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Reviews for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

By : Kalariona
  • From ANON - Kirume on January 04, 2006
    I really love they way you wrote Ino. And I think this is adorable, although I live and breathe Sasu/Naru, I don't think Ino should be written out like she is usually in most Sasu/Naru fics. You know, all bitchy and mean, so out of character.


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  • From ANON - cibiboy on January 02, 2006
    I really like this story even tho nar and sas is my fav pairing over everyone eles i hope ino dose not get hurt to bad update soon ok.
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  • From ANON - claire on January 02, 2006
    AHHHHH! great job!
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  • From ANON - ShinigamiTaishou on January 01, 2006
    Great story. I'm loving it so far, so please keep going. Sorry if I haven't review it yet, I kinf of forget it, so now I'll say it, your stroy is excellent. Hope to see the next chapter soon and continue your good work! Ja!
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  • From ANON - B on January 01, 2006
    Some corrections:

    "She would have gone anyway, considering she enjoyed the boys company."

    boys => boy's"

    Talk at the dinner table was boisterous, with laughter
    and badly told jokes, then after dinner games and drinks occurred,
    until Naruto decided that it was time he went home."

    badly told => badly-told

    "He kicked a stone and watched it spin down the road and break
    against a wall He shouldn’t feel this way about Sasuke."

    missing period between "wall and "He."



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  • From chinohana on January 01, 2006
    .O. omg! sasuke jumped him! what's he gonna do? *grabs popcorn*
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  • From ANON - Sukara ((AKA Sentai)) on December 31, 2005
    -Eeps- i wonder what Sasuke is going to do!! So funny. x3 And i wonder in Ino's parents really like Naruto..so mysterious! Kakaka. Keep up the good work. I'm always on the look out for your updates! =3
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  • From ANON - Lanier on December 31, 2005
    argh... oooooh so much frustration. Ino's family was so sweet and I feel bad for Ino. But Naruto belongs to Sasuke. I cant wait to see the next chapter.
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  • From Cindyip on December 31, 2005
    Nice to have you updating. Do another soon. Happy New year!^_-
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  • From ANON - AkaiTsume on December 31, 2005
    I agree with the others, I want to know what's going on in Naruto's head, too. ^_^ I do love the pairings, even if I'm also mainly a NaruSasu shipper. The only problem I've noticed is that in the last chapter, you had Makoto refer to Naruto as Naruto-nee...which is the equivalent of "big sis Naruto." It's supposed to be Naruto-niichan, lol. Other than that, fantastic work, and please don't make us wait too long for an update next time!

    -Akai
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  • From on December 31, 2005
    YAYAYAYAYAYAY!

    an update! i love this story *sigh* i like the shika/sakura thing, they're so cute together and i never would have put them together myself! i've only ever seen hints of shika/sakura in other fics. anyways, i like where the story is going (sasu/naru all the way!) but i'm a little sad about ino. things are going so good w/ her family and she likes him so much :( but there's no spark, so naruto shouldn't lead her on! but how will he get out of this mess?

    AND WHAT IS IN THAT CHEST!?!?

    hehe
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  • From ANON - ~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~ on December 31, 2005
    come on!
    This fic is SO good!
    Update please! and SOON!

    ~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
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  • From ANON - DogDemonChick on December 30, 2005
    plz update! This story ROX I love it!!!! So I command you to UPDATE!................ plz
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  • From ANON - ~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~ on December 16, 2005
    NO! You can't cut me off like that!
    it's like.... 1 in the morning and I have to get up in the morning, you made me stay up all night and now I want more!
    Update as soon as possible! I'm going to have messed up dreams tonight tho (he he he!)
    Keep writing more!

    ~*Kinky_Sweetheart*~
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  • From ANON - Becki on December 11, 2005
    More! This is an amazing series!
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