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Reviews for Reflections (Abandoned WIP)

By : Tsukineko9
  • From ANON - inufangirl007 on January 22, 2006
    this is so sad! i hope sasuke at least gets his eye-sight back! i love the way u write this, its so detailed and they seem really in charecter(except for sasuke at this point, but it makes sense since he has no memories)! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - ShinigamiTaishou on January 22, 2006
    Sugoi, this is so a wonderful chapter. This is so well written. Hope to see more again, I will review your next chapters too, because this story is worth to do it. So keep doing your amazing story onegai. Ja!
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  • From ANON - SpiritSealedSlumber on January 21, 2006
    Ah, review number two. Well... There are minor spelling errors here and there, but other than that, awesome. I liked the whole, looking into the lake and seeing his old self thing. Hopefully, Sasuke'll have his hair back soon. The thought of him with short hair is scary. -.-;; Anyways. Hope the surgery goes well and both Sasuke and Naruto are successful with their barrier problems. Keep up the fantastic work. I'll be on the lookout for the next update, as usual.
    ~Ja
    SSS
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  • From ANON - Tokitoh on January 21, 2006
    I am in great physical and mental pain. You are so evil. EVIL. You are the root of all evil. I can't believe you won't update. I mean, I was waiting for this chapter for so long and I almost lost all hope, but when I saw that you updated... it made me so unbelievably happy. *sobs* Because I love all your stories and I recommend them to all my friends, and I even read them for, like, 10 times each. I love your character interpretation, interesting plot twists and even Sakura as you describe her. Though, I would... no, I guess that's how Sasuke would be if he lost his memory. But it still feels kind of awkward to read about highly emotional and kind Sasuke-teme. ^__^'

    I completely understand that you want opinions and coherent reviews (hell, I wanted opinions when I wrote my first story), but that is just so unfair. I would love to dig into every little detail in this story, and every other story you have, but I really don't think it would make a huge difference. Because when I criticize, most fanfiction writes go into "that's how I see it, if you don't like it, don't read it. And I hate you for pissing me off" mood. You are the authors, I am your reader, and I think that things you write are great. I read your stories, I even wrote this stupid thingy to tell you how great you are. That definitely means something.

    Everything is so good in your stories. Unnecessary details, mental dialogues (and monologues ^__^) are just so in-character. This whole situation is really sad and that whole thing when Naruto and Sasuke met again... really. Honestly. There are parts I find unnecessary, but most of the situations and emotions you describe make up for everything. And much, much more. I beg you to finish this story. I know you might get bored, or busy, or... something, but it's just so unfair. You are great writers and I am sure that you can make it. This story has been great so far. I believe that the ending won't disappoint me. Even if the outcome won't be satisfying, I know you will be able to make it sound just right.

    I want to know how everything ends. That's all I am asking for. Please write more. More. Much more. ^___^v
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  • From ANON - DevilLived on January 21, 2006
    Awesome chapter. Go Naruto for getting some progress on Sasuke! He's slowly beginning to act like himself again. It's cool how you wrote about him wanting to punchin Naruto upside the head and hesitating for help like his old self. Very smart.

    I hope you get 75 reviews soon cause I can't wait till the next chapter (You're chapters are so long! XD I love it.)! I'm so praying that Sasuke's surgery will go okay XD. This will have a happy ending, right? Did I ask that question before? I can't quite remember.

    Anyways, long review, I guess. Great chapter and update soon!
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  • From ANON - hinshihoushi on January 21, 2006
    Shoot! You had me crying right along with naruto & Sasuke! Thanks so much for the update. Really enjoyed it!
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  • From ANON - diamond_princess2006 on January 21, 2006
    awwww i'm scared too... i hope everything goes good i don't think i can cry anymore... well once again great chapter hope to see more
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  • From ANON - KeairaxSeiaa on January 21, 2006
    It was really interesting to see a form of dissociative disorder used in a story. Out of curiosity, did you research the subject specifically for Sasuke's problem, or do you actually know someone who suffers from it? I have dissociative disorder, but it's dissociative depersonalization, so it's a bit different from what Sasuke has in your story. It's nice to see, though, that you do at least know what you're talking about when it comes to what Sasuke's suffering from, and that you're not just using the term "amnesia" blindly for your own purposes. I didn't know much about the other titles you gave to what he's suffering from, but his symptoms do seem to be in line with dissociative amnesia. Great job, you're obviously putting a good amount of work into your story, and I like to see that. I'll anxiously await your next update.
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  • From ANON - madme shannon on January 21, 2006
    *sniffle sniff* WWWWHHHHHAAAAAAAAAA that was totally sobworthy
    pls let there be more soon
    i don't think i could handle it otherwise
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  • From ANON - LtF on January 21, 2006
    Wah.. I feel like crying after the last part when Sasuke and Naruto are discussing the upcoming surgery...
    This installment was GREAT. OMfG. Itachi's appearance was a good abrupt surprise, showing how even though the two have found eachother again, there's still "Trouble in Paradise" (ha, such a cliche'd term to use...), and it was a good transition into Sasuke's diagnosis. Nice! *thumbs up, 'nice guy' pose* And I love how Sasuke's slowly but surely regressing back to his "normal" state, how his dreams are memories (possibly?) and how real his amnesia seems to be. Naruto's torment that's mentioned by Kakashi (how he's more disheartened every day because of Sasuke's lack of memories) is supported by what happened in the tub with the "Naruto-koi" incident. Overall, great installment :D And I hope the reviews reach 75 soon >o
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  • From ANON - Inuchi on January 21, 2006
    whoosh! those chap takeme an hour to read! but the fricken good one's where do you get this wonderful writing ability!? jeez i'm adicted to this story! welll do update when you can! i will stay egerly awaitingthe nest chap with egerness!!! X3 Ja for now!!
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  • From ANON - Kiki on January 21, 2006
    wow....Like I mean WOW!!! Yeah, Really WOW!!!!! I so love this story! the slow evloution of the story and the characters, it's WOW.......

    At first I was a little dodgey about the writing style, all the different POV's but after becoming acustomed to it I quiet like it! I really like when an author tells what's happening in a charaters head and this fanfic totally delivers!!

    Can't wait for the next chapter(s) keep'm coming! Will bribe if nessesary :D
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  • From ANON - tiffany on January 20, 2006
    just to point out that in the latest chapter naruto says that he has never been to sasuke's apartment before is a mistake because in the beginning chapters sasuke forces naruto to sleep over many times. naruto has slept, ate, and showered in sasuke's apartment.
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  • From ANON - SlightlySane on January 19, 2006
    YES! YESSSSSSSSSS. I've been waiting SO LONG for an update! You just made my week! ;__; Lovely Sasuke. Even though he isn't himself, I'm happy that he's back into the plot. It was almost painful to read about the torture Naruto was going through. And Sasuke keeps recalling new things. :D Maybe once he gets his sight, he'll start getting a lot back! I really hope so. I don't want this to end up tragic.

    Thanks for updating, and PLEASE update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Briryan on January 19, 2006
    Great chapter!) Sorry for not reviewing before. Great story so far too! Poor Naruto and Sasuke. I hope that Sasuke will get his sight back and that things will work out for Naruto. Looking forward to reading the next chapter. I hope you get your 50 review! Later
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