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Reviews for Variety Pack

By : Vermaxen
  • From ANON - shuruku on December 06, 2004
    i´m so glad i decided to read your story!! you´ve got an awesome writing style!! you make every pairing turn out believable, a talent most fiction writers never develop at all. finally a story i enjoyed again, thank you! and continue the great work...
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  • From ANON - Kamui on December 06, 2004
    Wow. I liked the Shino one. Very cute. The Kiba one was also quite enjoyable. I, too, wish to see a Lee/Sakura fic also and I've also been intrigued by a Shikamaru/Sakura. Seeing as how most of these take place in the future also, perhaps even a Konohamoru/Sakura. >.> Yeah, that's pushing it, but hey, maybe someone will like the idea. XD
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  • From ANON - M on December 06, 2004
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    Just wanting to say what a great writer you are! ^^; I've seen a few kibxsaku fictions before, but never a lemon. I hope you consider writing a LeexSaku lemon.

    can't wait for the next one, shika/saku! ^^b
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  • From ANON - Gigicerisier on December 06, 2004
    Hi, I am Gigi. I love your story although I don't really like NaruHina (I like LeeHina better then Naruto with Temari..). I am very excited in reading next chapter um.... couple. Who will be coupled with Sakura..... mmmmmm I really adore her....
    I usually don't read ShinoSaku fic since I don't really like insects.... but Shino's character always reminds me Trowa Barton(yes, my favourite couple is 3+R!) Cool, silent but very culculating.....If he is not from the clan who uses insects..... Shino would be very suitable for Sakura...

    >Even if I know I can’t force people to do things they don’t want to, the best way to inspire others, I think is by example. So, in a quest to open up the offerings that affnet has to offer, I am endeavoring to write not one or two but *six* different lemon pairings with Sakura as the only consistent character.

    Iam very happy to know that finally someone trys to write more interesting pairing such as ShinoSaku or GenSaku(About Last Night By – Wicked Innuendo).... my most favouite coupling is Hayate+Sakura which I have never seen anywhere except some Japanese sites.... I always think Sakura deserves mature characters such as Hayate, Shino or Shikamaru... I have read many KakaSaku fic or ItaSaku fics but I just don't think it is possible that Sakura would be fell in love with the person who traumatised Sasuke...... then Kakashi, I read a lot and I have joined some KakaSaku alliance but he has been neglecting Sakura a lot.....

    >My sincere hope is that someone will come away from this with an idea, a single grainy glimmer of an idea about writing a lemon/lime of their own featuring one of these pairings.

    Yes, I really hope too.... I have once mentioned about my favouite coupling was Hayate+Sakura on some forum... then it seemed I made everyone there freeze by shock.... well, even I know that I am the only one who supports Hayate+Sakura, I am fine, I am proud of it! (Should I write HayaSaku fic? I might.... anyway, I am planning to make a site dedicated Hayate+Sakura... I can read Genma+Sakura fic then why not HayateSakura fic.? Wow.. i really might write some HayaSaku fic near future thanks to you!!

    >Note that I am not dissing on any of the fics in existence. People write what they want. But maybe they can want something new and different if I just put it out there. There’s nothing wrong with adding on to a repertoire of couples, right? Not everything needs to be about the same pairs going through the same traumas. I’m not saying you should suddenly dislike other couplings, just maybe think about some other possibilities in addition.

    Yeah, you are absolutely right. I am little bit bored of reading fics Sakura lament the long lost love for Sasuke(such as fanfiction.net).... because these fic usually make Sakura very venerable , which I don'really agree.... She has got another self which called Inner Sakura... If she learn under 5th Hokage, she will be invinsible.... okay... nearly invinsible.... Sakura is such a interesting character.... she is the probably only the one who hasn't got any special blood line or inherited power(other than Tenten) unlike Hinata or Ino. but she has got own good ability such as amasing memory or chakra control.... these abilities are not given but taken by her own hand.
    I suspect that Sakura's family are not even Shinobi... I am very sorry that I wrote such long reviews... but I just so excited to find the fic Sakura is portrayed as a capable girl....... Thanks for writing such a enjoyable story. I am looking forward to reading another chapters!

    Gigi
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  • From KittieNova on December 05, 2004
    Please, please, please tell me one of these will be a Shikamaru/Sakura! I have to admit I've never really considered this pairing but you did an awesome job introducing me to a new possible couple! Hope to see more chapters up soon!
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  • From ANON - AmberEyes on December 05, 2004
    Very well done! Finally some more Shino love in the fanfiction community. I was very pleased at how well you made the pairing work and you did a nice job of keeping them in character. I simply love the "get Naru and Hinata" together plot. Very cute.
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  • From ANON - am on December 05, 2004
    y'know, I once claimed I like any pairing as long as the author can pull it off. you've just proved me right, thanks a lot ^^
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  • From ANON - Maui on December 05, 2004
    Yay! Keep that UP!!! Lemon Rocks especially if Hot guys fuck with Sakura!! Update soon... I'll be waiting!
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  • From ANON - MysticInca on December 05, 2004
    *giggles sheepishly* Okay, so yeah, I'm one.... well I should now say, WAS one, of those girls that went, "ew! bug boy!" And now that I've read this little one-shot, *grins* I've seen Shino in a new light so to say.

    Your writing style is very good, it simply flows perfectly with very little bumps. And I'm eagerly waiting to see what the next pairing will be.

    Excellent job! I have been converted! *laughs*

    Mystic~me
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  • From ANON - lucy on December 04, 2004
    I love it! Please write more!
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  • From ANON - M on December 04, 2004
    I've never read a ShinoSaku lemon before. I liked it. (:
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  • From ANON - Mr. Pointy on December 04, 2004
    It's good. Keep writing.
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