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Reviews for Walking Corpse

By : suomynonakun
  • From ANON - ooo on December 25, 2004
    great story so far!

    one thing, when you wrote, "their curiosity peaked even further", I believe you meant piqued instead of peaked. ^^
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  • From TenshiKaitou on December 25, 2004
    waahh, oh gawd oh gawd, it just gets more interesting as things proceeds. and the suspense, the suspense is killing me. goodness, you're making me repeating my words. lol. please update soon. fast. next second. now. ONEGAI!
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  • From ANON - Nuke F. Montagne on December 24, 2004
    Hey. Just giving you your due as a writer. Your story had an element that I was attracted to, instantly, and without any sort of room for argument.

    All of the characters were reasonably close to canon, while at the same time making room for new-found maturity, and so on.

    One of the main points, I must admit, is that you didn't make Naruto and Sasuke simply meet after a few years of being apart and then tumble into bed with eachother, moaning "Oh, [insert name here] I have loved you for so long!" in a high falcetto.

    You earned my respect for that. But enough of the cool, appraising evaluatiuon.

    LEIK, OMG, I SOOOOO LIKED YOUR STORRRRRY!!!!!11!11oneone!

    There we go. Rock on.

    N.
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  • From ANON - Nuke F. Montagne on December 24, 2004
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  • From ANON - chebbi on December 24, 2004
    I looooooove yoooouuuu!
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  • From ANON - dAni3Lr on December 23, 2004
    great plot. i like the last sentence sakura said cuz it left a cliff-hanging very well. now everyone's gonna guess who can use Kage Bunshin no Jutsu ^^ and Orochimaru ain't no idiot too, but maybe i've missed it; i simply didn't see the sentence dat says naruto uses kage bunshin b4 talking to Lee. Orochimaru sucks!! *ahem* Merry Christmas and i luv ur plot ^^
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  • From ANON - animegirl on December 23, 2004
    yes, that was amazing, you've got to update as soon as possible, i need to know what happens next!!!! this is sooooooo good, i love this story. your the best, coming up with such an interesting plot. you had me going for a sec, i thought naruto was almost taken by that snake bastard, are the others going to find out that it's naruto or what? keep it up, i can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - clowangel on December 22, 2004
    Wahoo! ^^ Another chapter! I really really can't wait for the next one. This fanfic is getting so good! ^-^
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  • From ANON - Emily on December 22, 2004
    Oops. Typed in the wrong e mail. It's okay now. Excellent work! I love the plot. Update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - Emily on December 22, 2004
    AH!!! How can you just cut it off there of all places?!?!?! Well, it was a good place to stop. Suspense is a good way to leave people hanging. You must update really soon. I am so hooked on this. The story is written very well and the plot is well thought out. I really am enjoying this story. Keep up the excellent work!!
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  • From ANON - ureihitomi on December 22, 2004
    oh i hope you update soon!!!! am enjoying this fic.
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  • From ANON - Ru Shin on December 22, 2004
    ^^ Yet another great chapter! After using the Kage Bushin,they should all know who he is now! XD I must go tell my cousin that you made Orochimaru take over Kabuto...she'll be so happy. XD She hates Kabuto so much. XD It's hilarious.
    Again,great job! Can't wait for the next chapter! ^^
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  • From ANON - omizu on December 22, 2004
    omg, it's just getting to the good part... I need more! *drools* ^__^
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on December 22, 2004
    hullo!!! i am so embarassed! i was your first reviewer and i took this long to review again. >__<

    but anyway i love the way that the story is going. i like what you've done to naruto's appearance. i think the red highlights are a good look for him. i also liked the way that when shika figured out that it was naruto at sasuke's that he rushed over to go see him. the rest of the group probably neva saw shika move so fast. i'm so happy that shika is a character in the story even if he is a minor one. (loves herself some shikamaru) and the tension between sasuke and naruto! ^___^ nice to see that i was right about this being a very interesting fic. Now i wonder if every1 else will figure out that naruto's there b/c of the kage bunshin or will they still be kept in the dark? Very much looking foward to the next chapter, so unil then merry christmas if you celebrate it and happy new year to ya if you dont update before then.

    Devious Lil Devil
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  • From ANON - annika on December 22, 2004
    YaY! YaY!
    you updated *dancing around in the room*
    GREAT chapter, I really like that for once Kakashi is in the dark and he doesn’t know everything ^_^
    I'm so happy that you updated 'cause this is a awesome story =D
    I will keep a look out for your new chapter, so don't go a quite on me ^_^
    keep up the super duper good writing
    Happy Christmas and a Happy New Year

    (Hihi…this is the longest review I have ever written, I'm so happy)

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