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Reviews for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

By : Tsukineko9

From ANON - yuurimaoh on January 17, 2006
*clasping hands under chin in thought* When I first clicked on reflections, I will honestly say that I thought 'only 7 chapters? I can breeze through this tonight!' *sheepish smile* I was wrong...but, that doesn't mean that I didn't try...I got half way through chapter 4 when I decided that I should sleep, to better focus on finishing it in the morning. The first chapter reeled me in and the ones that followed kept me at the edge of my seat. What can I say that hasn't been said before? This is an astonishing fic...the storyline, the way the characters express themselves...I'm genuinely stunned in place. It comes as a sad, but comforting feeling to await the next upload. Sad, because of just how long it will take for the fifty reviews to be submitted and for the chapter to be finished. But, comforting to know that it will be a lengthy chapter like no other (or at least I pray to the cosmos that it is). I applaud you. You make a wonderful team. And, just like everyone else, I shall be waiting for the next upload patiently. :3
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From ANON - jay on January 17, 2006
Awesome story, please by any and all means continue it. I especially like how your keeping the characters in their character, but yet continue to develop a unique and complex storyline.
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From ANON - Hana on January 17, 2006
It was good, and I enjoyed the liberal sprinklings of snuggling within the fic. I only had one minor problem. In the beginning when Sasuke still thought of himself as Mitani... you would think a person with amnesia would grasp to any life line of knowing who they were (considering a year isn't that long). He seemed to be fighting remembering all the way up until he found Naruto. I dunno... I just figure he'd at least be interested to know his real name and be more... helpful toward people who might know anything about him. Being jumpy in the beginning I can understand, but after going to the village he still seemed.... really defensive.

And, I was wondering... wouldn't he still be able to feel chakra? I mean, he's done it for most of his life and some cases I've heard of people with amnesia they can still play the piano because they practiced so long it comes naturally.
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From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2006
Gah! So sad, but so sweet. I'm so glad they're back together, finally! I'll have you know, I cried at some parts. I hope Sasuke gets his sight back soon, if not his memory. Gotta give Naruto *something* to look forward to, right? Well, anyways, keep up the awesome work, and I'll be looking out for the next update.
Ja~
SSS
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From WaterShadow on January 17, 2006
I am very glad that you've finally updated your story! It had been one I both longed and dreaded.

I know how terrible that sounds, but please let me explain myself. What happens when I find a story like this, filled with angst, fun moments, and the like, is that I tend to get a little obsessed and start getting driven nuts by all the nuances. Sometimes, when I think about what has happened to both Naruto and Sasuke in this story (and all the minor annoyances they had to put up with), I want to cry. Naruto was chained for so long, Sasuke was continually beaten back as he tried to get closer to Naruto, and now he's lost his memory and sight.

Let me reassure you that I adore this story even though it makes me sad, because it explores an aspect of their relationship I don't think other authors really take the time to delve into; how it came to be in the first place. I constantly see "Sasuke thinks Naruto is hot and compels him to jump into the sack with him" and it's refreshing to see Naruto fight back and Sasuke not succeed instantly.

Also, you are doing an excellent job at taking your time with Sasuke-now-Mitani's regaining of his memory. You're not rushing through, making Sasuke constantly dream of a Naruto he sees instead of a Naruto he touches. Well done.

Admittedly, though, I do find one minor flaw with this latest chapter, and that's the lack of characterization from the minor characters. I realize this story is primarily about Naruto and Sasuke, but it seems as though the other people who care for Sasuke don't make much of an appearance in the story. Occasional glimpses into Kakashi and Sakura's minds were great, but they don't seem...as bothered about the loss of memory as they should, considering all that has happened in the last year.

I hope that you get the amount of reviews that you ask for so that the next chapter will be put up soon. I'm a part of your yahoo group (you may recognize my email) and I can't download and read the chapters there because my Mac doesn't have MicrosoftWord.

Happy New Year,
WS
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From ANON - Salla on January 17, 2006
Hi

Noouu you won't be that nasty..please..^^' I just love this story..give me more..xDDD I'm so addikted to this..I need this.
And I wanna thank you cause your english is easy to me to read.. I'm finnish btw. :D
How many chapters will come??
I'm sorry if you didn't understand my english..I'm just too lazy to pick the Finnish-English..it's so troublesome..*looks like Shikamaru* xDDD
I hope I will read the next chapter sooon..=^.^=
thanks and god luck..oh and I love Kyuubi..he is so adorable..(O_O' yeah I know I'm crazy..-_-')

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From ANON - addison jade on January 17, 2006
Wow. I was totally gonna go to bed early, but found this was updated.... and did not. I love the length, even if is contributing to my tiredness, and how you have a coherent passage from different elements of the plot.

Am so glad that sasuke was quick to recognize naruto's affection, if it hadn't been that 'easy' (and i use the term loosely because it wasn't easy, just easier than it could have been), who knows how badly naruto would have degenerated.

Anyway, it's late, but i just wanted to drop a quick line and say that i'm really enjoying this fairly uncommon twist to the story. Can't wait to find out how the development of the memories coming back, and the eyesight returned (or not returned).
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From ANON - madame shannon on January 16, 2006
wow this is totally awesome!!
I started reading this story abt a week ago and i really loved it (you had me crying in my local internet cafe, and boy was that not pretty!) and when i saw that it had been a while since your last update i got so sad because i thought that you had abandoned this trully wonderful story T_T. thank you so much for keeping it going. this is a tale that i would ove to here the ending to. here, you deserve roses @---^---- x12
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From ANON - Charity on January 16, 2006
Oh My GOd! this fic is amazing I so called that being Sasuke! oh my GOd you have to keep going. Sasuke has to remember Naruto! give them a break the poor boys I hate it when a character gets amnesia cause I am alsways on the edge of my seat saying "rememebr damn it remember!" over and over again! Aaaaaahhh please hurry this fic is amazing and and and... OMG!!!!! I actually took a hiatus from the episodes that I have on my computer to read this fic you can't leave me hangind! Once Sasuke is beeter memory eyesight hair everything and him and Naruto are back enjoying their lives with the ones they love they better get that bastard Junichiro!!!!! I say give him Hell. ok I am going to calm down now, I was literally bouncing in my chair. I must admit though Junichiro's character the perfect antagonist he really gets my blood boiling! and that is how you know you did good. I also loved how you kept them in character! It is very believable how they got together I mean everytime I went back to the series I was confused because the images and situations that you portrayed were so believable. So PLEASE I beg you hurry with an update I can't wait to see how the story turns out! My NaruSasu needs to be whole and happy again! Also revenge is needed for that damn rat bastard Junichiro! ( ALso love how you did Kyuubi! ^_~)
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From ANON - RyuichiSakuma2 on January 16, 2006
This is such a good story. I love you. o___o
Update soon please! I need to know what happens next.

-Ryu
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From ANON - lostinlonlyness on January 16, 2006
OMG I LOVED IT!!!
I HOPE THAT SASUKE WILL BE ABLE TO BE HEALED AND GET HIS MEMORY BACK!!
AWSOME JOB WITH THE STORY SO FAR, THIS IS THE ONLY STORY THAT I CONSTINATLY CHECK TO SEE IF IT HAS BEEN UPDATED OR NOT.
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!
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From ANON - murrh on January 16, 2006
oh my god!!!! I absolutely love your writing, even though it's a bit confusing sometimes when you change the POV. But poor Sasuke! All the scars...blind...no more rooster tail!!! You have to get the next chapter up soon!
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From ANON - Anon on January 16, 2006
AGM! Sasuke is back! and Naruto is free! and they're together again even though one doesn't remember! yay! I loved this really really long chapter, the whole Naruto Sasuke interaction was very well done. Keep up the great work you do and update soon!
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From ANON - Viola on January 16, 2006
Update soon! T_T I love this story
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From ANON - Aleria on January 16, 2006
OMG! You finally updated! I LOVE this story! Eeee so suspenseful. ;_;
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