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Reviews for An Interwoven Web Of Deceit

By : Kalariona
  • From ANON - izumi on March 14, 2005
    yeeeehhhhaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!11 finally!!! some sasunaru action.. not that i hate ino in this fic.. muaahh!! i love you!! ^^
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  • From ANON - Washi on March 14, 2005
    I'm really looking forwards to reading the next chapter, I assure you ^_^! I'm becoming increasingly curious. I hope the next chapter comes soon! ^_^
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  • From yamijay on March 13, 2005
    Ino interrupted something *snickers*
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on March 13, 2005
    So if it isn't the Kyuubi then what is causing these headaches? It ain't a tumor is it, cause wouldn't Neji be able to see it. I mean Charaka is the energy of the body, so wouldn't it divert the flows in some way?

    hmm. Keep up the good work. coolsa.
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  • From ANON - Sasu/Naru Fangirl on March 13, 2005
    Oh, oh, I just remembered something! I forgot to mention this before, so I'll say it now. (Not that I think you'll mind getting another review, eh? ~.^) Okay, ahem. NEways... You have been using the honorifics the wrong way. -Sama goes with someone older than you that demands respect, -San is used politely with acquaintances and friends, -Kun is used by girls talking to guys, and -Chan is used between girls, really close friends, or if you're talking to someone younger than you, like a little kid. Oh, and let's not forget the no honorific, that's only used by really, really close friends, lovers, girlfriend-boyfriend, that kind of thing.
    No disrespect is intended, of course, because by now I'm practically worshipping the ground you walk on for writing this great story! (I sound all stalker-y, don't I? Heh, didn't mean to! ^-^") NEways, this is really long, so LATERS! Oh, and update SOON!!
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  • From ANON - Sasu/Naru Fangirl on March 13, 2005
    Please update soon! It's awesome so far! I hope you keep it up.
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  • From ANON - ghostninja85 on March 13, 2005
    This chapter was interesting. It looks like we're getting closer to what's really bothering Naruto, and the SasuNaru hints are starting to grow.

    Please update as soon as you can. I'm looking forward to Ino's conversation with Tsunade.
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  • From ANON - Michiru on March 13, 2005
    Hm. Well, you may not be happy with it, but I am. :p Sasuke/Naruto interaction = good. I look forward to the next chapter!!
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  • From ANON - Jenny on March 13, 2005
    I loved the 8th chap.. the moment between Sasuke and Naruto.. I had goose pomps.. :DD Thou nothing happened, but still..very exciting
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  • From ANON - sukara on March 13, 2005
    It's an okay chapter, I was hoping for a lil more Sasu/Nari action :Squeal: But I guess that can wait in the next chapter and or later chapters...just make it come soon!!!! Pwease? ^_^ keep up the good work!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 03, 2005
    Im really starting to like the story,plz continue.
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  • From ANON - Iris on March 01, 2005
    Yeah progress between Saske and Naruto. I like Ino though so it will be sad if she gets hurt... but ur the writer! So on with the story what are these headaches and when will Saske and Naruto wake up and realize they are digging each other?!?!?!?! Please don't leave me hanging update pretty please.. with cherries and all that ....:)
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  • From ANON - Charles on March 01, 2005
    Intresting aspecton the relationship and im curious to see what you do with the whole headache aspect goes. But i do like the idea of the naruto/ino aspect finally give him some who cares for him and woulde give him every thing wheter it be her or Hinita by why i just wanna ask is the obsession with the whole naru/sasuke thing. I mean as rivals they r great but.. any way love your story and cant wait to see how it comes out.
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  • From ANON - clowangel on February 28, 2005
    Poor Hinata, Sasuke, and Neji-sama. ;-; Heh, seems like Neji-sama has a bit of a crush too eh? ^^ I love NejiNaru, so is there a chance you can write a NejiNaru fanfic?

    Oh, and I'd love an Alternate Ending for InoNaru. Truth be told, I've never read the pairing and yours is my first but it sounds really interesting and you're an excellent writer.
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  • From ANON - jai on February 27, 2005
    Love this story, great to see an update! It's interesting.. damn, you made me like NaruIno, and I was kinda hoping he reciprocated her feelings.. but Naruto's his own person. I look forward to seeing where you take this fic.
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