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Reviews for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

By : Kalariona
  • From ANON - xpyne on August 21, 2006
    Hey what's up!? i just found and read your story today and i thoroughly enjoyed it. what i liked: Naruto being really cute and mostly in character without horrible descriptions of just how "breath-taking" his amazing kawaii-ness and glistening azure orbs are. lmao, really, so many ppl cant understand that if a person actually is being cute, readers can tell without being smacked in the face with it. your story showed a decent amount of restraint. i also like the dynamic between naruto and ino, and the way he cares for her, but until sasuke pressed the issue--no pun intended ^__~ ---couldnt tell there's a difference in the way you innately "like" somebody and the way you react to attraction. plus, his loyalty is sweet. naru-chan is a sweetheart
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  • From ANON - Neko-Chan on August 19, 2006
    Awesome fic!!! I love the Naruto and Ino idea. I dont see many fics that have that ^^ Im not a fan of Naruto and Ino or Sakura and Shikamaru but in your fic, they are very plausible ^_^ Great job!!!
    Hope you update soon!!!
    ~Nekp
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 18, 2006
    yessssssss! two new chappies...loved them, Hinata drunk??? awww and poor Kiba kun...but he will be happy for her if she is gotta love the dog boy for that..but omg now Neji wants Naru too, so thats 3 guys and 2 girls..hmmm well yes Naru baby is a foxy brat, so I can see it, but really all these people should of done told him BEFORE..now they just want to dump it on him ok both Hyuugas did not so they are doing good, but aaaacckk...my frustration I neeeed moreeeeeee...lol..yes I need more, love this fic soo much, always have to back track a chapter or two to make sure I didnt miss anything, and it just gets me all worked up again lol, any I soooooooo ty for the chappies, hope to read more soon, ty and great job as always, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 18, 2006
    OMG! Hinata drunk was so funny! So Shino and Kiba like eachother! Hell yeah, thats hot! I feel sorry for Naruto, he has all these people wanting him. But I want Sasuke to have him! I loved it when Neji noticed the hickey Sasuke left on Naruto. To bad he doesn't know it was Sasuke who did. I wonder if anybody will find out about that. I know Ino's going to figure something out soon. I like Ino, but I think Sasuke and Naruto belong together! I really liked this chapter. Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - j_narusasu_c on August 17, 2006
    Please continue the story! i love it so much! narusasu forever!
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  • From ANON - j_narusasu_c on August 06, 2006
    Cool... Your fanfic's cool... very unique... and I LIKE THE LAST CHAPTER!!!! at last, naruto had... with sasuke! at last! and i like sakura's attitude... also tsunade's... ALL in ALL... i really like your fic...
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  • From ANON - j_narusasu_c on August 03, 2006
    wow! that was one new plot and loveteam! NarutoxIno! but still, nothing beats the very perfect combination of Sasuke/Naruto! I like your story and plot, it's unique! And I like the way Sasuke's jealous of Ino, well, he should! Naruto's his! Well, Thanks and keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Heidi on July 05, 2006
    ok here goes hun ---So far Ive only read 1st chapter but like what is happening here
    its a good way to start story .Carry on ok
    I hope it has a happy ending awwwwwwwwwwww

    Seeya

    Luv ya H xx
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  • From ANON - rose on June 21, 2006
    That was amazing! Very well written. I can totally understand what you meant by how when ya proofreead these sorts of scenes it sounds kinda funny. But to the reader, in this case me your writing was wonderful. I loved your choice of description and the way you set it all out.
    I can't wait to see where you're going with this.
    I hope it works out for sasuke and naruto...ohh this is so interesting.
    can't wait to read the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - rose on June 21, 2006
    welp, if you havent already been informed...i'vealways heard yondaime referred to as Arashi being his name, if that helps:)
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  • From ANON - rose on June 21, 2006
    This chapter as well as the others so far have been wonderfull! I love how you are pulling off every one's personalities! Also, i really liked the end of this chapter how Naruto and Sasuke were sparing and how it led to naruto pinning him there for of course he won and sasuke still doesn't say "i give" lol. But it was so cute where it led and how naruto was in pain because of the head ach and the whole thing i just pictured it was beautiful! to preshus!
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  • From ANON - wendyghost on June 17, 2006
    it was great!
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  • From ANON - K_Sora on June 04, 2006
    wow. i really like the story. i've read it all in one sitting so i'm just going to review the whole thing here. i really like that fact that you start the fic of with another relationship. with a lot of fic's there's just the straight jump to yaoi and there's nothing wrong with that, but i like to be able to see how Naruto tries to have a normal relationship. the only thing is that Ino was the last person i expected XD. i love the build up to Naruto and Sasuke's relationship and am really interested in what's going on with the headaches. i also really like that you've added a small story with what's going on between Sakura and Shikamaru. oh and by the way i loved the last scene *drools* can't wait to find out what happens next!!!!!! update soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz >
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  • From ANON - rei on June 03, 2006
    you had better continue!!!!
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  • From ANON - mE on June 02, 2006
    What do you mean 'you tried'?! That was sooooo good.. I was just drooling the whole time.. This is so good and I'm excited the whole time!! I can't wait for the climax! :D luv ya for this! This is the best in a long time :D
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