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Reviews for Walking Corpse

By : suomynonakun
  • From ANON - padoopadoop on November 12, 2005
    I REALLY am enjoying this story!! You are obviously putting a major amount of effort into this and it is paying off. Slight spelling and grammatical errors do little to detract from my enjoyment. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 07, 2005

    Awsome story so far but I just wanted to say that Gaara's(woohoo!! Gaara RULES!!!!!) eyes are green. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Iris Anthe on November 06, 2005
    Hee. Still love you! ~_^ Author's notes and all.
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 05, 2005
    It amuses me that the reality you're discussing is kind of coming true in recent chapters of the Naruto manga (fan-translated, around 280), namely Jiraiya developing that talisman because, apparently, Naruto's been losing control quite a bit in the years he's been training with him.

    I genuinely want to know how this turns out. Your work is great, and I love how it gets dark without getting cheesy, despite the liberties you've taken (not a bad thing at all). Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - purpleprose on November 03, 2005
    hope you get the chance to updatse sooner. you have a great story. keep on rockin. m/
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  • From mangacrack on November 01, 2005
    Cool...there some of english Naruto FFs which I like but this one of the best^^ Hope that the next chapter will come soon.
    From a german yaoi fan
    mangacrack

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  • From ANON - lo on November 01, 2005
    This is a beautifully written story. I wish there were more intelligent authors like you in all of the fandoms. Keep up the great work, I can just imagine the amout of brain power this story takes.
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  • From ANON - Innocent*Seduction on November 01, 2005
    First off, I'd like to point out just how shocked I was when I realized that for once, I'd never read anything that was in anyway, shape, or form like yours. That in it's self is just a sign of an amazing writer with plenty of creativity. Second, I love yours conflict of interst being the fact that Naruto is losing to Kyuubi and that casuing a problem with his relationship with Sasuke the side conflicts being the fights, problems with Oro, etc. also hold a sense of power that I really enjoyed reading.

    I didn't really see to many spelling and grammer mistakes, but then again, I wasn't really looking out for them. I was more concerned with what was happening in the plot then I was how you were spelling everything. But, i'm sure that they were down to a minimum if they were there at all. :)

    I don't have much time to finish, so, i'll just end this by letting you know that I loved it, and really can't wait to read more. That cliffhanger is driving me crazy!

    ~:Innocent*Seduction:~ (Formerly known as WynterMajik)
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  • From ANON - macy on November 01, 2005
    hey there. i just spent an enormous amount of time reading chapters 1-17 and it was awesome ^___^ i can't believe i've reached the end (of the available chapters at least) and arrived at a major cliffhanger! ah, the pain. but knowing that an update is just around the corner makes me feel a ton better, hehe. i totally love this fic -- the characterization, the plot, battles --- everything's great. i have to mention that when Naruto turned Gaara's desert coffin to glass has got to be one of the most coolest, most awesome thing i've read in a fic ever. that was just too cool to forget. thanks for writing such a wonderful story, and i'm definitely waiting for the next installment =D
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  • From ANON - B on October 31, 2005
    Hey, I'm glad you only need to revise - I'd thought something horrible had happened to you (and I hope that nothing bad *did* happen..)

    In any case, I look forward to reading a new chapter, as always. :D
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on October 31, 2005
    (Author's Notes)
    Take your time, since it'll benifit us all ^_^
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  • From ANON - ky0kichi on October 31, 2005
    -gets all excited then face vaults- D'oh!!!

    Lol. At least we know it'll be up soon, thanks for tellin! -waits impatiently- ^_^;;
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  • From ANON - BlackHatAffair on October 09, 2005
    Oh wow. This was great! This is really emotional too! I thought I was going to cry why Naruto said that he was afraid to cry T_T!! I love this. It's beautiful with its twists and turns. I can't wait to read the end, though some part of me doesn't want to know.
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  • From ANON - Vicki on September 26, 2005
    Wow. Just Wow. Nice way to leave someone totally breathless, and craving more. I like everything about this, the mentions of Naruto/Gaara (the demons inside them), the angsty tragedy that actually made me cry. I loved that scene, where Naruto asks Sasuke to kill him, when the time comes, and I just started sobbing uncontrollably. I like the molesation of the demon holders when one of them breaks out, Naruto's sacrificial attitude, the amazing battle scenes. You proved to me (the smut fanatic) that you don't need it [smut] to have this mindblowing, breathtaking action, dramatic, passionate story about protecting the ones you love, about pride, about love, lust, and human emotions, how everyone is scared of death, how Naruto and Gaara live with demons inside of them, constantly afraid, that one of them will break out and kill and maim their loved ones. The tragedy of knowing that soon, you will die is so touching, and Naruto's line: I want you to be the last thing I feel is so heartfelt and so... just so tear-jerking. I usually don't stick around to read stories more than 10 chapters long, but this drew me in, diverted my whole attention (I've been walking into door frames, tables, and walls for quite a while now) just thinking about this makes me want to cry, laugh and hug the characters all at the same time.
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  • From ANON - min on September 24, 2005
    This is good really! But I thought the multiple attacks by Orochimaru got pretty tiring after awhile. (Yes I read 17 chapters in one go...) Hopefully this will be the last attack. :)

    By the way do you have a list or something so that I know you have updated the fic. :) Thanks
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