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Reviews for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

By : Kalariona
  • From ANON - powder07blossom on December 11, 2005
    Hey... You have a really nice story going on here... However, I noticed a few grammatical errors... I can't pinpoint them without sounding like a really stuck up professor so I'll just tell you that I noticed them so that yu can review your work and edit... Oh and I'm pretty sure that what the ninjas do are 'jutsus' and not 'jitsus'... But I do like the story... Well, what I've read so far... I'll review again once I'm finished reading all the available chapters... :D
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  • From ANON - waffles on December 11, 2005
    why do u have to make it a yaoi why why!!!! LOL
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  • From ANON - MeMe on December 01, 2005
    i want to know when is the next one coming out???
    it's really good and i just start is today and finish all 13...
    so good luck writhing and please finish 14 soon
    MeMe
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  • From ANON - coriander on November 17, 2005
    wow this story is getting hot! I must admit that I wasn't expcting it to be good, but there you go proving me wrong! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on November 14, 2005
    *glee!*
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  • From on November 14, 2005
    yay! an update! its been so long, i had to reread the entire thing- but it was worth it! i really like this story so far, great job!

    ps: WHAT is with that chest???
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 14, 2005
    hetro...oh babe please this story is way to hot for hetro
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  • From ANON - Sasuke\'s Iris on October 16, 2005
    oh how i would love to see an update, ya know a new chapter so we can break up with Ino and move on to the good stuff with sasuke and naruto, yes it will undoubtably be sad when ino gets dumped but sakura can pick up the peices and nauto can get invoved with my favorite character sasuke!yeah update update!!!
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  • From ANON - EscagirlUK on October 02, 2005
    Oooooh! This is the bit where the dramatic mysterious piano music comes in, isn't it? You know, before Dracula rises from his coffin, or before Frankenstein's monster is sent up into the lightning storm to be given life! I bet that was the Fourth's room or something, right? Anyways, update as soon as possible!
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  • From ANON - EscagirlUK on October 02, 2005
    I've heard that the Fourth's name was Arashi, and that he's Naruto's dad. They do look a lot alike. *^^* Anyways, great story. Off to read part 12 now!
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  • From ANON - phoenixdown7 on September 28, 2005
    Yours is one of the few stories I follow religiously. It's very original in its relationships, and I was strangely sucked in by Naruto and Ino together. I'm a SasuNaru fan myself, so that's saying something. Additionally, the story is very well written with minimal grammatical/spelling mistakes. I really, really appreciate that as well! Anywho, I just hope you are enjoying writing this story as much as we're all enjoying reading it. Good luck with the next chapters! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kori Nibiki on September 17, 2005
    *sighs* I've just reread this story, again! Waits impatiently, but still waits for the next update. So... yeah get it to us, please. And if I didn't mention it before, great work!
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  • From ANON - dark mousy on August 29, 2005
    yay for update. looking forward to the next one. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on August 29, 2005
    I'm...losing...the...battle...to...protect...NaruIno...pairing...ITS SUCKS! Do you have to hurt Ino's feelings?! There's enough SasuNaru in the world that it can handle. Besides...in Naruto love triangle fics, Naruto always ends up with Sasuke. BREAK AWAY FROM THE PACK!! Let Ino have her man!!
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  • From ANON - yianne_21 on August 29, 2005
    Ohh, i think i know where this is going.... siblings right? siblings falling for each other! i was making something of this kind too... if i was right!
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