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Reviews for Variety Pack

By : Vermaxen
  • From moor on May 23, 2011
    Loved the `variety`in here, not only in character, but in moods, themes, acts, and in the last one (SasoSaku), the actual introduction of depravity. These were thoughtful and incredibly well-written & delivered, and it makes me a bit sad you`ve moved on from the Naruto fandom, actually, but very grateful you shared these. :)

    Thank you very much, I really enjoyed reading them!
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  • From Mollysa on February 03, 2010
    Personally I even thought about shikasaku possibility until recent hint in amv. I read your GaaSaku and that was awesome. i decided to read this one and I am really pleased! Might as well read them all. keep up the good work! Now I'm in love with your stories~!
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  • From trehugger on November 06, 2007
    Hey, I just thought I'd let you know that this is totally awesome. My boyfriend and I cosplay Kiba and Sakura, so naturally, we did photos for this (not nude, don't worry XD) and I thought you might want to see them XD
    http://mrsmonaghan.deviantart.com/art/KibaSaku-8-67111319
    http://mrsmonaghan.deviantart.com/art/KibaSaku-10-67684464

    There are other KibaSaku pics, but those two are specifically taken from this ficlet.

    Thanks for the inspiration =)
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 03, 2007
    Awesome!!! Each pairing was so believeable (did I spell that right?)!!! I especially liked Kakashi and of course, SHINO!!! Great job! I look forward to reading more of your fics. Excellent!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 03, 2007
    This is so awesome!!! I wouldn't have seen some of the pairings but you made them work! I especially like the one with Shino!! He is my favorite!!! Can't wait to read the rest! YOu always have good stuff!!!! Great Job!!!
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  • From Honotori on August 18, 2007
    I really like your way of writing it's very intense. I only have two problems, and it's with the SasoriXSakura fic. It has nothing to do with the pairing.

    It's about Sasori. Not to sound like I am being paranoid or something. But I have to say that you had Sasori's description all wrong. "It was with some shock that she realized that despite the mass of dark grey hair standing out from his head, he looked young. This man couldn’t be over thirty..."

    Alright, number one: Sasori has red hair, very red hair, it's pretty dark too.

    Number two: Sasori is not older then Kakashi. He is younger, and he is probably about twenty-two. What reasoning for that? Well, in the updated manga it said that Sasori was twelve when he left the Sand village and that the Sandaime of the Sand village went missing about ten years before the fight between Sasori and Chiyo-baasama. Which means he is about twenty maybe a little older. But not much older then Kakashi.

    Sorry if I sound fangirlish I'm just saying so you know.

    Other then that I really enjoyed reading your stories they were very good.
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  • From riverbreeze on March 16, 2007
    I really like this one. There aren't enough good Naru/Saku out there. ^_^

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  • From riverbreeze on March 16, 2007
    *smiles* These are really good oneshots! I have a question though. Are you planning on having a sort of sequel to some of these oneshots? Like the KibaSaku one? Cuz that would be really cool! Anyway, great job!

    -riverbreeze-
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  • From ANON - De on October 01, 2006
    Look at the number of hits that your "trash" got. The last time I checked (Oct 1st 10:42 am) it was 48,905. Are you SURE you won't do any more gift fics? Please? Ok, ok, if not anymore Naruto how about something else. ANYTHING else, you could write smutty original stories and we'd all be happy. Because I love the way you write, and smut is addictive. Help me get my fix?
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  • From EzriCandy on September 15, 2006
    You know, I never really though about pairing Shino with Sakura until I read this. I always thought that he would be hot but you just made him sound damn sexy! Wonderful Job!!

    Ezzy
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  • From ANON - Kim on August 31, 2006
    I love the story Ideas you have,and how you write them is great.I love all the chapters.They're awsome! I have a Request.Can you do a DeidaraxSakura story/chapter,if you get a chance.

    Thank You and keep up the good work!
    Kim
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  • From ANON - Vera on August 28, 2006
    Awesome! I love how you... hang on let me find the words... Um... How you showed Sasori's personality. That was a really bad wording for it, but... eh...
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  • From ANON - speechless on August 08, 2006
    By far, I think your Sasori+Sakura one-shot was the BEST. It was a first for me--the themes, the plot, the transition, the characters, everything.

    And I absolutely fuckin' loved it.

    I only wish you could do some more one-shots (they don't even have to be lemons, frankly) with randoms guys paired up with Sakura.

    Anyway, this was a simply gorgeous collection. You are very talented. I hope to read some of your other works in the future.

    Yours Truely,
    Utterly Speechless

    P.S. - Are you on fanfiction.net by anychance? I can't seem to recall where I found your account on adultff.net, but I have a fleeting feeling that it was from a link on ff.net. Maybe off your profile there?
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  • From ANON - Ishanatur on July 05, 2006
    wow im so impressed your work is amazing keep writing
    this is just me personally but i thinnk comedy is the hardest genre it requires a much more intimate knowledge of your characters and people in general than any other writing form angst and smut included
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  • From ANON - chocolat on February 12, 2006
    I liked the shino/sakura fic. Shino's so hot! I don't really like Kiba/Sakura but this was a good chapter.
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