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Reviews for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

By : Kalariona
  • From ANON - evvy on December 13, 2004
    I cant wait for the next chapter! That was just a TEASE!
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  • From ANON - ochiba on December 13, 2004
    I like where this is going, and I'm looking forward to more. You used 'obfuscated' incorrectly... (it's a verb) or was that the joke? "Next time I'll obfuscate." or the like would be more appropriate. Anyway, I'm happy to see some NaruIno friendship in the making, and delighted that this will be a SasuNaru fic in the end, but pretty please don't rush these boys together with a sudden access of the dreaded "I love you; let's boink" whathaveyou that is prevalent in so many SasuNaru fics x_x Take your time like you're doing already. This has such the potential to be a kick ass amazing fic, especially with it's already fabulicious start. Thanks for the read.
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  • From ANON - Dreamers on December 12, 2004
    I'm interested to see how this story will continue
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  • From ANON - lillilly on December 12, 2004
    Please continue, I like the way this story is going. I would never had thought to put ino & naruto together as friends. Oh and their banter is priceless, hummm saskue jelouse, I like, I like!
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  • From ANON - Mimiruchan on December 12, 2004
    ^__^ Oh the Sasuke we all love is here! Update soon!
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  • From ANON - Base on December 12, 2004
    Great story those I don't like Naruto/Sasuke, maybe you can make it a Ino/Naruto/Ssuke Three-way
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  • From Ghostninja85 on December 12, 2004
    Interesting chapter.

    I personally don't like either Sakura or Ino. Ino especially is a rather flat character, and Sakura is really annoying.

    I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Don't worry about the time it takes to update. I know how hard that can be, Just make sure it's up as soon as possible!
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  • From ANON - sparrow9 on December 12, 2004
    I so glad you are continuing this, its such a cute story. I would never flame a auther who dosn't like a charater if I didn't like it I wouldn't read it. keep up the doog work
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  • From ANON - Yami Jay on December 12, 2004
    *laughs* Sasuke is jealous!!! Good chapter!
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  • From ANON - ohmylord on December 10, 2004
    i think that your story's great. the whole concept is pretty unique too. And i agree with you, Naruto and Sasuke should TOTALLY be together. So continue?

    Oh, and the misspelt words? there were some, but it weren't those GLARING ones. So chill. No big problem. I've forgotten about them after i finished the chap. So yeah..

    and one last thing, the title is very good. It's quite rare to find those. I'm ashamed to say this, but its the title that convinced me to read it and not exactly ur summary. So a job well done (its most definately a compliment!)
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  • From ANON - ohmylord on December 10, 2004
    i think that your story's great. the whole concept is pretty unique too. And i agree with you, Naruto and Sasuke should be together. So continue?

    Oh, and the misspelt words? there were some, but it weren't those GLARING ones. So chill. No big problem. I've forgotten about them after i finished the chap. So yeah..
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  • From ANON - koorinohitomi on November 29, 2004
    Hmm, I like it! I think it is definitely worth of a sequal, so please continue.
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on November 29, 2004
    Interesting start. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please continue.
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  • From ANON - clowangel on November 28, 2004
    So far, to me, it doesnt matter who gets paired up even though Im a Naruto/Sasuke fan. ^^ Because right now, from what I've just read, I think an Ino/Naruto pairing would do nicely too since you wrote it so well. I really cant wait for more chapters! It's great!
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  • From ANON - hino on November 28, 2004
    great story! i love it! more please!...glad naruto has made a friend ^^

    hino
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