fanfic stories only add to that. i hope you get back to this story soon. I hope to read the rest of it soon!

-lani
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From ANON - W on March 15, 2006
Well, it seems AFF is finally open again. But it also seems you haven't either A- Finished the chapter, or B- Received enough reviews. Allow me to add to that B. I love this fic. It is so sad at the moment! Will the operation work? What is going to happen to Itachi and Orochimaru now? Why am I asking these questions when they will be answered in due time? I want to see how it continues on! Please update soon!
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From ANON - Marnie on March 14, 2006
Oh wow, I love your stories, I just finished Spartan Ninjas, and I loved that too! I'll probably go and read all your other ones too while I wait for an update on this one.
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From ANON - Reemu-Chan on March 11, 2006
There aren't any words strong enough in the human dictionary to describe what this whole story means to me. First off, while the site had its complications, I ran across your story. I was reading up on Chasing Naruto, and the author, Akatsuki, had your story on the recommended readings' list. I started reading it and found myself continue to do so until time reached about 5:30 in the morning. gods, I would've went on reading it if my dad had not woken up. Even IF I'm 19, he'd kill me for still being up. Anyways, I wasn't aware that AFF was transfered over here, so I was unable to give you a review for every chapter that I've come across by. Maybe though, I'll be able to sum it up in here. I love the way you started out the story. But my gosh, I felt so bad for Naruto-kun that I cried. poor guy. Being played by some snobby girl. and then that lording bastard. Good grief, I'd seriously would've already busted a cap on that a-hole. GRRRR. He made me extremely pissed. And all those times he tried to get into Sasuke's pants, does he not know the meaning of 'no'? I'm very impressed with how you still have them in character and how Naruto and Sasuke's relationship gradually strengthened thoughout the story. It made it more touching whenever they'd caress with one another. And then there's the whole thing with that seal on Sasuke's neck. It terrified me. And just so I won't get all mixed up, Sasuke can't use his sharingan eyes when Orochimaru is near? I never knew that. But then again, I haven't even gotten to the episode where Orochimaru bites Sasuke. But I'm still very well aware of everything that happened to him and him running away to the damn snake. Ok, moving on. When that lady though him over the cliff. . . . . . wow, I was horrified. and then the way you described him seeping into unconcsiousness, that scared me. I didn't know what you two were heading with that. I thought maybe you decided to kill him off. So I began to cry. But that was nothing compared to how I felt when they discovered his bloodied Hitai-ate. That made me break down and I just kept sobbing. Good think it was like 3:20 in the morning. Otherwise my parent's would've thought that I've lost my mind. Passing by the room and seeing me weep all over the keyboard. *shakes head* and then there was the whole thing with Naruto trying to bring down the cliffs and all b/c he had completely exploded with anger. now, even then, the lording asshole HAS to say something about the poor guy. Why can't he just give him a break. He's just lost someone precious. Thank you so much for having Sakura slap him. He deserves a kick in the balls if you ask me. Moving on, I got really emotional when I read that he was kept all chained up in the basement of the Hokage tower. It depressed me. And Sakura was REALLY trying to get to him. But he kept on pushing her away. Like she meant nothing. I don't blame the poor blonde. She was always infatuated with the Uchiha, and she always ridiculed Naruto. She always turned him down, never giving him a chance. But I couldn't help but to feel for her. She was depressed that Sasuke was gone, possibly dead, and now her only other comrade was shielding himself from the world, while the only other sane person, Kakashi sensei, was gone along with a team of ANBU, trying to recover the raven-haired shinobi (who was already possibly dead). She was losing her mind. Her guys were dissappearing before her eyes. Yet, she still fed Naruto. I found that cute. But damn, you sure formed him into sounding like a Bastard. On second thought, that was Kyuubi. Damn that fox. Well, atleast you had Hinata sneak inside the cell and he found out that Sasuke really HASN'T been found. He finally knew that everyone has been telling him the truth. And it's a relief to know that he didn't burn Hinata-chan to a crip. That would've been awful. Afterall, she does love him ^^. Atleast he became himself after Sakura said those words to him. She almost actually slept with him. WOW. what a shocker. Again, damn that Kitsune. Okay, when we finally find out that Sasuke is alive, that's when I was left breathless. But . . . . he was blind. And even worse, had amnesia. That made me cry so much. It seems that 95 percent of the time I was reading your fanfic, I spent my time crying. I couldn't help it. You both create such a believing atmosphere. I can't help but to get absorbed into what's going on and how the characters are feeling. When you brought Sasuke down into the cell, and Naruto was able to smell his 'vanilla and steel scent' it made me so happy. And I think that I'm motivated in drawing a pic where Sasuke is Hugging Naruto. oh, and just so you know, I cried b/c he wasn't able to hug back. And then you had Sasuke angry b/c he realized that Naruto was chained up like a harmful creature. Poor Naruto thought it was b/c he had kissed him. And then Sasuke unchained him and they both got into the whole cuddling thing again. That made me so happy ^-^ And I actually laughed when Kakashi sensei wanted to take "notes" ^.^ Thank you Sakura for allowing the two lovebirds some privacy. But too bad, Kyuubi just couldn't stand being ignored, so he decided to torture Naruto into unconsciousness. Damn Mongrel. But nonetheless, making Sasuke straddle him and speak threateningly to the 9 tailed fox did add some humor and me smile that Sasuke could STILL be Sasuke ^0^
Alrighty, moving on again, b/c I'm probably irratating the both of you from this story length comment: I'm glad that they were able to spend time together Naruto-kun was actually able to sleep in a bed ^^. That was cute. and especially the whole shower thing. Talk about hot. *evil fangirl sneer*
Fastforwarding some: That dream that Sasuke was having. The one with him coming face-to-face with Orochimaru. Yeah well, the way that Naruto got so angry at him in the morning, that mad me extremely sad. Poor Sasuke-kun. He felt rejected by the only person he seemed to recognize. And then he was beginning to have doubts. That maybe Naruto didn't like him anymore. That made me cry. But still, that was nothing compared to how I felt when Sasuke made his own breakfast. Poor guy :*( And then it was later that night, where he was deathly scared in making Naruto angry. He didn't want that. My hands were shaking when I read that part. He couldn't even bring himself to tell Naruto that he keeps on feeling as if someone was watching him. Now, whether that was Itachi or Orochimaru, don't know. But the day that Itachi decided to pay him a frightening visit boiled by blood to the bone. So glad that Naruto made it in time. It seems that Sasuke is beginning to be himself. Even if the cuase of it was from the enounter of his physcotic brother. Dammit, my mom keeps calling me. She needs help in the kitchen. Now, as much as I'd love to add another chapter to this comment ^^, I think that I'll spare you and get to my last conclusion. When Sasuke said "Naruto-koi" while they were making out, that made my heart twist. and you guessed it, I started crying again. That surgery. . . . . I deathly afraid of how it's going to turn out. And I was thinking about it for the passed week. I can't seem to get my mind distracted from it.
okay, I hope I didn't make you two sleep through this comment, couldn't quite help it. I love your story. And I really cannot wait till the next chapter. Please update soon ^-^

~Redwitch05 ^_~
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From ANON - shade on February 14, 2006
God, just Damn...This is a really great fic and... damn just hurry and write another chapter, It's really too good. I adore the way you make their relation ship work. The fact that they are so completly devoted to one another... Just really a great story and the way they switch povs adds to it all.
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From ANON - melissa on February 14, 2006
omg its such a good story i love it i hope susuke will be ok and naruto finally can have his mind back and they will be able to stay to gather i hope you update soon because your writing is really good.
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From ANON - phoenix_griffen on February 13, 2006
I LOVE THIS STORY!

I have been looking for a really good Sasu/Naru for a long time, and your story is the best i've come across. It's so heartwrenching and I can't take my eyes off the screen while reading it! I will bookmark it immediately so that I can come back to read the next chapter. Please email me when the next chapter comes out. Some writer suggestions: Try to include more imagery in your writing, especially when dealing with Sasuke's point of view, also remember that Sasuke has to have that surgery eventually!

Sincerly,

Phoenix_Griffen
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From ANON - jO on February 11, 2006
wow... this story is so beautiful... and i absolutely adore the way it's written in the first person! it's what makes it more special and what gives more intensity to the story! you made me cry so many times that i lost count!! i hope you update soon! kiss kiss ***
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From ANON - Maa-chan on February 09, 2006
Oooh! This story is fantastic! I found it a few days ago, it's taken me forever to catch up, but I finally have! This is a great story. Your doing an amazing job at keeping everyone in character. Wonderful story, I do hope you update soon.
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From ANON - chem chick on February 08, 2006
Wow! What a great story! You two put so much detail into the story! All the buildup, and then Sasuke's gone, and now he's back...talk about gut-wrenching! ...But in a good way. Wonderfully written, you guys are great! I can find no wrong here, so keep on keepin' on with the right! Stuff, that is...:) Eagerly waiting your next update!!!
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From ANON - Mayla on February 08, 2006
OMGQ This story is the greatest! I love it sooo much, I was like totaly crying at the end of this chapter. 75 reviews? then I'll make sure that everyone of my friends read this fic and leave very, very, very long, wondrous reviews! Update soon!
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