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Reviews for Walking Corpse

By : suomynonakun
  • From ANON - me on March 01, 2005
    *reaches out to the next chapter that's not there* *huggles sasuke* he saved the day again, now if only he can convince naruto to stop with the willing-death deal T__T but then again, maybe the akatsuki will serve as distraction and the whole ordeal will be put off. i shall remain right here and continue to hope against naruto's death. seriously though, don't kill naruto. please T__T
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  • From ANON - Wildfire\'s Virtue on February 20, 2005
    I started reading your story on Fanfiction until I got to chapter four. So i would like to thank you for two things. Onefor writing this awesome story and two for writing one version as a yaoi. if you need any assistence please contact me.
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  • From ANON - Ghonchi on February 20, 2005
    Ne? you haven't finish it! *recovers from drop dead state*
    I was sure you had...well, whatever. really nice story there.
    good to see some narutoXgaara cream fluff *grin*
    would really hope for a really cute ending with Naruto dying in Sasukes arms...
    Yeah, I know... Drama queen no; one! but it's really nice to cry because of a
    story...feel nice *totall wierdo*
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  • From ANON - jazzy on February 20, 2005
    Very good, it's rare to see the Kyubbi addressed in this fashion and narrowed down to the two paths that could be taken the destruction of Kyubbi by killing Naruto. You address this issue well and tell a I don't want to say sweet or lovely romance cause it's not it has a depth to it that rings. It's a good story, and I enjoy reading it.
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  • From ANON - Tessen on February 19, 2005
    Type more damn it... it's killing me xD the chapters always seem so long, yet I finish them in like 15 minutes! :P
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  • From ANON - blue 1/2 on February 19, 2005
    kee ... it's too bad the stupid close-minded people at FF.N won't even consider coming here to read this--I like this version better. The passion that you leave out of the story on FF.N is just too good to miss. It's like skipping half of an entire chapter, and then you don't fully appreciate the author's work. What am I babbling about--I just like it for the Gaa/Naru ... =] I also like the way you're developing ero-sennin into the story, his 'fight' with Sasuke was interesting back and forth before Naruto cut it off. Good use of character. Thanks for re-directing me here! Gomen for the long review--be seeing you on FF.N and AFF.N!
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  • From ANON - Sami on February 18, 2005
    i have read many fanfics on this site but you are the first i ever reveiwed for... feel special.

    i thought i would inform you that i love your story... but...

    if you make this story a sad one in the end... I WLL DESTORY YOU!!!!

    you know if you make the ending like story "i think i better leave right now" (which is a good story that you should read on ff.net it's sasunaru) i will never forgive you, the ulternate ending did help a bit... but it's not the same.

    love the story. looking forward to next weeks chapter!

    Sami
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  • From ANON - hitobito on February 17, 2005
    oh...my...goodness! Jyraiya was so close! what would have happened if he had succesed? what about akastuki? now Naruto's strenght is sealed, what will he do now to help? will he try to use kyubi's chakra for the last time? he has Gaara's help, but will it be enough? will he really die to protect everyone? is that really the only way? arg! please update soon!
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  • From ANON - TearStreak on February 17, 2005
    I really do love this story. I have it in my favorites and check up every once in a while. It's very well written, and right now very sad. I'm hoping that you're not going to kill of Naruto, but I can see how it would work into the plot. I'm just hoping something can be done, but I'll keep waiting!
    Ja--
    TearStreak
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  • From ANON - Lady Kaiya on February 17, 2005
    This story is beyond brilliant and beautiful. I'm tearing up already, and Naruto hasn't even died yet. You are an excellent author with much to be proud of. You have kept everyone reasonabily in character while still maintaining artistic creativitiy and orginality. I am definately inspired to work harder to achieve this level. Please keep up the fantastic work and get the next chapter out as soon as you can. Until then, ja ne!
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  • From ANON - kat8cha on February 17, 2005
    I really feel pity for Jiriaya. I mean... it's his student! And wow, poor Naru-chan. But I loved Gamakichi's arrival!
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  • From ANON - ST on February 17, 2005
    this isn't going to be one of those happy ending stories is it? *just realizes this now* sad... but the story is great nontheless even if i can't forsee any blue skies.
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on February 17, 2005
    (Ch. 13)
    I'm gonna cry. So sad. Why must Naruto die? :(

    Well, at least it's good angst.^^

    Hope you update soon; I really want to see how the end will be.
    Until then,
    Ja ne~
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  • From ANON - evvy on February 17, 2005
    ....If naruto's gonna die (*tries not to die as welll*) .....THEN HE AND SASUKE BETTER HAVE SEX AT LEAST ONCE BEFORE HE GOES!!!! XD XD XD;;;; *sob*
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  • From ANON - animegirl on February 17, 2005
    that was such a great chapter, i can't wait to read what happens next. i'm so glad sasuke showed up in time to save naruto, i swear to god my heart almost stopped when i thought it was in end for him. damn you write so well, i love this story, keep up the amazing work!!!!!
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