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Reviews for Variety Pack

By : Vermaxen
  • From ANON - AmberEyes on December 12, 2004
    Ah, I very much enjoyed the Gaara chapter. Your writing is very entertaining. It's stand out, especially for what it is. Can't wait to find out what the next chapters will be. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Mariam on December 11, 2004
    I loved the Gaara and Sakura one! It was fabulous! Are you sure you're only going to do six? Consider continuing the series? I like these! ^__^ You are fabulous.
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  • From ANON - KittyKristi on December 11, 2004
    This is such a very very good fic, it surprised me soooo much.. Originally I only read it because I don't see much with Kiba. I'll admit that. And while I don't hate Sakura, I don't like her very much but..

    This fic, It gave me a whole new respect for her. You're a wonderful, wonderful writer!! ^_^ Super awesome concept too. Keep writing!!
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  • From ANON - dragonflyelj on December 10, 2004
    Sigh, that was so sweet at the end! Before I say anything else, I absolutely CAN'T wait for the Gaara chapter! You write a HOT lemon! I totally understand what you are talking about with trying to do something that was not done in the previous lemons. After a while it feels like you are just rewording the same thing over again. Kiba was a bit of a shit, ne? I totally saw the Inu Yasha influence in that. Actually that was one of the reasons that I had moved away from Inu Yasha. I got pissed that NO ONE could write a lemon without the ritual biting. You get tired of reading the same things over and over again, and that is what was happening. I think this was my first Shino coupling that I have read, and it rocked! You know, if Kiba took off that hood more often, he is a really good-looking character. It's that fur around his face, I don't like it. I also like the connections that you make. It's not just rip off the clothes and have sex. There is more to it. You give reasons why these two people would be together, and write it in such a way that the reader wants to see them together. I loved the way you did the Shino one. And I didn't notice a bunch of errors which detract from the story, which is always a bonus! ^_-

    Keep up the good work and I can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - love on December 09, 2004
    oh my gosh! You are going to do a gaara saku! Please make it really really good! I love that pairing along with NejiSaku and kakashi saku. Can you make one of these? (puppy dog eyes)
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  • From ANON - Lea on December 09, 2004
    Still very good. Good chapter. Keep going!

    ::L::
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  • From ANON - MysticInca on December 09, 2004
    Oh, fluffy ending on that one.
    *sighs* The curse of a one shot, you get a full story with no wait, but then wish a full story could be made.
    Your doing a wonderful job! I know it's gotta be so incredably difficult to write so many different perspectives in such a short amount of time. Let alone the fact that each and every lemon varies from story to story.
    So far these stories have made me squirm, giggle and sigh in wanton delight. lol
    Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to your next chapter. Gaara/Sakura is a personal favorite of my own, could never work in reality, but damn do they look good together.

    Mystic~me
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  • From ANON - Maui on December 09, 2004
    Omg!! I really wanna read more!! Yay!! GaaSaku next! Uhmm... Will there be a NEJISAKU?? OR KAKASAKU?? I'm just a great supporter of it. And I know that many people nowadays are addicted to Kakasaku and some in nejisaku... So, what?? I wish there'll be!! Update soon and keep it up!
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  • From ANON - AmberEyes on December 09, 2004
    Oddly enough, my favorite is the ShinoSaku so far although nice job on the other two. The way you described the 19 year old Kiba was just delicious. Very enjoyable. Looking forward to the Gaara chapter, because Gaara needs some lovin'. Just wondering though, may this possibly include a Rock Lee chapter in the future? I'm unsure if that could really be considered an "alternative" pairing.
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  • From ANON - am on December 09, 2004
    aawww, so sweet. I liked the ShikaSasu even more than the one with Kiba. shikamaru was just fantastically in character!!
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  • From ANON - xgirlrogue on December 09, 2004
    hehe you cheecky girl

    I want a kaka/saku from you - Kakashi is the man. Plus it could be in the future *sigh* never enough kakasaku out there

    I love this series! Hope to see more soon and the gaasaku is a favorite of mine as well - also neji and itachi are my personal little demons who I love to see with sakura lol

    hmm..... you might need more than 6 chapters......
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  • From ANON - Kate on December 07, 2004
    I have to say--I absolutely loved this. My favorite of the two posted now--Shino and Sakura. I had never thought about that pair but I was very cool. I've only just recently discovered this site...and while I'm still new to smut....for some reason it's getting addicting. I keep coming back for more. Every once in a while you find an original story with decent writing.

    Hurrah for variety!

    Yeah for Shino!

    ^_______^
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  • From ANON - Eris on December 07, 2004
    This was the first ShinoSaku story i've ever read...i've never even considered the pair before, unsure of how they would compliment each other but somehow, someway, you made it work brilliantly. Just everything was perfect - the dialogue the descriptions, gah, it makes me sad it's over. Atleast i still have the KibaSaku to read :D another pairing i haven't considered but am anxiously waiting to read. You said you had six different pairings with Sakura right? Awesome! I have something to look forward to now!
    And I agree that the same pairings can get repetitive - that's why yours shines so bright.
    Anyway, enough babbling...great story, love your style, keep up the good work, and post those other pairings soon hopefully :d
    ~Eris
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  • From ANON - Lea on December 06, 2004
    Wow, awesome *laughs*. I love the pairings so far, Sakura is my all time favorite ninja girl :)
    And I do not mind NOT seeing Sasuke in the Lemon bunch lol. He's just to much anger :P And we want Sakura to have fun, ne? :)
    Shino is such a great character as well. I totally agree that he is amazing :D
    Kiba is hot too. *drools*

    ::Lea::
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  • From ANON - Scurvy on December 06, 2004
    i love these rare pairings. and the one coming up.
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