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Reviews for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

By : Kalariona
  • From ANON - Kori Nibiki on May 23, 2005
    Sasuke finally got his chance to kiss Naruto and so he kissed him senseless, but they were interupted by Ino, Sakura, and Shikamaru's arrival. Thus inorder to give Sasuke a chance to get away and to assuage part of his guilt for kissing Sasuke when he had a girlfriend, Naruto kissed Ino "in a way that wasn't really suitable for public viewing."

    XD XD XD

    Yeah that's just my fangirl side taking over for a bit. Great chapter and cant' wait for the next. Keep up the awesome writing. Ja!
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  • From ANON - clowangel on May 23, 2005
    Whoot! Go Naruto! Didn't know you had it in ya! XD Teehee
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  • From ANON - 90210 on May 22, 2005
    omg!!! i loved that last chapter!!! please update soon,after that last chapter i like this fic more than i ever have.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 22, 2005
    AW, I love Gaara. ;___________; *pokes Sasuke* Will you leave some room later? XD
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on May 22, 2005
    Heh. I'd forgotten about this fic. I'm glad that you decided to continue it.

    The only critique I have for this chapter is Tsunade's OOC behavior. I think she's have a better hold on her emotions than that.

    Update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - mE on May 22, 2005
    How could you!! You kept us waiting like forever!! grr!! I love this stiory so much and I want to know how everything will work out.. :D Keep up the googd work
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  • From ANON - Sukara on May 22, 2005
    That took a looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong time to update ~_~ * Huggl;es tightly* I'll huggle you to death if you don't update soon! >=)
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  • From ANON - Van on April 30, 2005
    MORE OMRE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!! MAKE THE TEME JELOUS!!!!!!!
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  • From Sukara on April 16, 2005
    *Gasps* *Makes eyes go >< with a sheeping grin* *Squeals* I can't wait to see what happens!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - minjin00 on March 30, 2005
    ahh i want to know what sasuke's planning to do. cant wait for the update.
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  • From ANON - macy on March 28, 2005
    im kinda confused. i don't know what sasuke's planning, and i don't really understand the dream -_-;; ahehehe...it makes me excited about the next chapter coz I think it'll make things clearer. thanks for the update ^^
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  • From ANON - LadySamurai on March 27, 2005
    Ha Ha Ha!! Sasuke with a girly bag! what exactly is his plan anyway?
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  • From ANON - Letta on March 26, 2005
    I loved the Ino/Naruto friendship more than the couple, but if he ends up with Sasuke, then there's nothing to worry about. Honestly, I really liked the way you wrote their friendship. Also, what was it that Ino gave Naruto on the bridge that he put in his pocket, when Sakura and Sasuke saw? I never saw anymore of that. Anyway, I just love this story. It's very good.
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  • From ANON - Kori Nibiki on March 15, 2005
    I enjoyed this chapter. We see a bit more of Sasuke's inner emotions surfacing. Highly enjoyed and looking forward to the next installment. Keep up the great work. Ja!
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  • From ANON - Saki on March 14, 2005
    Not bad at all with the chapters on Naruto,Ino and Sasuke but I do admit that I really love the story you made.^^ oh btw, it's Shizune when you put Shizume but other than that, the story was good itself.I can't wait for the updates.
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