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Reviews for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

By : Tsukineko9
  • From ANON - Gara on April 25, 2005
    Never before have i been this depressed/sadden by a story.
    The way that you wrote Naruto as he is in the cell is so heart wreching it brought me to tears.
    Naruto aguring with Kyuubi was totally on the spot, and with Naruto thinking everyone is lieing to him made sence
    with how the village always betraded and hurt him way would he believe what they are saying.
    I hope the Sasuke is found alive and hopfully Orochimaru did get him.
    Also what the nobiles wouldn't have Naruto kill once they see him though the glass.
    I really love your story so far and i hope that you will update this story soon.
    I'm hoping for a happy ending because if it turns out with Sasuke died and Naruto being killed and you writing it
    I don't know if i will stop crying(i still haven't stop for this chapter sorry for any typos)
    Until Next Time
    ~Gara
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  • From ANON - macy on April 25, 2005
    whoa!! an update after months of waiting! you have no idea how fast i clicked on the link the moment i saw that you updated! Wee...i think i've read the first 4 chapters at least 5 times while waiting for the 5th chapter. and what do i get? such depressing moments?!??! hee..im not angry, lol. just really sad. man, i mean poor naruto. haaaa...i wonder where sasuke is? please don't tell me he's really dead! or else, oh no. i can't have naruto continue like this. it's just really heartbreaking. well, i hope you won't suffer from major writer's block anytime soon coz i really wanna know what happens next. fabulous writing as usual (the extra long chapter made me happy too). this chapter really moved me. thank you very much for writing it.
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  • From ANON - may on April 21, 2005
    noooooooooooooo!!!! not a cliff hanger!!!!! is naruto going to jump in after him too??? will he save him in time???? this is just too much for me to take in!! must know what happens next! the suspense is killing!!!!
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  • From ANON - Sha-kun on April 03, 2005
    Holy hell! You rock! The story is wonderful and I absolutely adore it (along with all your other fics). You are my idols! *bows and worships the almighty writers* I am awaiting th next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Leah on March 22, 2005
    I really love your story!! They're so good charachterized! (B )
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  • From ANON - lo on March 15, 2005
    cool story. I like how it is developing.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on February 22, 2005
    First, I have to just say i'm awed by your work. It is beautiful. I have hardly seen many people who can portray the characters just the way they want. Your grammar is wonderful, and your plotline leaves nothing to be desired. I think it was great of you two to collaborate on this. It has worked very well and I wait in ernest for your next chapter. Goodluck.
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  • From ANON - kp on February 12, 2005
    Please update!! I love what you have so far, but even though cliff hangers are fun, they do just torture us readers. I know it takes a time to write a story of this caliber, but please update as soon as you can *beg on hands and knees*. Thank you for your hard work.
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  • From ANON - Yami-Hikari on February 01, 2005
    Wow... Take your time with the chapters, as long as they keep up the absolutely stunning perfection that they are now.
    I can't find words that describe how perfect this fic is... it's absolutely amazing. Just really... wow.
    The characters are perfectly in character, the descriptiveness is exact and the POV changes are leaving me gasping at the perfect icing on the cake. I can barely believe that there is such an amazing fic in this world, it's heaven to read.
    I'll be checking every hour for an update, and I'm going to reccomend it to every SasuNaru fan I know.
    This fic is as close to perfection as I could ever imagine. I'm off to read the rest of your fics, I think I'll faint if they're any better than this.
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  • From ANON - Tsugath on January 29, 2005
    Hey, I'm re-reading this story for the umteenth time. Can you update it soon? Please? Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - Kazu on January 20, 2005
    Wowies! I luff! I can't wait till the next chappie! Hopefuly Sasuke will be able to finish what he started... Tee hee ^^
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  • From ANON - Maz on January 19, 2005
    Waaaai!!! Such a lovely story. I love how it's done. The Kyuubi thing is very interesting as well. I bet it's just sexual frustration from not being able to do anything/much for 18 years.

    Well I'll definitely keep watching this story...
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  • From ANON - Nark on January 16, 2005
    Congratulations!!

    Never before did I read such a long story of this kind! And I just say long in compartion, but, in fact, I'm just thrilled to read more!! I just can't wait for the next chapter to be updated!!
    I started reading the story from the 2nd or 3rd chapter, just wanting it to cut to the chase, but after a little time had to start reading it from the very beggining!! It's just so... everything!
    At first, the doble-POVed style confused me a little, but I gradually get used to it, moreover, now I find it's just excellent; it's just great to know what both characters are thinking, and besides, it gives the chance for the reader to feel as if you were either Naruto or Sasuke, and not just the one whose only POV would be shown if you had chosen another style. Great job!
    There's no Naruto without fox. And your fox is also great. I love that you left what he says to tour imagination, and just wrote Naruto's replies. Sometimes I couldn't stop laughing at its thoughts and teases!! Will Naruto give in to its demands in the end? Don't tell me!!
    Naruto's and Sasuke's personality are very well done! Of course they have to be different in some way to the "real" ones, but you two made those differences fit perfectly to their original characters, so you easily recognise them. Naruto's need for acceptance and Sasuke's longing for love are so delicious!! And thanks you kept their usual "real" banter; they wouldn't just be themselves without it! I also like the way they help each other, now Naruto helps Sasuke, then the other way around, it's so tender... I also love when Sasuke waits for Naruto to act first, and..., and... (I don't want to bore you)
    The sex scenes are just so sexy and a total turn-on. They are so explicit and still so intimate. I die to see it at "level 2". There's so much implied, things you don't read but you are told along the whole story... It's all so expressive and feelings-filled! It's great they don't just free their insticts at once and go little by little... the more it takes the more pleasant (just to write a soft word) it will be, and still not lingering too much.
    It's so good I cannot think about anything bad to say about it, maybe just the fact that I have to wait for the next chapter(s) to be written...
    Great job, keep at the good work. Thank you, Cecilia & Kirei, for your imagination.
    P.S.: Since I read your story I haven't read any other Naruto fic, neither want to, because I don't want my actual conception of your characters to fade away. For me, they are the real Naruto and Sasuke and I don't want to read about fake ones!
    By the way, when comes the next (5th) chapter? I'm just so anxious!!
    (I'm Spanish and maybe I couldn't express what I think fairly enough in English, put it like this, multiply what I've just written by a hundred or more and that's what I really feel about your story)
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  • From ANON - Hawkmun on January 13, 2005
    Oh... My... God... I just read everything you ahve so far in one sitting... I about to cry because there isn't another chapter. This is by far the best fanFiction I've EVER read, and I like to think I've read quite a few. Part of it may be due to my love of SasuNaru, I don't know, it's amazing though and I hope you update again soon! Believe you me, I'll be bookmarking it and checking everyday for updates!!!

    ~Hawkmun
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  • From ANON - hitobito on January 06, 2005
    oooooh.... they where taken by surprise! where is Sasuke now? hey, did his hand bones healed that fast? is he ok? having a whole in your chest must be very unconfortable... and hurting. will the fox fight? will naruto get him back? where are those ninjas taking him? I know that to Orochimaru, but where exactly? what's going on!!!
    I hope you update soon! I really want to know!! this chapter was SO exciting! I really want to read more!!
    please update soon!
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