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Reviews for Through the Window

By : Jiro
  • From animeaddict666 on January 30, 2008
    That was extremely hot. Seriously. The plots a little unoriginal, but you wrote it very well, especially the first chapter that was talking about the mission and their rivalry. Great job. I truly enjoyed this.
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  • From saint2sinners on April 20, 2007
    Please please please tell me you're continueing this. i loved it.
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  • From kitsuko999 on March 19, 2007
    You did this without a Beta?! It's frickin' AWESOME the way it is!!! Your writing is soooo good and so detailed! It really is amazing and I'm happy to read your work! I hope you write and post the next chapter to this up soon because it is GOOD!!! ^_^
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  • From flooblebloo on February 19, 2007
    Please don't think this is horrible and stop updating, because it's absolutely NOT. The story's well-written, the descriptions are hot, and I really, really want to see what Sasuke's going to do next. Update soon!
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  • From ValkyrieNiennaHelyanwe on December 18, 2006
    you make it sound like that was absolutley horrid. well it wasnt. trust me, there are worse, a chunk of em on this site. hehe. continue! and if you do make it a different pairing later on, gaaranaruto not neji, he sucks.
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  • From ANON - animehead on November 20, 2006
    this is great, you keep saying you don't think it is good, but it really is...please continue
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  • From ANON - ann dragera on November 20, 2006
    honestly, in my opinion, it was fine as it was. If, and i mean if, there were any mistakes - there were very few.

    i truely can't wait for chapter 3! (i hope there will be a chapter 3) i just love how you turned the situations around (honestly, i saw naru walking in on sasu from the beginning). but i still love it!
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  • From ANON - Sas-uke on November 20, 2006
    I remember reading this fiction aaaaaaages ago. But it's always nice to see an author return to an otherwise abandoned work. Regardless of your own disappointment with this chapter, I give a thumbs up. Hot tamales.
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  • From ANON - "Chikako" on November 19, 2006
    ...wow.
    I mean, wow.
    You should really continue this. -Giggles- Poor Sasuke. x3
    But it was incredibly hot. Please continue! I want to know what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Hana-chan on November 19, 2006
    I really like the plot, but there's some things that could be made for the better.
    Oranges usually go bad after three weeks, and the juice is very sticky O_
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  • From ANON - mikoto on November 19, 2006
    just wow... jeeze need tissue, danm nosebleeds.. btw loved it!!
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  • From ANON - Karmegas on November 19, 2006
    and the beat goes on. update soon please.
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  • From ANON - Karmegas on November 19, 2006
    You should continue. This is interesting. Update soon plz

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  • From ANON - Sam on November 19, 2006
    that was hawt! is there more to come! if soo i really~ can't wait! ^.^
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  • From ANON - Stank You on November 19, 2006
    Please, please update as soon as possible. Damn you and your cliffhanger.
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