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Reviews for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

By : Kalariona
  • From ANON - Eiennoren on November 16, 2006
    too lazy to login, nyan!
    This is a great story! Very engaging! That chest definitely has a very interesting story I am sure... connected to Yondaime's memory's perhaps? it seems very likely... but then I am a devious creature too..nyan! Such hot scenes between naru and sasuke...nyan! me wants more!!!
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  • From ANON - mE on November 12, 2006
    Finally!! :D I've been waiting for ages! I can't wait what fappens next and how sasukes and narutos relationship will develop. I feel sorry for ino, but no one should betray their own heart, not even naruto! :D when sasuke and naruto get closer so that everyone can notice, ino and neji could support each others lost loves or someting ;D But thank u again for the new great chapter!! Kiip up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - terranigma11 on November 12, 2006
    How could you bump this without even updating it?! You are so cruel...sniffs...
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  • From ANON - MeMe on October 16, 2006
    OMG i love it.
    hahahaha she is going to find out isn't she.
    anyway thanks for update.
    i hope you update fast.
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  • From ANON - MeMe on October 16, 2006
    thanks for updating ^^
    i love it.
    but you are going to put suske and naruto together right?
    anyway i enjoyed it^^
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  • From ANON - Nomme de Plume on September 14, 2006
    omg, i want more! and since i stumbled across this rather late in the game, i'll tell you i did notice the chest in an early chapter, and am still waiting to be told what it is! ^___~ this is such a good story, what with all the relationships, the confusion, the many pretty boys that want to jump naruto... yeah. keep it up and update! please? ^____^
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  • From ANON - Nuriel on September 12, 2006
    I hadn't checked on your story in a while. I was pleased to see an update. I can't wait to see what comes next. It will be interesting to see what happens between Naruto and Ino. He just needs to stop being so stubborn, and tell her before she finds out some other way. Anyway, please update soon. I'm eager to find out the cause of Naruto's headaches. :)
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  • From nocturne on September 10, 2006
    ...wow. I really like this! XD I can't wait for more!

    is there any possible way you could let me know when it's updated?
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  • From ANON - lazykunoichi on August 30, 2006
    Oh you really need to keep this one going my dear!
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  • From ANON - lazykunoichi on August 30, 2006
    Oh you really need to keep this one going my dear!
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  • From ANON - gonrie on August 25, 2006
    I only have a few words for you... SASUKE AND NARUTO ARE JUST TOO HOT. Fuck, that story is wonderful! More sex!
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  • From dawnoftwilight on August 23, 2006
    wow, that's alot of chapters you wrote so i'm positive you can finish this fic and i can't wait for the next chapter because the chapters were so good well the first one was sorta bumpy but the second past though smoothy well it kida blew me away, the fic is freakin' awsome.
    poor Naruto, in the middle of all crites of being wanted by 5 people whitch is a lot of competition too well now i understand the title real well.
    keep up the good work cause we all love your work an will be rootin' for ya too so go on out there and make us proud and i'm sure you will too.
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  • From ANON - Luthe_N on August 23, 2006
    I like this story, I never really thought of a shika/saku pairing before but it's kinda cute. But I feel the need to correct your japanese usage here. You're calling naruto and neji 'nee-chan' or 'nee-san' which means your calling them 'older sister'. If you're trying for the guy version of that it's 'nii-san' or more politely 'onii-san'. Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what happens next in this story.
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  • From ANON - shishio on August 21, 2006
    No doubt that this story will be good. However, I've no intention of continuing, not after the first chapter. You've got something wrong, and I've heard that it goes on through the story, for how many chapters, I'm not sure.

    The honorifics. Also, Hinata's last name, in the first chapter, the first occurance you spelled it Huuga, it's Hyuuga, note the y.

    Ok, now for the honorifics. Adding '-san' to the end is the equivalent to Ms., Mrs., and Mr., and adding '-chan' to the end is showing respect to those younger than you, or of the same age, normally used for a woman that a man has fallen in love with, or any ol' woman, animals, or children. The honorific '-kun' is used for males that a woman has falled in love with, or just any ol' man. Neither of these means that you are talking about a person with familiarity. Note that Naruto, in the Anime, never adds any honorific to a person's name, aside from his teachers, which he uses '-sensei' and Sakura, with whom he uses '-chan'. This states that Sakura is the only person that he treats with respect. Taking away the honorific is like taking away the respect to a person's name, either that, or you're talking to them with familiarity. So, when Naruto talks to the others with out the honorific he's talking in a familiar way, not with unfamiliarity.
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  • From ANON - xpyne on August 21, 2006
    seems like there's a character limit, so i'll post my long-ass review in parts:
    naru-chan is a sweetheart
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