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Reviews for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

By : Kalariona
  • From Sukara on August 29, 2005
    OOOOOOOOOOO!!! x3 That was yum yum!!! =D -Wonder about the voices- -Head hurts- Eh, my head hurts already and I'm going to my first day of school on the 30th. xD

    Beautiful update. =3 Keep up the good job!!

    Ja Ne!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 29, 2005
    *grins* you gotta love that SasukexNaruto Goodness! Very well done, Keep up the Good Work *gives thumbs up*
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  • From ANON - izumi on July 28, 2005
    another seal??? yay!! another seal!!!
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  • From ANON - AsanoMatsuya on July 22, 2005
    In answer to the question about Yondaime, I've heard people call him Arashi, and the strange rumor (?) that he is Naruto's dad, but i'm not very sure. Lovely story...I can't wait to see what happens!!!
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  • From ANON - Fantasy on July 15, 2005
    Ahhh~~I do really like it and look forward to your update.
    Your Gaara is so cool!
    And I love obsession!
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  • From ANON - Kai on July 14, 2005
    I read somewhere that the Fourth's name is Arashi....
    Anyway, keep up the great work!!!!!!!
    LOVE YA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Kai
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  • From ANON - Terry on July 14, 2005
    Love the lastest chapter. Even though Sasuke did use an illusion, the fact still remains: Sasuke was crossdressing! Loved it, please continue.
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  • From ANON - just_me on July 11, 2005
    Wow, I never really noticed this story, untill I started reading (all 11 chapters) and couldn't stop. This story is great. I did notice some grammar mistakes in one of the chapters (don't ask me which one). I did get a good laugh out of the last chapter. It felt like deja-vu all over, only this time between Sasuke (acting as Ino) and Naruto. I do feel a bit bad for ino though.
    There are a couple of things which wouldn't get out of my mind;
    1. Where did you come up with Shika/Saku?! I never really thought about those two as a pair.
    2. Gaara didn't know about the kyuubi? I thought he did... i think i'm going to re-read Naruto for this one.
    3. What is cussing? Are you sure it isn't cursing?
    That was all. I hope you'll update soon. Take your time, though. I like good stories...asking if you would hurry up may water things (like the story itself) down. till then, ja ne. ^__^V

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  • From ANON - Sukara on July 10, 2005
    Yay!! You updated!! ^o^ At first I couldn't find out about Ino in the beginning but then once Naruto started saying "This is not Ino! This is not Ino's kiss!" In his head I was like "-Gasp-! Sasuke!" xD
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  • From ANON - Saki on July 10, 2005
    Not bad for the current chapter. Oh, and by the way... The fourth Hokage's name is Arashi. hmm,I am still in question on who was the one who actually kissed Naru chan but I think it might have been Sasuke who henged into Ino.Anyways I'm looking forward to more of the story.^^
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  • From ANON - lalala on July 10, 2005
    Ummm... they haven't mentioned the 4th's name yet (I think) and Ino's father is Inoshi.... I'm pretty sure he's her real father and he's still alive.
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  • From ANON - Ayako on July 10, 2005
    Ah, so that's the reason behind the kiss. XD I wonder what that chest is for. Hmmm.

    What we know in the canon is that her father is Yamanaka Inoshi who is part of the original InoShikaChou trio. I've never seen her mom, so I have no clue if she has one...
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  • From ANON - Haibara on July 10, 2005
    Do you REALLY have to make it SasuNaru later on? That pairing is everywhere these days...it'll be nice to read a fanfic where SasuNaru DOESN'T triumph within a Sasu/Naru/? love triangle. PLEASE!!
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on July 10, 2005
    Hey I'm glad that you updated.

    I wonder when we're going to find out who the fake Ino was? I'm pretty sure it was Sasuke, but I might be surprised.

    Also, that chest is intriguing. I wonder what is trapped inside it and whether or not it's causing Naruto's headaches.

    Finally, there are rumors around the net that the Yondaime's name was Arashi. Circumstantial evidence from the anime, but still there.

    *makes many sacrifices to your muse* I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Kai on May 24, 2005
    BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! WHA? Reflex action. REFLEX ACTION!!!! HOW DARE YOU??!!! Easily.
    LOL
    Love ya!
    Kai
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