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Reviews for Through the Window

By : Jiro
  • From ANON - ranoshi_ai on November 18, 2004
    i loved it^^. for your first time, this is written like some of the more experienced writers and even better than some of them. truly amazing and thorough. i hope that you continue to write more sasunaru and maybe even make an off shoot from this in a sequel or , dare we dream, a series^-^ spawning from this?
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  • From ANON - Emily on November 18, 2004
    HeHe. I liked it! Don't put yourself down. That was great writing, in my opinion. I think more chapters would be great.
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  • From ANON - WoW on November 17, 2004
    This is your first lemon fic? Are you sure? B/c it was REALLy well written! You must write more! I demand that you write more! There just isn't enough decently written Naruto/Sasuke lemon fics out there. And please by all means make this a chapter fic! I still can't belive this is your first lemon fic!
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  • From ANON - Hawk on November 17, 2004
    That wasn't terrible at all, although there were a few incontinuities they were forgivable as I don't think most people would notice. Either way, I think you should in fact continue it, it's not as bad as you seem to think it is! Keep up the good work!

    ~Hawk
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  • From ANON - Fuujin on November 17, 2004
    -Flails about madly.- MULTICHAPTERS, YES. I WANT MORE. x333333 It was awesome. Please continue. xD
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  • From ANON - yuya on November 16, 2004
    Your fanfiction is really good!!! Really!!!! Please do another!! with Naruto and Sasuke!! A good SasuNaru and not just a solo!! I think you can do that !!!!! And it'll be great!!!!! kiss and good luck

    PS: I'm french so I can't writte a lot of word in english, sorry^^ but I understand !!!!
    But I can tell you that I LOVE your work!! :p
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  • From ANON - angel of corruption on November 15, 2004
    that was very, very yummy. i'd love to see more and i'll definitely read it if you write it. practice is always a good thing. ^_~
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  • From ANON - hyperactivator on November 15, 2004
    More!

    That made my day. If you don't contiue I will be disapointed.
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  • From ANON - lo on November 15, 2004
    THat was Hot and it rocked SO hard. It is a great begoning for more, ohh I hope there will be more this was sooooo good. Keep up the good work.
    lo
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  • From ANON - Michiru on November 15, 2004
    More please. Soon. *_*;
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  • From ANON - Juli on November 15, 2004
    Your first attempt at erotica and it's un-beta'd?! Wow, that's all I can say. You've impressed me beyond words. Your descriptions and word usage were excellent! I enjoyed this so, so much. If you turned this into a chaptered piece, I could guarantee that I'd be here to read it (and comment like crazy)! Great work, and I hope we all get to see more of your wonderful writing.
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  • From ANON - Tsukineko9 on November 15, 2004
    Oh my god I LOVE this!!!! Continue it please if you can!!! It's wonderfully done!!! ^_____________^
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  • From ANON - MeLaiya on November 15, 2004
    Oh I so want more, um you are going to update right?!?!?!?!?!?! I hope so I really want to know whats going to happen after this if anything at all.
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  • From ANON - Caro8 on November 15, 2004
    Naughty Naughty Sasuke ::shakes finger at him::

    I have one request.......continue it!!!!
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  • From ANON - dancing-neko-chan on November 14, 2004
    wow, this was really great. very good for your first erotica. keep writing, i'd very much like to see more from you. now if you excuse me, i have to go and read it again. ^_^
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