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Reviews for Walking Corpse

By : suomynonakun
  • From ANON - ladygizarme on June 17, 2005
    omgoddess, your writing is awesome! i haven't been able to read for awhile so i had like 2 chapters waiting for me to read i think... your descriptions of the battles and sasuke's level 2 cursed seal were extremely good, especially... i've just seen it in the anime and it is FAREAKY!! w/out the wings though i think sasuke's kind of an exotic-looking-beauty like that though... though it barely looks like the real him.. but anyway, back to the matter at hand... omgoddess, what's gonna happen now that the seal's completely broken? will naruto be able to gain control again?? is sasuke gonna go level 2 again? does he even have the energy for that? is hinata gonna be ok?? eeeeeeek *bites nails waiting for more updates* hope there's more soon!!
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  • From ANON - Bluey on June 11, 2005
    Wow....
    I have to admit.... this fic is awesome. I don't usually read a fic if it involves losing my precious beauty sleep, and I definitely don't leave a review unless I feel it to be necessary. Too troublesome... hehe.

    Anyway, in this case I feel it absolutely necessary for me to leave a review to beg you to continue writing this fic.

    PLEASE WRITE MORE!! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!

    Well, now that is done, I shall go to bed. Hopefully I won't drive myself crazy guessing the possible endings to your fic.
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  • From ANON - Donna on June 10, 2005
    I LOVE this story. I'm SO addicted to it. Your writing skills are incredible and you always keep me on the edge of my seat drooling for more.... It is just an incredible piece of work. Never get tired of it -- your descriptions of the characters are amazing. Great job in keeping them in character, and great job with keeping the story interesting. I love everything about this story!! I can't wait til the next chapter. Until then I'll just have to keep re-reading it. Hee. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Missa on June 05, 2005
    Aw, can't remember how many fics there are-- Naru goes missing, comes back, SasuNaru takes place, big war-- I love this story out of them all! Well, if I can I remember the other ones...
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  • From ANON - blisblop on June 02, 2005
    It is getting very tense,lovely.
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  • From ANON - Miku on June 02, 2005
    Wow, this is such a wonderful fanfic!
    I'm usually not one to read yaoi and I was a bit hesistent at first to read this, but I certianly don't regret it.
    You write the action perfectly, something that I would espect from the Naruto anime and manga. The romantic tension between Sasuke and Naruto is woven perfectly. This story puts in a lot of darker twists in Naruto than I would've thought. I never considered the possibility of the Kyuubi being like Shukaku and trying to take over the host while he were sleeping. Another thing I like about this, is that, even though Sasuke and Naruto are your main focus, you also go through what's going on in the other characters heads and how they feel about everything.
    So, all in all, this fic kicks ass! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - GS* on June 01, 2005
    awww nooo! it ended! wwahhh. but sasuke's vision came tru. i really wanna read the rest! ahh soo good. it'd b soo cool if this was like a extra to the series. XP. i'm weird. well plz update soon!!! ahh the suspense!!! >_
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  • From ANON - Puppyslut on June 01, 2005
    Aghhhhhhh.
    I can tell, this wait will be agonizing.
    I'm actually really interested in what happens in this story, which is strange.....because I usually just look for good smut.
    XD!
    Anywho. Keep it up, and if you send out Update Emails, definitely let me know when the next chapter comes around.

    -Pupslut.-
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  • From ANON - fyredevyl on June 01, 2005
    Woo hoo!!! You updated! I really love this story. The plot, the style, everything, is really well-done. Keep up the good work! ^_^
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  • From ANON - OOF on May 31, 2005
    OMG!!! I AM CRYING!!! WHATS GONNA HAPPEN TO NARUTO?!!! I HAVE TO KNOW!!!! (wigh) woah, ok i god now, but PLZ update soon! I reeeaallllyyyy have to know!!
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on May 31, 2005
    oh man, that is just cruel. How could you just leave it like that, and we all know that it will be a month b4 you update again. But anyhoo, keep up the good work and update A.S.A.P.
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  • From ANON - allyluv17 on May 31, 2005
    man! i freakin love your updates. my eyes started watering up at the last part where naruto goes, "sasuke, i'm afraid.." and everything turned red. man! man! man! please continue soon!!! i LOVE YOU! YOU'RE AWESOM!!!!
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  • From ANON - RavenWings on May 31, 2005
    *Dies from a heartattack* .....OH! MY! GOD!!! Okay, I'm having a *hell* of a lot of trouble thinking of a fanfic with a worse cliffhanger than that! Hell, I'm having problems thinking of a *novel* that has a worse cliffhanger than that! *Falls over* That was sooooooo evil! You'd better get that next chapter out fast, or your gonna lose all your readers from death by shock! ^^;;; Gahhhhh.... Lol, though I'm sure you're happy to get the reaction you were pro'lly going for, pleeeeease post the next chapter soon? I know *I'll* forgive you for this chapter taking so long to get out as long as the next one comes out soon! ^^' Very very VERY good, please post more!
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  • From ANON - Iris Anthe on May 30, 2005
    Excellent. Simply an excellent story. I've been reading it all day long, every spare moment I've had. Your development of our well-loved characters has been scrupulous and consistent and just wonderful. The plot, of course, is magnificent. I am so glad that Orochimaru is not just an excuse for battles, you know, the easy bad guy sho just shows up every now and then to pick up the pace. His meeting with Naruto and Kyuubi in Naruto's mind was very nicely done, and his obviously well-planned attack in the last few chapters has been heartening. The new Sound Four were very nicely created, and it was a surprise to see Sasuke unfurl the curse seal once more. I know that in the Manga it's all in black and white, but in the anime, he actually does turn kind of grey rather than brown and his hair doesn't quite go all the way to white, just much lighter. There are two consistent typos in your story. One is when you use "loosing" instead of "losing," and the other is when you use "boarders" instead of "borders." I'm sure your beta reader will find those, but I thought I'd let you know anyway.

    I love the Naruto you've created here. He's still so clearly IN character, and yet so very different than his gennin self. Also, your addition of the Sand siblings, who just HAD to push their way in is brilliant. *sigh* I am so happy you are driven write this and if I'm not mistaken, you've actually split this story into two braches no less? I'll have to go track down the non-paired version on fanfiction.net! I eagerly await more and may the muses be with you.
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  • From ANON - - on May 30, 2005
    Lurrvvv~ beautiful :D I was patiently waiting for an update, and as always, you did not disappoint. Usually I get bored of such technical descriptions because authors generally try to just make it totally unbelievable or it just drags on and you want to get to the plot. But the action in this fic is very interesting. I see it! ^^ So I will once again wait patiently for you to write more. I have to say though, my favorite scene out of this entire fic is the second to last scene of this latest chapter. The one where Sasuke dreams that memory he had with Naruto. It was really really reallyyyyyy beautiful! I mean, I don't know why, but I just want to keep that picture in my head frozen JUST LIKE THAT. It was splendid, and I want to see more of those heart-warming scenes in your fic. I love it. Keep up the great job :)
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