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Reviews for Walking Corpse

By : suomynonakun
  • From ANON - Winter on February 10, 2005
    I've been reading this story for awhile now, and I thought I'd let you know that some of your dialogue between Naruto and Sasuke in the last chapter struck me as notably similiar to the conversation between Sasuke and Naruto in Smoke in Spring, by Saro on ff.net ( http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2159239/1/ ). I'm not claiming you stole it, but the two exchanges were close enough to give me a deja vu moment. You may want to check it out.
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  • From ANON - animegirl on February 10, 2005
    OHMIGOD i think i'm gona cry, poor naruto. i feel so bad for him, is death really going to be his only way to stop kuiyubi from taking over. Oh god and poor sasuke *SOB*, this story is so friggin amazing! even though it's sad this is still one of THE BEST naruto fanfics i have EVEN read. no other fanfic has ever gotten to me like this one has, you guys are bloodly great authors, please you can't keep me hanging like this, i HAVE to know what happens, please please update as SOON AS POSSIBLE!!!!! *love and kisses*
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on February 10, 2005
    Goddamnit, Poor Naruto. I am near tears. Poor poor Naruto. Love the fic but god, poor Naruto. Keep up the excellent work. coolsa.
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  • From ANON - kayoko on February 10, 2005
    *tears*

    *sniffles*

    ....you can't kill naru-chan! >_
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  • From ANON - koolanimefreek on February 09, 2005
    OMG!!!! is naru-chan actually gonna die??????????? NOOOOOOO!!! *cries and after two seconds dries saliva tears of her face* anyways..... the way the guys treated naru after finding out he was the kyubis container was so sweet!!! and kiba is such a dork hehehe asking about the hair with such a serious face.... this is a great fic!! please update soon cant wait for next chappy!!!! =^o^=
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  • From ANON - tenohikari on February 09, 2005
    OMFG! This was an awesome chapter! Yay for more SasuNaru and love the other's reactions to Naruto being the Kyubi holder. But please, don't kill Naruto!
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on February 09, 2005
    Whoa. Crazy chapter. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. Please don't kill Naruto!

    Update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - sherryillk on February 09, 2005
    That's so sad! Already Naruto has asked Sasuke to kill him and now Tsunade is ordering his death and Jiraiya is going to try to kill him... Talk about hurting several people at once... I hope Naruto will be alive at the end of this but if he's not, then at least make Sasuke suffer beautifully. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 09, 2005
    *cries* Great chapter. It reminded me of another story where Sasuke killed Naruto for the same reason. The fics have many differences, though. :)
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  • From ANON - blisblop on February 09, 2005
    Well that was brilliant really brilliant,Of course i, being total one track ,am sobbing over the lack of smex,uhhh if indeed you can not do the scene (i think you could,you led in really well ! but, whatever ,your trip right?)How about someone else ghosting it? Anyway your writing is really exciting and the ideas/plot are exceptional.Good stuff.
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  • From ANON - blue 1/2 on February 08, 2005
    ooh, this is GOOD. I like it a little better than the one on FF.N because it's straight what you wrote--not edited for the kiddies. I really enjoyed the scene where you explained the whole demon attraction thing to Sasuke. I can't write smut either, so it's ok that you left it out. I think it's a good thing that Kyuubi took over and tried to kill Sasuke--maybe that'll wake them both up to the fact that their relationship won't. work.
    Anyway, sorry if this won't work w/ your story, but I really, really love Gaa/Naru. That's just me. And all this straggling between Sasuke and Naruto is sweet, but it's gonna start draggin ... it's good that you got some action in between them, don't get me wrong--it's just that their little back-and-forth-and-back-again is getting old. :) long review! ja ne.
    --blue 1/2
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  • From ANON - just me on February 06, 2005
    OMG you have to update soon....what happens to sasuke...does he go after Naruto or does he distrust him forever more??
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  • From ANON - me on February 05, 2005
    *gasp* don't make naruto leave again!! T__________T i just hope sasuke doesn't remember the entire night at all when he wakes up..it'd make everything a lot easier ^^; i'm gonna poke him with fork if he blames the real naruto *does the arrogant face*
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  • From ANON - Ruby Lee on February 05, 2005
    Hot damn! Not only do Naruto and Sasuke do the nasty, but there's some NaruGaa lovin' as well. I am satisfied.

    Happy ending seems sadly impossible. ;_;
    Thought the flashback with Naruto trying not to sleep was adorable.

    --Ruby
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  • From ANON - Jadetiger on February 04, 2005
    oh i see a problem!!!

    first you mention that Naruto is only wearing black pants when he first starts molesting Gaara, but then you have gaara lift up naruto's shirt to do the seal. Other then that i comend you on another wonderfull chapter and now threaten you with bodly harm in order to have the next chapter out asap!
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