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Reviews for Betrayed

By : Klepto
  • From on September 07, 2008
    (sniff) so sad (sniff) (sniff)
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  • From antagonist on August 10, 2006
    O_O ... damn. I don't know what to say... I wish you'd expand... or... write an actual story out of that... but... I have a feeling you won't. That was wonderfully poetic though. A little over-dramatic considering it's Stoic Sasuke's PoV.. but hey... love does crazy things to people.
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  • From ANON - Emily Saeke on June 24, 2005
    Awww....poor poooooooooor Sasuke!!!!! Now keep writing please, ish very good so far yesh!
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  • From ANON - Cacique on May 12, 2005
    ooh! that's one ive never read before... i like though, very unexpected. i love your Naruto drabbles! you should do a series of them... like themed or something...yah well keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Van on March 20, 2005
    Please continue!!!!!!! I never read a story with the teacher and Naruto !!!!!! Make that bastard jelous!!! PLease this story is wicked!!!
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  • From ANON - hogo-chan on December 19, 2004
    GAH! please promise me this isnt a one-shot!!! poor sasuke!!! nooooooooooo! please update!!!
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  • From ANON - lillilly on December 06, 2004
    Good story, but how did this happen? Are sasu and naru really together? How did it come that iruka and naru are together like this? I hope you dont stop here, there is so much left hanging!
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  • From ANON - FreaK on November 23, 2004
    WAAI XD~

    way to short! make ~moooooooore~ ._. *sniff*
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  • From ANON - Hitomi on November 21, 2004
    Very good for a four in the morning drabble.
    ^.~
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  • From ANON - Yum on November 21, 2004
    Ugh bizare.. It seems to me nearly impossible for Naruto to betray someone in his right state of mind...but like someone had said impossible is not english so...
    I think It's too short you must continue with longer chapters!!^^ pretty please because I really like this short chapter? oneshot? how call it? nevermind just know that it was good!!^^
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