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Reviews for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

By : Tsukineko9
  • From Onawa on August 05, 2007
    Whew! I just finished reading the whole story so far, and I love it! I wasn't sure at first about almost the whole story done in 1st person, but it is a great experiment. It also looks like it is quite a bit of fun to write as a team! It seems like a very organic project, maybe even like role-playing. You both must have an amazing rapport with each other. wow, I hope this review tips the balance and encourages you to add the next chapter!

    Have either of you participated in NANOWRIMO?

    If you have an email notification list for new chapters, please put me on it!
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  • From sethian on March 05, 2007
    So sad...I hope things will get better for Sasuke! I just love how your characters act, their personnality ; especially Sasuke's and Naruto's.
    Your story is well written though sometimes the change of narrator is difficult to follow. So far it's one of the best I've read.
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  • From sethian on March 04, 2007
    Wow your story is amazing!! You write incredibly long chapters and I thank you for that!!
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  • From kweilding on March 04, 2007
    First chapter im reviewing but ill review it over all chapters as new reader.. so far the story is great a different form of writing then im used to seeing it's great as its kept me reading even though it was getting late ( hope i make sense ) is confusing in some places but the way you've written it deffinately makes me want to read more of it

    i hope to read more of this story soon ill try to think of better review next time not used to writing these things
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  • From sunlight159 on February 25, 2007
    i love this story, pleast continue!!
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  • From SilverPhantom on February 20, 2007
    I sincerely hope that you haven't abandoned this fic, despite how long it's been since the last update. This is one of the few fanfics that I've found where it is actually focused on a well, thought out plot with good long chapters that keep me enthralled with it. I've read over the older chapters many times and hope that it will eventually be updated again. Thank you for writing a great story and I'll check back often to see if it has been updated.
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  • From ANON - pockyisluv on January 06, 2007
    Kirei Kitsue and Cecilia Tsukineko... you guys are amazing. Really. I don't know how you've guys managed to pull off writing such an amazing fic for so long. We can all see the amount of effort that you put into this, and I can't thank you enough for your efforts and sharing your work.

    I'll put a more articulate and specific review on the discussion board later... ^^

    ***A note to everyone else***
    Believe me, I know its been driving us all CRAZY from the almost-a-year lack of reviews. Kirei and Cecilia, as far as I know, have been extremely busy with school/jobs/etc. But, with a little searching on the web I found that they're still at it and have posted a new part of a chapter (6.1 to be exact) during the summer of 2006 on the yahoo group they mention on their frontpage (http://groups.yahoo.com/group/sun_and_twilight/). If you join the group, you'll be able to read their newest material. It looks like they're going to be putting up 6.2 sometime soon too.

    Please don't worry. They've promised us over and over again that they will finish "Reflections". Please have faith in their determination and remember to review! They work very hard to write 30+(!!!) pages per part of a chapter.


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  • From ANON - Sunako Kanzaki on December 15, 2006
    OMG!!!! T^T It was so sad at the end there! I want to know what gonna happen so badly but it looks like this fic isn't going to be updated any more! I am sad over that cuz it was so well written and a great plot! I just loved it! But I guess, great work while it lasted!

    ~Sunako Kanzaki~
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  • From ANON - Omegar on December 13, 2006
    This is pretty much the most amazing Naruto fanfiction ive read as of yet (and I've read a lot). You obviously put a lot of work into it to make is this good. Please continue and make a lot of people happy.

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  • From ANON - innerchild on November 28, 2006
    i honesly can't remember if i reviewed this story or not and i'm not about to go look through almost 400 reviews just to try and find it. anyway, i just wanted to say that i really love this story. i read it awhile ago and i've been dying to review it, but i moved and didn't have internet for a long time. but i have it now and i was hoping that this story would be updated:( but alas, it's not. i'm not mad or anything, but i hope everything's all right on your end. i'm just a paranoid person... i'm always afraid that if an author doesn't update in months or years, that something happened to them. so, i wanted to say that i love this story and that i'll wait as long as need be. hope you both are well.

    -innerchild
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  • From ANON - Dragon on November 28, 2006
    Grate fuching story I can,t what see how every thing turnd out I hope Sasuke will be all right anyway update soon it been to long sence the last update and KEEP WRITING.
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  • From ANON - whatever on November 27, 2006
    You people should be ashamed of yourselves. Seriously. I can honestly say i couldn't give a crap about this story anymore upon learning how greedy you people are. There are others out there who surpass the both of you collectively and they do it for nil. I don't see how this wouldn't get any reviews seeing as how it truly is a good story, even if you didn't force people to. But sadly it no longer has any substance when the writers are revealed to have no soul. So work hard for those paychecks ladies, cause that's the only time you'll actually deserve them.
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  • From ANON - Nadya on November 23, 2006
    Omigawsh... I look on here and it says you haven't updated since January? That's horrible! I don't remember how I found this story, but damn! I have been up until 4 am these past few days reading this amazing story. It's only 1:50 now because I ran out of chapters, and thats a damn shame... I sure hope you two are still writing, and still writing this, because I feel like Naruto, and this story is Sasuke, and I want to know how every thing ends and I don't want to have to sit here thinking, "Dammit, that story hasn't updated! Will is ever finish?"

    Your regular reviewers must have trouble finding things to say other than "Great story, can't wait for the next update," because really, this story is so goddamn awesome there's nothing to say! Your characters are great! The way you built them up was awesome as all hell, and now that I'm at the end of chapter eight, I can feel it in my heart, the love those two have for each other, and the fear they feel about Sasuke's surgury. It's so horrible! You've got to update! I'll say it again, I don't know how I found this story, but since I did, I'm glad, and even if you don't update, I'm still glad I had the chance to read this amazing bit of fanfiction. Oh gods, I want this story to update. I'm so ansty about this! Meep!

    Please keep writing, please please please please please!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kittie on November 12, 2006
    Oh, there aren't enough words to describe your work, you guys~ It's so raw, it's easy to all but feel as the characters feel. I hope to see some more soon!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 02, 2006
    so how many reviews so far? This story is soo long and very well wrighten (I can't spell sorry) I just hope you're still wrighting and I can find out how it ends.
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