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Reviews for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

By : Tsukineko9

From ANON - Oran on January 19, 2006
Wow! I think I'm in love with this story. I keep reading it and thinking 'Please let everything be fixed!' I am a total sucker for happy endings. I like the way the characters are portrayed, and I can't wait for the next chapter! I hope you update this story soon, it's terrific! And don't ever think you shouldn't write this anymore, or I might just die. You must continue this for at least Sasuke's sake!
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From ANON - K-chan on January 19, 2006
OK so other than the fact that half of the complex medical terms you use I have to turn to the local nurse (Aka mom) and ask what they are, it's really great!! (though I'd really use common terms like "jawbone" instead ....sometimes, I'm a little nervous asking about body paarts when I have no idea where they are.........)
But you seemed to have placed some doubt as to Sasuke's identity after we all knew it was him...ooh mysterious...
This was well worth the wait (though I have noticed for some it's been longer than for me...) and I ask that if you PLAN on updating, having shorter, more frequent chapters isn't always a bad thing!!

I await the next chapter faithfully!
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From ANON - Drisowen on January 19, 2006
Oh, this is awesome! I love this story so much. Actually, for a while I didnt want to read it because this is one of the few fanfiction that has ever made me cry. But I LOVE it. So Much. Please update soon (like this will actually change anything, but I like saying it). I enjoy reading your works.
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From ANON - Shadow on January 19, 2006
OMG I loved this so much!! Please write more so I can find out if Sasuke will get his sight back and if the nobles will get their collective heads out of their asses. Also is there something going on with Sakura and Kakashi? Also I wanted to know how will Ayame's gran take care of the kids and Naruto's problem?
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From ANON - Sam on January 19, 2006
O man I've been checking this story over and over and I thought you guys were going to just abandon it...I'm so happy you started it up again!! I love how you guys really stay true to their feelings/insecurities about one another, and by putting it in the first person, one can really get a feeling for how they feel. I've been meaning to ask you guys this, but would you be willing to do a trade of sorts? Like a one shot fanfic for an illustration (of whatever you want ie. sasunaru, ichigo-kon-ishida...just tell me!)...I understand if you guys are too busy (as i can be as well), but i thought it might be fun...Anyhow, keep up the good work! I have read every one of your bleach and naruto stories and you are by far the most talented writers i have come across (aside from my beloved akaitsume)...Ciao!

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From on January 18, 2006
I absoultely worship the ground you work on! AIE! SUCH AN AWESOME SASUNARU FIC! AMAAAAAAZING! I KISS YOUR FEET AND WILL FOREVER LOVE YOUR PENNAME! But if you ever send Sasuke spiraling off the side of a cliff to his ultimate doom EVER AGAIN and then leave me to read several chapters with a laden heart and doubt of his life until he reappears alive and yet does not remember anything and is scarred and--*forgets what she was talking about and stops*--...uh, yeah. Just don't ever do it again! Those were the longest chapters in the world to read, missy! I was so upset about Naruto's mental condition! I honestly thought that Sasuke was dead! It made me uber sad!

But he's alive so kukukuk!
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From on January 18, 2006
Where do I start? Hm. I'll start off with the blunt truth: you are one of the most skilled fanfiction writers that I have had the fortune to stumble upon. Mind blowing, really. The amount of pure, raw emotion in this story is just...wow. I especially loved how slowly Sasuke and Naruto started off, yeah? Best friends, then sources of comfort, and then lovers in a spiritual sense. I've been reading this story for hours now, and I'm just amazed that anyone could spend so much time and effort writing up such intensely long chapters with so few grammar or spelling mistakes. Another aspect I love about Reflections is how Sakura isn't the evil bitch from hell bent on destroying Naruto to steal Sasuke. It got tiresome the first four billion fanfictions, ne?

The constant changes of point of view are also refreshing. I love being able to read how Naruto and Sasuke are feeling and what they're thinking. Naruto's arguements with Kyuubi are especially entertaining! I remember when Ayame pulled off the bandana and said 'Sasuke'. Yeah. I basically flew out of my seat to glomp my computer. This was followed by dancing and other typical trademarks of happines and joy (trademarks that now lead my parents to believe I'm crazy, but whatever, Sasuke was found!) It's been a while a story could get me to really laugh and jump around. And the vivid details make me feel like I'm watching this all take place, not just reading it.

Okay. Now that the calm, logical side of me as gave you it's insight, I'll allow my more abrasive and frightening side to take over. AKA, the rapid yaoi, Naruto fanfic, SasuNaru, hyper fangirl.

~Lee
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From ANON - Windjammer on January 18, 2006
Hiya
One of my friends told me about this fic and I'm so glad that she did because to me, it's one of the few good fics out there that has a really original plot AND keeps everybody as close to character as possible. I also think that they way you've chosen to split the perspectives really adds to the emotional impact in the story. This is a story about two people, you should get both sides of the coin. In respect to the latest chapter, I must admit that deep down I'm a believer in the whole "true love" thing so it really hits a chord with me that you've played up the connection, pull and familiarity that Sasuke feels towards Naruto, even though he doesn't remember him. They say that true love conqures over all and you've done an amazing job of incorporating that idea into your story so that it is a thing of beauty and not just some corny cliche. Thanks again, I've gotten many a good hour in entertainment from this fic, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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From ANON - Omena on January 18, 2006
Wow...I need to start reading this again at the beginning since I don't really remember much...I'm really glad you guys finally updated this. ^^ Interesting, Sasuke being blind and doesn't remember a thing...I really wonder that if they can't fix him, how will they deal? Especially since Naruto started to wonder, how this isn't the real Sasuke...And even I want him back the way he was! This OOCness drives me almost mad! But I guess this could've been the real Sasuke if Itachi hadn't been stupid and kill everyone...(He better enjoy his luck of good-lookingness, because if not, I'd be the second in line after Sasuke to kill him *mwah*) but I can deal with the OOC, since it's not totally sunshine between them, and I really can't live without angst (but if the story ends up badly, then that's not good :/)..And I actually almost started crying in the end (and not just because the chapter was about to end xD)..
Damn, I hope Orochimaru doesn't come and spoil everything...
Gah, this is the best I can do for you! I hope my review is the last one you need but I guess it's not, because I never have luck! :D
Ja!
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From ANON - Meikyuu on January 18, 2006
I really like the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke, that even with this amnesia thing Sasuke feels so strongly about Naruto. And seeing 'real' Sasuke in his 'angry' moments warms my heart:P
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From ANON - ronin101 on January 18, 2006
I was so surprised to see you had updated! I re-read all the posted chapters every few months so I don't forget any of the details!
Naruto-torture is always great for an angsty read! I like the Kitsune's....attitude....problem. ^_^ And the fact the Naruto can beat the crap outta him! I thought it was very realistic when the granddaughter, Kakashi, ect came and started poking and proding him. I was a little hesitant on how Sasuke reacted to Naruto at first--thought it was too "easy fix to the problem," but you releived me by making it a vague recognition.

I am really anticipating "fixing" Naruto as well as the resolving the burning Sasuke gets behind his eyes and why the curse is gone and....
*cough*
Right, well, really enjoyed this chapter--and its length!!--and can't wait for more. ^_^
Sara
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From ANON - dark_Angel on January 18, 2006
Welllllll you guys finally updated. =D Can't wait to see how Sasuke will regain his memories and his eyesight ^_^ ....he WILL rite?? ........anyways, I love your stories. I find it kind of sad since you guys have given up on SPartan Ninjas, but I love Reflections as well, so I'm grateful you haven't given up on this one as well.

update soon~! ^______^
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From ANON - Anon on January 17, 2006
There are 55 reviews now so you should update really really soon
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From ANON - KT Ryn on January 17, 2006
YAY!!! Updatedness! Okay - a detailed review eh? Well, I thought the beginning was the best. The discovery of Sasuke, the reuniting with several old friends, and the salvation of Naruto! Oh man! I must say I was a little suprised and opposed to the fact that Naruto would kiss/etc. Sasuke when he CLEARLY doesn't know what is going on and the fact that Sasuke went along with his advances. I thought/hoped they'd put it off a bit, but whatever. You do an amazing job conveying how sad it really is that Sasuke is blind and how Naruto really feels. This is still my favorite fanfic so EVERYONE REVIEW, NOW!!! Thanks for continuing the story!
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From ANON - meEksiNs on January 17, 2006
OMG. is sasuke ever gonna have is eyesight back? or even his WHOLE self back? not that his current self is uh something to complain about but still.. damn SAD. and what the hell is up with that jerk Junichiro?
Anyways, love the fic. SIMPLY love it. THUMBS UP.
Update soon. Thanks (also for the the fantastic read).
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