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Reviews for Walking Corpse

By : suomynonakun
  • From ANON - hogo-chan on January 25, 2005
    nice! i really like the relationship you built for naruto and gaara! its very cute! almost brotherly but maybe a little bit more... very cool. but poor sasuke is really flipping out. i guess they really do need to talk. but i'm sure we can look forward to that in the next chapter, right? keep up the good work, and thanks so much for updating that fast! i really love it! see ya next chapter!
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on January 25, 2005
    Hmmm. Very interesting interaction between Sasuke, Naruto and Gaara. I really like where this is heading.

    “Don’t worry,” Kankurou said. “They already established the no killing rule.” Heh. I liked this line. It sure helped Sasuke feel better. *snicker*

    Update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - CWolfeh on January 25, 2005
    o____o That battle was so cool. The sand into glass thing was very well done. It was a very well written fight. ^-^ Muchos kuddos to you on that. Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Sasuke-kun is jealous! -sing song voice- X3 Poor guy...Until the next chapter then! -salutes-
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  • From ANON - Tessen on January 24, 2005
    ^^ This fic is so kewl! LOL I especially loved that part where Sasuke and Naruto were talking about his ass. That was hella-funny. So YEA, write/type some more, and fast dammit! lol
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  • From ANON - Blisblop on January 24, 2005
    I really liked this chapter.Sand sibs,you portrayed them with wit( and spice),I love the Demons in heat bit, you have to have them get on that,it is just too good,hey Sasuke is a Complex person he won't die of jealousy,he would probably wanna watch... we all wanna watch OH PLEASE!!All in all a totally respectable effort that is worth following.Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Emily on January 24, 2005
    Sorry I am so pressed for time so this review will have to be short. I love the details in this chapter and just the overall effect it has on the reader (Me). It is well written with great grammar, nice word choice, and some excellet scenes as well. It was overall the best chapter you have written so far and I hope for you to continue it soon. Great work and until next time!
    Emily

    P.S. Sorry again that it's so short but I have no time! Blame having to pick up sister! I love your work!
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  • From ANON - kat8cha on January 23, 2005
    I thought Naru-chan said Sasuke was the only one allowed to do things to his ass! You lied!!! ~points and scowls~ Delightful interaction between Naruto and Gaara, and I loved the 'demons attraction to each other', very amusing. Pleasent images (I'm a Gaa/Naru fan, so sue me). Still, Sasuke is really gonna be pissed about this! And I cannot wait to see the blow up! Man am I enjoying this fic!!!
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  • From ANON - kayoko on January 23, 2005
    *grabs a pen and find a wall*
    "kayoko was here and liked the story. you rock!"

    ^_^ thank you for writing such a great story.
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  • From DeviousLilDevil on January 23, 2005
    oh yeah! Gaara's here! *begins waving a flag stating Gaara is the greatest* i love this story! poor naruto. now he has to go back and see sasuke again. oh! and what will sasuke's reaction from seeing Gaara be? Will he get jealous over the friendly relationship between naruto and gaara or will he be too focused, on getting naruto to stay in konoha, to care? i can see him acting all posessive about naruto easily. anyway, lovely work. cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on January 22, 2005
    YAY! hurrah for gaara! tee hee! now he'll make naruto go back to konoha! but... gah, theres gonna be conflict between gaara and sasuke over naruto right? gah! why cant everything just be all happy go lucky and junkity junk like that! well, keep up the good work! i love you forever for writing this fic! update fast please!
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  • From ANON - Yami Jay on January 21, 2005
    Naruto is sssssssssoooooooooo stubborn.
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  • From ANON - animegirl on January 21, 2005
    OHMYGOD i love this story!!!! that was an amazing and totally great chapter. please, for the love of god update as soon as possible!!!!!! MUST HAVE MORE. i love the fact that you put gaara and the others in the story, makes it even better that gaara is nice and protective of naruto, it's soooo cute! of course still wanting sasuke/naruto action but i love it that naruto and the sand sibilings are friends. this could also make the plot very interesting since the two demons are attracted to each other but at the same time naruto and sasuke are attracted to each other as well. this is great, such an intresting story development. i can't wait to read what happens next. if you don't update soon i swear to god i'll hunt you down and make you!bwwahhhahahaha *laughs evily and smiles* good luck
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  • From ANON - Ruby Lee on January 21, 2005
    Gaara. [heart] Love for Gaara. Love for the Gaara/Naruto/Demon love.

    Love for relaying messages by frog.

    --Ruby
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  • From ANON - Spoon no Miko on January 20, 2005
    Wai!! Your story is wonderful. I love how Kyuubi has changed from just a malignant force to an active and vital part of Naruto's character. And now Gaara has someone to hang out with with everyone else asleep. Did Gaara help him stay awake at first? It's very hard to not fall alseep so he probably had some help or something to keep him awake. Does Sasuke get jealous of Naruto and Gaara being familiar with each other? Can't wait until you've updated again. Will watch for it.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2005
    I love Gaara and his siblings. It was a pleasant surprise. :D

    The scene with the frog was really funny. Pop. Pop. Pop. Hehehe.




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