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Reviews for Hollow

By : sharingank
  • From ANON - Reikai on May 25, 2005
    Wow, I love this fic, it had both my favorite pairings in here. After I read through, I started to notice the familiar writing style, though, I still couldn't put my finger on it, at one point, I thought it was one of Firefly's fic, but then again, it didn't seem to be her style, it had more of a charm to it. I guess this is what I get for not paying attention to the author names, but as I got to the end, I saw the author's name, and a bag of vague horseshoes hit me, it was a while before I noticed that one of my favorite authors wrote this. I've read and loved your Petals fic, I hold it oh so dearly to my heart, and it is so hard to find as many Naruto/Sakura fics around. I've been a silent fan of yours for a long while on Fanfiction.net. I loved how everything was written, the whole plot, the deep justification of their feelings, and very rarely do I get to read the binds of duty, and affections vying against, or in tandem with each other. Yet very rarely do I see it written, and worked out as well as yours, also, the conflict of a love surviving between them makes the characters much more human, just as if souls were poured into the characters the same way Kishimoto Masashi had done. You did a very good job of fleshing out the characters, and keeping them true to their own characters to the series. The grammar was superb, and there were minimal mistakes, but they are soon forgotten, and drowned in the deepness of the story, for this, I cannot state the typos. But, you could work a little on when the characters' dialog comes in, but then again, it's a small issue, and doesn't detract from the story, and that is all that matters. Godly job on your story, your writting skills are for certain, will carry you to possibly a profession, and maybe you can inspire more individuals to write as well as you do, and please, keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - MaiMo on January 20, 2005
    i really like your story i was looking foa a perfect nejihina fic and just found it
    thanks!!im so happy!!
    you shud write more from nejihina because its so hard for me to found a fic that has what it takes to make they're relacionship real
    bye!

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 04, 2005
    Hinata's father name is Hiashi. Hizashi is Neji's father.
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  • From ANON - Karista on December 06, 2004
    Cute, in a dark and slightly angsty/twisted way. I enjoyed it, very well portrayed and highly believeable. I can totally see this going in many directions.
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  • From ANON - Rhenoah on December 06, 2004
    Very nice fic, not too hard to follow along with, it all wrapped up nicely.
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