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Reviews for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

By : Tsukineko9

From ANON - marina on October 24, 2006
Hi!my name's marina and I'm from italy.I just finished reading your fic 'reflections' and I must say that till now it was wonderful!*_* I really love it!!among other fics i have read,here the style is unique(we see the inner thoughts of the characters and their respective view points...smtimes knowing what one of them still does not),it has nice descriptions(realistic enough)and an always evolving plot(from the initial mission -to protect that lord/bastard- till now -that naruto turns kyuubi form and sasuke was considered lost(;__;sasukeeee!!)- I couldn't stop reading! I really stuck with it!)
I liked the way their relationship evolved throughout the story.Also..I kinda noticed that you treated sakura better from some point on, whereas in the beggining you presented another opinion of her(how come?O.O did you change your mind..?I'm not contrary of course, I like sakura even though rooting for yaoi hehe^^...unfortunately almost Everyone writing yaoi hates sakura=.=...I'm glad to see you make an exeption^^)Oh!by the way. I absolutely. adored. the kyuubi-naruto. dialogues!I've never seen smth like this on other fics,it's..geez, great!!!!^O^
Especially on the latest chapters, that sasuke is blind and has lost his memories, I couldn't wait to read next!I kept thinking what about the surgery, will he regain his sight, will he remember of Naruto etc...and then I saw that you are waiting for people to review..(ahhh!!XDDDDD please please pleaseee will you update soon?I can't wait, your sasunaru so much rulez!*.*)hope to get a reply, bye
~marina
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From ANON - Lilith on October 20, 2006
so... can anyone explain to me exactly what is going on? As far as i can tell, its been nine months since this story has been updated. i'd love to see it continued but i am starting to give up hope. someone please email me!!! lilithwolf@excite.com
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From ANON - Laura on October 15, 2006
You didn't finish this story? You are some evil people.

I won't hold out too much hope though, it's been too long...I'm sad you abandoned it though.
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From ANON - tootalltygerlily on October 14, 2006
I came across a pic by Zardra over at y!gallery and it had a link to your story here...

Feeling up to a little light reading, I started on your fic...and was so thoroughly ensnared that a few hours had passed without me even noticing...only for the extremely sore butt and crick in the neck roused me enough to tell me that I should have been off to bed a long time ago.

I was able to catch snippets in between times that I could snatch the computer before I left for work. Throughout my shift my mind kept wandering back over and over to your story...hell, I even contemplated ending shift early just to get back to reading this.

I haven't been dragged so thoroughly into a story since Resmiranda's "Tales of the House of the Moon". I want to thank you for taking me on an exciting journay so far and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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From ANON - missBlue on October 07, 2006
O.o Soooo dramatic. So awsome. You have a wonderful writing style. I love it. And I can hardly wait for the next chapter. *glues slef to computer and waits*
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From ANON - silphy on October 02, 2006
Just wanting to know when you were going to updat this story. I really like it and was wanting to find out what happens to Sasuke and Naruto.
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From ANON - Ryn_Akira on September 23, 2006
PPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE don't stop the story there! You've GOTTA finish it! PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!

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From ANON - tortilla lady on September 17, 2006
You made me cry!!!!! damn you!!!! great story!! i can't wait for the next chapter!!! *rushes out to buy more kleenex* please update soon!
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From ANON - Lilith on September 17, 2006
please, please, PLEASE continue this! This is such a wonderful story I actually stretched it out as much as possible to make it last. I love it and cant wait to read more!
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From ANON - Zully on September 10, 2006
I was aboslutely caught up in your story-- read all your one-shots first, fell in love with your style and character portrayal, and picked up this as your first chapterfic to read through. I adored your story, got caught up in the heartbreaks of your characters--

Until I read that you hold your fic ransom until you get x number of reviews. Now I'm hesitant to get into any more of your works, honestly. Anyone who demands fan worship before moving on is clearly an author with zero integrity or love of her own work. Write for yourself, not for some dream of becoming a BNF by refusing to write until a certain number of fans acknowledge you. I won't be reccomending any of your works to my friends; in fact, I'll be warning them about the poor and demanding attitude you have of your reading base. If they choose to get sucked in by you, it's their loss.
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From ANON - S on September 06, 2006
loving the all ur work keep up the good work
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From ANON - AJ on September 04, 2006
Wow, not even I am that cruel, you are being a bit unreasonable, you should write for yourself not for others, if you want people to see it, let them, don't make rules. But heya that's just me. Pretty good story.
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From ANON - ChrisKaz on September 04, 2006
AWWWWWW! That last part was just so sad and beautiful! That Sasuke might die, and that Naruto loves him so much that he would follow him into death; now that's true love! Simply beautifully written! I really love this story, and all the others of yours that I've written. Say, what if I review by myself 75 times, and say something different or comment on the story each time, will that count as 75 reviews so you'll update? Please? Darn, I don't think that will work for you, but email if it does, cause then I will! (But boy, that'll take a while!) I guess I shouldn't say too much in this one in case I have to use these comments in other reviews. But this is such an amazing story! I love it! I really like how your chapters are so long; provides lots of meat to sate my appetite. I think it was great how you had the suspense of Sasuke's discovery intermingled with Naruto's going ons. It shows that things were happening while Sasuke was missing, and it really reflected on how much had changed after he was found. There's so much character development goin on, I don't know how you keep up with it all. I'd be lost if I was writing it, but I'm glad I'm not, cause I would just bungle this awesome storyline! You two are both totally amazing writers, and I look forward to reading any new updates or new saga storys! Thanks so much for writing and providing readers with such an enjoyable read! Love, Christine.
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From ANON - LathainZeal on September 02, 2006
Well, this was amazing.

I don't want to rant and rave about your review policy, suffice to say that I think you seemed a bit harsh in mentioning that you wanted seventy-five reviews this time.

Characterization was spot on. Although, the falling off the cliff and getting amnesia was like something out of a soap-opera. I laughed, which is most likely not how you'd intended the scene to go.

Sasuke's recovery seems a little fairy-tale-ish to me, but considering the depth of his and Naruto's relationship, it's not beyond the realm of possibility.

All in all, the good points are abundant, and carry that elusive, unidentifiable quality that makes me say "This is a damn good story." and yet leave me unable to clarify why I think that.

Definetly looking forward to more, and here's hoping it's not abandoned. It's been, what, nine months now? I'm not sure what the normal schedule is like at all though, so, that could be a commonplace period of time between updates.

~LZ
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From ANON - Adrienne on August 29, 2006
I very much hope you continue with this story. Its been hard to find really, REALLY great SasuNaru fics. I actually stayed up until four thirty in the morning last night just so I could read as much as possible. Its now one in the morning today (I only found the story a day ago!!!), so I've been devoting a lot of time to it.

Pleae continue and keep up with the wonderful work. The characterization is brilliant. Naruto is an engaging character, and I'm glad to see how you've developed Sakura into a more well-rounded, less obnoxious character. I've not been a fan of hers in the anime, but you are doing wonders with her in this story.

:-D
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