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Reviews for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

By : Tsukineko9
  • From ANON - Kage on June 18, 2005
    Omg.
    This is soooo good. I can't wait until the next chapter comes up!!! The second 'Mitani' had shown up, I thought, "no....it couldn't be...."
    You've done a really good job on this. I enjoy reading it.
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  • From ANON - Phoe-chan on June 18, 2005
    I knew it as soon as grandmother spoke about him. xD

    So glad to see Naruto in control again and oh, you tear me up with the angst. No, seriously, I cry. I relate to Naruto so much that I had tears. As soon as you had said Mitani didn't know who he was I started tearing up sped-read through the chapter to get to the ending and then AUGH. *wipes eyes*

    Nicely written, though.

    phoe-chan
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  • From ANON - A-K on June 18, 2005
    Oh my god. You have to continue with this, Im begging you to. It's the best fic I've read in a long long time! Im addicted. I love your styles, i can't say much (im not a good reviewer) but I really really really need to read more. I want Naruto to be ok godamnit. I godamn started to cry!
    Anyway, Please carry on, Its a fantasic fic. Really.
    xxxxx
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  • From ANON - Silver Stars on June 18, 2005
    That was a very evil cliffhanger! I really do love this story. Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Imseniorbagofcrap on June 18, 2005
    OH MY GOD I KNEW IT! I was wondering why you put so much effort into what seemed to be a original character! OH NOESSSS!!!!! Okay now that is over, Hello! To be honest I have seen this fiction around for a long time but I always avoided it. Why you ask, because of its epic size! I am glad I choose to read it today but my eyes hurt like a-son-of-bitch! I started around noon and finished almost thirty minutes after midnight. I cry twin waterfall over the sheer heart this fanfiction has! In many ways this fanfiction has reached the limit of what a mere good fanfiction can be and then up and went further. Normally there are few fanfictions that stir such a strong reaction, to be honest I went in to this and expected the usually fair. The relationship while it can get fluffy it seems to be so natural. You have a great grasp of the characters and you used them effectively. None of the characters, except the obivious bad guys, are so one dimensional and each has a clear sense of self. The criticism I wil give you is the tendency for thing to drag a bit. Its nice to play up the suspense and anxiety for the drama but GOD I think you caused my poor heart to pop! Your use of original characters is inspired (mostly the use of Ayame-chan) and they way they are used to further the plot is ingenius. This fiction is very well thought out and unlike some fictions that seem that the author is merely pulling situations out of a hat this fiction seems to have a clear idea of where it is going! NOW PLEASE UPDATE!! That is the meanest cliff hanger since I don't even know what!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on June 18, 2005
    aaaaaaaaa OMG you are so cruel. Its sasuke, I KNOW IT IS. OH PLEASE LET HIM REMEMBER!!!! OH MAN, YOU DONT UPDATE IN FOREVER AND WHEN YOU DO YOU END IT ON ANOTHER CLIFF HANGER THAT PROBABLY WONT BE UPDATED FOR ANOTHER THOUSAND YEARS!!!! PLEASE UPDATE A.S.A.P. IM BEGGIN YOU PLEEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEEEE!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Tina on June 18, 2005
    I was literally jumping for joy when I found out you updated. I love this beautifully written story (and the chapters are always very long! ^_^) I got very, VERY suspicious about Mitani especially how the villagers brought him to Ayame’s grandma. I didn’t really think I would be right until I read the last paragraph. At first I was like huh? But then after reading it over and over again. I finally found out what it that thing was, and I kept on banging my head against the desk for being incredibly stupid about not knowing what it was the first time I read it. Man, now I feel all hyper and I can’t wait for the next chapter and see what Ayame would do. Please update ASAP!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - vampchic on June 18, 2005
    Sounds to me that Mitani is Sasuke. God I hope I'm right. But why cant he see? And why didn't she notice before that it was him? That is, if it is him?
    I hope she can convince her grandmother. Naruto needs to be saved! At least he finally has some sort of movement. (That bastard noble needs to die a painfull death!!) And thank goodness he is mostly himself again. I cant wait for Naruto and Sasuke to find each other again! This was really a good chapter, and I cant wait for the next update. Hope that its soon! Really, you have me aching to know more! Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - saiyaku on June 18, 2005
    >.< i'm not really the biggest fan of OCs, plus the lack of sasuke! it also seems to show a hint of narusaku...-.- (which i am NOT fond of, AT ALL) ok, all i ask from you is, PLEASE DON'T MAKE THIS NARUSAKU, AND I BEG OF YOU TO NOT KILL SASUKE OFF!! other than that, YOU MUST CONTINUE~~!!!!! ^___^
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  • From ANON - puriin on June 17, 2005
    Aiii!! I've been suspecting it but didn't realize it would actually be true! XD Well, thank you for updating with such a lovely (and long! X3) chapter. All the previous angst really got me down, and to see Naruto fight back and be almost normal ..yay! The relationship between Sakura and Naruto is cute too; refreshing to see them getting along with each other rather than bitch!Sakura, etc portrayed in some other S/N fics. Eagerly awaiting the next installment! =)
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  • From ANON - oOKeairaOo on June 17, 2005
    Wow. All I can say is just... PLEASE try to update quickly. I read through the last two chapters as soon as I got home from freshman orientation, ^^; even though I'm so tired I could almost literally drop dead. That's how great they were. I'm really looking forward to more, as you've left us with the cliffhanger to end all cliffhangers.

    Great work, and I'll be waiting for an update. *wanders off to sleep*
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  • From ANON - anon on June 17, 2005
    wonderful chapter! i think someone's been found... i wonder what's coming next!
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  • From ANON - angel of darkness on June 17, 2005
    i knew it was sasuke!!! hahahah lol cant wait to read their reactions!!!! omg this story is awesome!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - limelikelemon on June 17, 2005
    This story is wow O___O
    I adore your writing-style, 'cause it shows everyones emotion and thoughts....
    What i really like about it is how you "changed" naruto, now that he's in chains....he seems so distant and untouchable compared to the earlier chapters.
    ....you even made me like sakura XD she's cool headed and collected - at least most of the time- if it hadn't been for her the whole village would haven been roasted by now...and....gimme sasuke back, please???.....err....

    In short: The story is great. It has everything from fluff to angst. Just how we like it, ne? Go on!!

    ~lime
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  • From ANON - MoJo JessJo on June 14, 2005
    I'm liking this story very much. The only thing that I'm having a little trouble with is sometimes the changes in POV are a little jarring and a little hard to decipher sometimes as to who's POV it is. The characterization is very well done and the plot is something that I have not seen a lot of. Please write more soon.
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