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Reviews for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

By : Kalariona
  • From ANON - Scottishfae on January 23, 2005
    Great chapter! I liked the cleverness of the Kyuubi and his trick on Ino. It was a nice detail and it fits with his personality. As for Gaara's presence in the story, I myself, love Gaara, he's one of my favorite characters and I would love to see him in here. But as its going the story seems to be falling in nicely together and developing awesome, even without my beloved Gaara. I hope you update soon, it's awesome!

    Until Next Time...

    Sfae
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  • From ANON - Dementa on January 18, 2005
    Wee! I really like this story! Keep it up! Please tell me that Ino finds out about Kyuubi... she isn't going to ditch him is she? That'd be so mean! But anyway, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - AFF on January 16, 2005
    chapter one review.

    i thought these two interacted quite nicely ^_^ (Ino and Naruto)
    'if you love somebody, let them free.' hah, sakura should think about this. and while she's at it, move on to someone like.. lee. ^^;;; j/k

    poor hinata, naruto is so dense. >.>
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  • From on January 13, 2005
    this is such a unique and great story! i love it. post the next one soon.
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  • From ANON - jazzy on January 12, 2005
    That is so not nice! I can't beleive you'de leave us hanging in such a cool moment like that.
    when I first began reading this story all I could think was not to bad, its actually pretty nice and then bam! you cut it off. I hope you update soon.

    As for the headaches I think you should explore more the effect some headaches have, like nausea, dizziness and can cause lights to be really very bright or make you vision all wonky, funny.

    It's cool what you have going on with Ino and then Sasuke, I like the oblivious but inlove slowly driving him mad for Naruto love is a cool angle. (you're probably not going for driving him mad kind of love are you?) Still it's a very nice beginning and a slow build is often the better way to go in a story it makes it very obsorbing.

    So please, please update soon!

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  • From ANON - tsu on January 12, 2005
    GARGH! Nice, non-annoying Ino is definately refreshing! CAn't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - spadaken on January 11, 2005
    yo! nice story, though i'm not a yaoi reader, anyways, abiyt ino's jutsu in japanese, i think it's called shintenshin no jutsu. you can also find it in either www.narutofan.com or www.narutochuushin.com. well, keep up the good writing, now i'm off to kick some sound nins, ja!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 10, 2005
    Weee, a die-hard SasuNaru and GaaNaru reader enjoyed the first chapter! You're doing a great job at making Ino like a real person and not a guy-obessing maniac. XD
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  • From ANON - jai on January 10, 2005
    I like this fic! It's rare to find fics where we find other characters being friends with Naruto, and it's really nice to see. (And we get Sasuke jealous and stuff, which is a plus.) I also like the minor (?) plot thread of Naruto's headaches, I think I might see where it's headed, so I'm curious to see if it's what I thought it was. :)
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  • From ANON - clowangel on January 10, 2005
    Yes! Another chapter! And wow, does Sasuke sound posessive or what? hahaha!
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  • From ANON - mystik on January 10, 2005
    I really like the story so far. It's nice that Naruto has Ino as a friend. It's also fun watching Sasuke be jelaous. I can't wait to find out what's wrong with Naruto. By the way, Ino's techinique in japanese is Shintenshi no jutsu.
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  • From ANON - Yami Jay on January 09, 2005
    She's trying to help... Well, it's fun to see Ino in another way.
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  • From ANON - Hitomi No Ryu on January 09, 2005
    Ino, watch out for floating ramen and a certain nine-tailed animal when you're in Naruto's head!! I wonder what Sasuke's going to do? UPDATE SOON!!
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on January 09, 2005
    Hmmm. Do the rookie 9 know about the kyuubi in this fic? I forgot. If not, then Ino is in for an... interesting surprise.

    I like how Sasuke is reacting to Naruto's new relationship. Possessive Sasuke is hot. lol.

    Update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - kat8cha on January 09, 2005
    I am sooo enjoying this! Sasuke being jealous is one of my favorites looks on the poor boy. I love what you've done with Ino and Sakura, I hate the pink bitch but Ino's really sweet. I really hope Ino can help poor Naru-chan w/ his headaches. More soon I hope?
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