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Reviews for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

By : Tsukineko9
  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2006
    That chapter was amazing. I loved every part of it. I especially like the way that you made Saskuke the blind person. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update again real real soon!! = )
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  • From ANON - ShinigamiTaishou on January 14, 2006
    Simply amazing. That's so a great story you have created. This last chapter was so full of emotions. I loved it. Hope that people will review because this story has to continue. So please keep going your excellent story. Thanks for the entertainment! See ya!
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  • From ANON - Artemidoras on January 14, 2006
    My first thought is... poor melon headed Sasuke. XD Being a fuzzy head is going to cause some problems, I'm sure. So happy for an update. I was stunned when I saw the update notice. It feels like forever since I'd read the last installment. I don't really feel comfortable calling them chapters... they're way too deliciously long. Everything felt good in this one, except for one thing that bugged me. Tsunade has been about as cautious as one can get concerning keeping Naruto under wraps concerning the nobles... and yet she not only allowed him to leave his cell, but also threw him into Sasuke's old apartment for some quality-time. It just seems strange. Of course, one could chalk it up to being happy about the reunion, but still. She's usually not so careless. Meh, I'm still happy with how it turned out though. Bathing scenes are hot. Keeping the torches burning for another update (relatively) soon. The predicament with "Spartan Ninjas" made me want to cry, but I can understand how that, life, and everything else can slow down appeasing readers and fans lol. Maybe we'll all get lucky and have everything work out later on. Thanks again for the update!
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  • From ANON - kender on January 14, 2006
    I love this story please please continue. this one story that needs to be finished.
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on January 14, 2006
    WOOOT!! You updated!! I was so happy when I say Refelctions at the top of the list!

    So they finally found Sasuke, when I was reading how they slowly figured it out, I was almost giddy with excitment! And I kept having to go downstairs for supper and all that!!

    Anyways, I've finally got the time to finish reading the chapter and it was really good, as usual! Somehow, I can understand why Naruto wants the old Sasuke back, and I feel the same. I'd also miss his eyes too, they're so endlessly black! This is gonna have a happy ending, right?

    Holy, that was a pretty long review! I hope you two get 50 reviews soon so you'll update again!

    Keep it up, okay?
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  • From ANON - Mishachan on January 14, 2006
    this is so awsome! excellent installment. i missed sasuke. i actually like the amnesiac more than broody sasuke. must reread the prior chapters.
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  • From ANON - Jadejj on January 14, 2006
    Glad Sasuke been found but can the old-hag help him to get his sight back. ( I hope so ) Waiting on black wings for the next update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 12, 2006
    OMG I LLOOOOOVVVEEEDDDDD it!!!!!! You are planning on actually updating it right?!?!? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon so i can finish reading it!!!!!
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  • From ANON - TaiyChan on January 08, 2006
    GAH!! You can't just leave it there!!! Omg, you SO have to update soon!!!

    I've got an irking that that blind guy with the bandana is Sasuke! Will you kill me now that I've said that? I'm sorry but I had to say something!!!! OMGOMGOMGOMGOGMGOMG UPDATE SOON!
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  • From ANON - K-chan on January 06, 2006
    O_O PLEASE CONTINUE!!!!!! must....read....more........ And I'm not just saying this, this is GREAT!!! ^.^ I applaud you both! I am totally addicted, and MUST HAVE MORE!!!
    I know, you're both (or maybe just one) probably busy, but even short little updates will satisfy.
    *rollling around on floor* CONTINUE!!! I'm waiting, watching, hoping, waiting, mourning the fact that there're no updates, waiting, anticipating the update, waiting, coming back, waiting, thinking about what will probably happen next, waiting, trying to satisfy my desire to read more with other writings, waiting...and did I mention waiting?
    XDDDD

    But seriously, I loved it!! I mean, it's well-written, easy to follow, you both clearly have more than mediocre writing skills (very good I'd say), and if there were any suggestions, watch out for typos. And read your stuff over again. ^^ I send suggestions with begs!! Really well-written, and another once-over will get rid of the typos and tiny little things I encountered. Nothing big, or technique deprived, all of it nice and more believable than most (and I mean 98% here) fanfics out there (there're even some moments in some of mine..... >.>
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  • From ANON - W on January 03, 2006
    Such a great fic. Sad for now, but I love it. You guys just keep blowing me away with your works! Looking forward to the conclusion!
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  • From ANON - Tsuki on December 29, 2005
    I've just read your whole story and it's sooooo great!!!! Please write the end!!! Ayame just find sasuke!!! (who said I was a sasuke groupie? lol) I love your writing! it's really great. I so much want to see what your going to come up with....
    I'm sorry for my poor english but it's not my mother language. If you answerd this review by an e-mail (but I think you have other things to do ^-^) please put a clear title to the e-mail ^-^
    Keep going! congratulation!

    Tsuki
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  • From ANON - TeaLeavesGreen on December 29, 2005
    I'm loving the fic, but I'd love it more if you dropped hte annoying and gratuitous Japanese. You should only use Japanese in a fic when there isn't a good direct translation in English. Thus, name-suffixes and items that do not exist in English-speaking areas (like onigiri, or kunai, or yukata) are perfectly fine, but using "sankyuu" instead of "Thank you," (which it is the katakana-version of, in the first place), is just stupid. Still, it's an awesome fic, despite the gratuitous Japanese. Most fics with random and pointless Japanese don't get read beyond the first couple "nani"s.

    I'm a Japanese major (who, incidentally, just got back from a semester in Japan,) and will be graduating soon. If you have questions about Japanese culture or language (or literature, or history, or whatnot), email me and I'll see if I can help you out. Just cut back on the useless code-switching. Code-switching is only fun when you're /talking/ to other mulitlingual people, not in writing.
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  • From ANON - Tenshi213 on December 28, 2005
    and I forgot to ask, is the blind boy... the infamous Sasuke that had Naruto going nuts?
    = [
    if so, I really hope you alleviate his blindness
    T___T

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  • From ANON - Tenshi213 on December 28, 2005
    You have an excellent plot going, but it's kinda irksome how the perpsectives keep changing.
    I also enjoy the length of your chapters; I hope you update with much vigor and speed
    = ]

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