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From ANON - tia on January 29, 2006
that was great. it ws the second greatest lemon i've ever read.
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From ANON - anon on April 28, 2005
Really bizzare,reads like it was written by someone who giggles alot,Itachi was vocally challenged,I do not know...maybe english is a second or third language so I will say nice shot man,Uchiha always.
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From ANON - blisblop on March 02, 2005
I liked the use of toys,the realistic interplay between them,well as far as I can tell,there was care taken not to destroy the bottom and Sasuke didn,t cave immediatly.What other men had he Fucked?that was random.I know guys are not fuck machines controlled by their postates no matter what the situation.But I am not a gay male but I think bros are a turn off for most people related to them.but as we know this site is for fun web not butt,well yeah but,but..stop that,"deeper"(thanks for those clear instructions ,eh?.I can not stand it any longer.Ok.Here goes Guys take ages in the bath room to #2 and keep alot reading materials in there , so what I want to know is,well,do things feel as good coming out as going in? It(postate) isn't too near the enterance (or exit,heh or basement considering the mouth is above it,snort)ok,for real, so maybe it isn't tight back there so it doesn't help or hurt the voiding process.Ya?Then why does it take so long,what is up Ancient secret religion?Just see your dick and gotta say "hi",serious turn on and you must deal,like those who have come before you,with funny noises and strangeness.God,maybe it really,really hurts and you snap your fingers at childbirth?Funny I never asked any male friEnds(whatever)about this,It isn't a real pressing issue for me, per say,and I haven't slept in 58 hours,I'm grtting a bit spaced...ok alot,just had my first halucination ,it involved our very small dog turning into a gerbil and of course we do not have either,ponders",out of milk too."I remembered to ask YOU the author though cause maybe that will tempt you back where you belong,chained to your damn computer for MY pleasure....hmmf,am I being provocative in any manner here?Are you gonna respond..I mean I have tried alot of different angels here,angles here!(sorry) to get a responce and I hope it works,it may not,you could be kidnapped or something..thats horrible!and unless its Itachi move to the nearest exit..ya know.I have had sex with a gay friend cause we where toasted but I thought ,well ya know I never thought of the whole postate situation at all.That was probably a mistake on my hand...bra ha ha ha ..gotta go before someone tells*them* I am here, doing this and Looking into guys eyes and energy levels as they...well kinda sidle up to the bathroom door,casual like,so as not to startle it with wild fears about what this stranger,this man intends on doing in there...and is he,well.. getting off on it,more than is normal anyway.I really should go, no ,really,I gotta read more and if I do not leave I will never be able to come back ,to see if you have solved this surprisingly..hey,lets face it Damn suspiciously silent mystery/conspiracy/they allstick to- gether anyway...hahahah..I am not sexist,men are all different,except ..I mean with the mouth on 10 year old boys ,or to be fair,the scence of humor the kids they laugh at/with you would think they would spill the info evey chance they got to say it and pass out laughing(every 6 minutes)because they where saying those dirty words fun fun fun,,BUT,what if that is part of the plan,the minute they go to sqeal they,sqeal,just laughing their little asses off and no one,who is talking,can catch a word of it and all is safe...uhhuh.,..in a way,jeeze trying to write and make sence is taxing,butt surprisingly amusing....so yah this weird magazine fueled conspiracy.nay( deep mystery?) surrounding men...jeez..,well not that way,well, some that way,alot if you include women who are just not that bloody shy and just wanna....hey,Heh,elbow,elbow,thats why there is yoai..Heh,HEh.Hmmm......isn't it?Maybe I am wrong,hell maybe delutional (Seeing things,ya know!that are not there,Like updates,HINTl!),after all I am asking you,the writer of fan fics for medical advice and you have been pretty quiet so far,I am doing all the talking,please,How have you been?Sunny smile!.. ..... . I hear nothing from you,my smile falters(,hey I am not Naruto) ..That kidnapping must have been rough on you.confusing even.NodS vehemently,Satisfied that something had been addressed. " Haaaa "sighs.Looks around your space,ya ,You,fellow reveiwer,I see you have some Mags,Hmmm,Juxtapose..Ok..I lower my voice and and talking without moving my lips much ask you to give me directions to,no! noT the library (smartass),that other magazine Bonanza zone,you Know, Don"t make me say It...ahhh phooey,you're acting like I am not there.Well Its been a real,to be honest strange experiance for me,YOU too I bet,thought I'd be reading brain candy, now here I am lost in your neighbourhood.Scary isn't it,I for one will be back. If I leave that is...I just Gotta know. And No I do not know why i need it,it is a burning question I got/have facing that lonely empty box with no reveiw to smoothly yet graciously slide your way.I mean why has it been hidden,g spot I knew,those diagrams in tampon boxes and in sex Ed.looked more like barbienthan me,no clit,no different and weidly named parts of the tunnel,tight,that secrete an awesomely complex output of different secretion al organtype things up and down the walls of the vagina,there are different textures,it changes shape and deepth.Just..really fun thing to have and I got pictues of overies,the "real"reason for sex,snort.and those mothers loomed over barbies clean,smooth,no,featurless sex like pro wreastlers hands,huge clawed like they meant business and would rip and render anything that was less then gruesomly serious about sexual intercourse(boys explode with laughter,it was close enough to potty jokes,underwear covered them.Get ME?It is sad eh?I want knowledge baby or I just can't do my best creatively.All praise. Am I alone with this or am I mearly the brave pioneer,hell I could be patheticly ignorant and no one says anything because even a kid knows that. Tired,postates,lots of damn happy ones...tired If,if the writer doesn't post in a couple weeks could someone else*(who isn't guessing) please explain?THank you for your time,hell reveiw the damn thing,that would be a hoot,if anyone wishes...
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From ANON - blisblop on March 02, 2005
I liked the use of toys,the realistic interplay between them,well as far as I can tell,there was care taken not to destroy the bottom and Sasuke didn,t cave immediatly.What other men had he Fucked?that was random.I know guys are not fuck machines controlled by their postates no matter what the situation.But I am not a gay male but I think bros are a turn off for most people related to them.but as we know this site is for fun web not butt,well yeah but,but..stop that,"deeper"(thanks for those clear instructions ,eh?.I can not stand it any longer.Ok.Here goes Guys take ages in the bath room to #2 and keep alot reading materials in there , so what I want to know is,well,do things feel as good coming out as going in? It(postate) isn't too near the enterance (or exit,heh or basement considering the mouth is above it,snort)ok,for real, so maybe it isn't tight back there so it doesn't help or hurt the voiding process.Ya?Then why does it take so long,what is up Ancient secret religion?Just see your dick and gotta say "hi",serious turn on and you must deal,like those who have come before you,with funny noises and strangeness.God,maybe it really,really hurts and you snap your fingers at childbirth?Funny I never asked any male friEnds(whatever)about this,It isn't a real pressing issue for me, per say,and I haven't slept in 58 hours,I'm grtting a bit spaced...ok alot,just had my first halucination ,it involved our very small dog turning into a gerbil and of course we do not have either,ponders",out of milk too."I remembered to ask YOU the author though cause maybe that will tempt you back where you belong,chained to your damn computer for MY pleasure....hmmf,am I being provocative in any manner here?Are you gonna respond..I mean I have tried alot of different angels here,angles here!(sorry) to get a responce and I hope it works,it may not,you could be kidnapped or something..thats horrible!and unless its Itachi move to the nearest exit..ya know.I have had sex with a gay friend cause we where toasted but I thought ,well ya know I never thought of the whole postate situation at all.That was probably a mistake on my hand...bra ha ha ha ..gotta go before someone tells*them* I am here, doing this and Looking into guys eyes and energy levels as they...well kinda sidle up to the bathroom door,casual like,so as not to startle it with wild fears about what this stranger,this man intends on doing in there...and is he,well.. getting off on it,more than is normal anyway.I really should go, no ,really,I gotta read more and if I do not leave I will never be able to come back ,to see if you have solved this surprisingly..hey,lets face it Damn suspiciously silent mystery/conspiracy/they allstick to- gether anyway...hahahah..I am not sexist,men are all different,except ..I mean with the mouth on 10 year old boys ,or to be fair,the scence of humor the kids they laugh at/with you would think they would spill the info evey chance they got to say it and pass out laughing(every 6 minutes)because they where saying those dirty words fun fun fun,,BUT,what if that is part of the plan,the minute they go to sqeal they,sqeal,just laughing their little asses off and no one,who is talking,can catch a word of it and all is safe...uhhuh.,..in a way,jeeze trying to write and make sence is taxing,butt surprisingly amusing....so yah this weird magazine fueled conspiracy.nay( deep mystery?) surrounding men...jeez..,well not that way,well, some that way,alot if you include women who are just not that bloody shy and just wanna....hey,Heh,elbow,elbow,thats why there is yoai..Heh,HEh.Hmmm......isn't it?Maybe I am wrong,hell maybe delutional (Seeing things,ya know!that are not there,Like updates,HINTl!),after all I am asking you,the writer of fan fics for medical advice and you have been pretty quiet so far,I am doing all the talking,please,How have you been?Sunny smile!.. ..... . I hear nothing from you,my smile falters(,hey I am not Naruto) ..That kidnapping must have been rough on you.confusing even.NodS vehemently,Satisfied that something had been addressed. " Haaaa "sighs.Looks around your space,ya ,You,fellow reveiwer,I see you have some Mags,Hmmm,Juxtapose..Ok..I lower my voice and and talking without moving my lips much ask you to give me directions to,no! noT the library (smartass),that other magazine Bonanza zone,you Know, Don"t make me say It...ahhh phooey,you're acting like I am not there.Well Its been a real,to be honest strange experiance for me,YOU too I bet,thought I'd be reading brain candy, now here I am lost in your neighbourhood.Scary isn't it,I for one will be back. If I leave that is...I just Gotta know. And No I do not know why i need it,it is a burning question I got/have facing that lonely empty box with no reveiw to smoothly yet graciously slide your way.I mean why has it been hidden,g spot I knew,those diagrams in tampon boxes and in sex Ed.looked more like barbienthan me,no clit,no different and weidly named parts of the tunnel,tight,that secrete an awesomely complex output of different secretion al organtype things up and down the walls of the vagina,there are different textures,it changes shape and deepth.Just..really fun thing to have and I got pictues of overies,the "real"reason for sex,snort.and those mothers loomed over barbies clean,smooth,no,featurless sex like pro wreastlers hands,huge clawed like they meant business and would rip and render anything that was less then gruesomly serious about sexual intercourse(boys explode with laughter,it was close enough to potty jokes,underwear covered them.Get ME?It is sad eh?I want knowledge baby or I just can't do my best creatively.All praise. Am I alone with this or am I mearly the brave pioneer,hell I could be patheticly ignorant and no one says anything because even a kid knows that. Tired,postates,lots of damn happy ones...tired If,if the writer doesn't post in a couple weeks could someone else*(who isn't guessing) please explain?THank you for your time,hell reveiw the damn thing,that would be a hoot,if anyone wishes...
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